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My School Life · 审题拆解 + 参考范文 + 金句仿写

80 词左右审题拆解参考范文金句仿写词汇积累

一、原题呈现

ORIGINAL TASK · 题目 + 表格要点 + 要求

题 初中生活已经开始，近日学校英语报正在举行题为 “My School Life” 的征文活动。请根据表格内容，用英语写一篇短文，向校报投稿。

表 表格要点（4 项，都要写到）：
· school：small but clean；a good place to …
· subjects：like ... best；be good at …
· classmates / teachers：make friends；help … with …
· activities：play sports；…

求 要求：① 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；② 必须包含所有图表信息，并适当发挥；③ 词数 80 左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

析 三步结构：① 开头（已给出）：How time flies! The first term in the middle school has begun. → ② 主体：按表格 4 个要点各写 1-2 句（学校 → 科目 → 同学老师 → 活动）→ ③ 结尾：All in all, my school life is great and colorful.（总结全文）。

二、审题拆解

TASK ANALYSIS · 体裁 / 要点 / 注意 / 高分句型
体裁话题作文 · 校园生活第一人称 I · 一般现在时
对象学校英语报征文；语言自然亲切，多用 be / have / like / play 等基础动词，句子以简单句 + 少量 and / because 连接。
要点4 个必写
①school：small but clean；It is a good place to learn and play.（先写学校长什么样 + 是什么地方）。
②subjects：I like English best because ...；I am also good at math.（科目喜好 + 擅长，用 because 说理由）。
③classmates / teachers：The teachers are always ready to help us；I make friends with many classmates.（老师好 + 同学友善）。
④activities：read books in the library；play sports together after school.（课后活动，写 1-2 个）。
注意80 词左右不出现真实人名校名
提醒开头已给，直接接“My school is ...”；图表 4 项要点缺一不可，适当发挥但不能跑题；时态统一用一般现在时。
加分高分句型
句型① It is a good place to learn and play.（动词不定式作后置定语）；② I like English best because it's interesting and useful.（because 原因状语从句）；③ The teachers are always ready to help us with our studies.（be ready to do + help sb with sth）；④ All in all, ...（总结全文）。

三、参考范文精读

MODEL ESSAY · 词性标注 + 译文 + 亮点句型

范文约 90 词。绿色=动词、粉字=形容词、蓝字=副词、紫字=介词、橙字=连词；黄色高亮为高分亮点句型。

开头 · 已给出

S1How time flies! The first term in the middle school has begun.光阴似箭！初中第一学期已经开始了。

主体 · 学校 / 科目 / 同学老师 / 活动

S2My school is small but clean and it has a lot of tall trees and beautiful flowers.我的学校虽小但很干净，还有很多高大的树和美丽的花。

S3It is a good place to learn and play.这里是我们学习和玩耍的好地方。

S4We have eight classes every day and I like English best because it's interesting and useful.我们每天上八节课，我最喜欢英语，因为它有趣又有用。

S5By the way, I am also good at math.顺便说一下，我的数学也很好。

S6The teachers are very kind and they're always ready to help us with our studies.老师们很和蔼，总是随时帮助我们学习。

S7My classmates are nice and I make friends with many of them.我的同学们很友善，我和他们中的许多人交了朋友。

S8We sometimes read books in the library or play sports together after school.放学后我们有时在图书馆看书，或者一起做运动。

结尾 · 总结

S9All in all, my school life is great and colorful.总之，我的学校生活美好而多彩。

四、金句积累与仿写

WRITING BOOST · 黑色为框架，灰色底纹为可替换词

把范文里的好句子拆成"句型框架"，换词即用，考试直接套。

句 1 How time flies! The first term in the middle school has begun.

How time flies! The first term in the middle school has begun. / It is already my second year / a new term in this school.

仿写：How time flies! It is already my second year in this school. 光阴似箭！这已经是我在这所学校的第二年。

适用：任何校园生活 / 时间话题作文的开头（感叹句 + 现在完成时）。

句 2 My school is small but clean and it is a good place to learn and play.

My school is small but clean / big and modern and it is a good place to learn and play / study and make friends.

仿写：My school is big and modern and it is a good place to study and make friends. 我的学校又大又现代化，是学习和交友的好地方。

适用：描述学校 / 地点（形容词 + be a good place to do 不定式作后置定语）。

句 3 I like English best because it's interesting and useful.

I like English / math / art best because it's interesting and useful / easy and fun / close to life.

仿写：I like art best because it's easy and fun. 我最喜欢美术，因为它简单又有趣。

适用：科目喜好 + because 原因状语从句（几乎年年考）。

句 4 The teachers are always ready to help us with our studies.

The teachers / My classmates are always ready to help us with our studies / share ideas with us / answer our questions.

仿写：My classmates are always ready to share ideas with me. 我的同学总是乐于与我分享想法。

适用：描述老师 / 同学品质（be ready to do + help sb with sth）。

句 5 All in all, my school life is great and colorful.

All in all, my school life is great and colorful / busy but happy / full of fun.

仿写：All in all, my school life is busy but happy. 总之，我的学校生活忙碌而快乐。

适用：全文总结结尾（All in all / In a word 二选一）。

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