沪教牛津 · IELTS 4.0 · Unit 1 Encyclopaedias

作文仿写 · 句型魔法工具箱

写「我敬佩的人」不发愁!五步句型,把课文里的好句子装进你的作文,越写越自信。

五步句型地图 加分句型宝箱 范文大显身手
打开的知识百科全书,飞出画笔、小恐龙和音符的儿童插画

第一站 · 五步句型地图

作文像搭积木:身份 → 出生 → 才华 → 成就 → 评价,五步一个不落。

1
开头 · 身份总评
sb was a(n) + 身份名词(可并列)
sb is one of the greatest + 复数名词 in + 范围
课文例句Leonardo da Vinci was an Italian painter, inventor, musician, engineer and scientist.
2
出生与早年
sb was born in + 地点 + in + 年份
From an early age, sb showed + 名词
As he grew older, he learnt to do sth
课文例句Nie Er was born in Kunming, Yunnan province in 1912.
3
才华与品质
sb was extremely / unusually + 形容词
sb had a good ear / talent for + 名词
sb could do sth after doing sth
课文例句He could sing a song after hearing it just once or twice.
4
成就与贡献
sb is / was famous for doing sth
sth changed the way we think about + 名词
sb did + 数量 + during + 时间段
课文例句His paintings and inventions changed the way we think about art and science.
5
评价与升华
It is not surprising that people think of sb as + 身份 and call sb + 称号
课文例句People think of him as a national hero and call him the people's musician.

第二站 · 加分句型宝箱

它们也藏在课文里,用在你的作文里,立刻加分。

词源解释
The word "X" comes from + 语言 and means "..."
The word "dinosaur" comes from two Greek words, and it means "terrible lizard".
最……之一
one of + 序数词 / 最高级 + 复数名词
One of the first encyclopaedias was the Huanglan.
两者都
Both A and B + 复数动词
Both the Huanglan and Yongle Dadian included important pieces of writing.
同级比较
as + 形容词原级 + as
Some were as small as chickens, and others were as big as ten elephants.
定语从句
名词 + that + 从句
They help us learn about the world that we live in.

第三站 · 句型大显身手

范文示范(袁隆平):彩色背景表示句型步骤,灰色虚线的词可以换成你敬佩的人的信息;点击编号可单独看某一步。

A Person I Admire 范文 · Yuan Longping

Yuan Longping was a great Chinese scientist. He was one of the greatest agricultural scientists of the 20th century. He was born in Beijing in 1930. From an early age, he showed great interest in plants and farming. He was extremely hard-working, and he was talented in agriculture. As he grew older, he learnt to do many scientific experiments. Yuan Longping is famous for developing hybrid rice. His work changed the way we think about food production and helped feed billions of people. It is not surprising that people think of him as the Father of Hybrid Rice and call him a national hero. 万用结尾I think Yuan was a great person. We should learn from him and never give up hope when we face difficulties.

1 身份总评 2 出生早年 3 才华品质 4 成就贡献 5 评价升华 灰色 = 可替换的词
小朋友坐在书桌前写作文,头顶亮起灯泡的儿童插画
写作小贴士

开头亮出身份总评,中间按时间线写出生、才华与成就,结尾给评价。把这五步句型装进作文,你也能写出像课文一样精彩的英语作文!

第四站 · 词汇盒子

写作文时,从这里挑词语:名词介绍身份,形容词写品质,动词写经历。点一点,把你选中的词点亮!

名
身份名词
介绍人物是谁
用于第 1 步
scientist科学家 engineer工程师 painter画家 inventor发明家 musician音乐家 mathematician数学家 dancer舞蹈家 writer作家 doctor医生 teacher教师 astronaut宇航员 farmer农民
形
品质形容词
写写人物好在哪
用于第 3 步
hard-working勤奋的 talented有天赋的 intelligent聪明的 brave勇敢的 kind善良的 creative有创造力的 famous著名的 confident自信的 honest诚实的 warm-hearted热心的 patient有耐心的 modest谦虚的
动
常用动词
写写经历和成就
用于第 2、4 步
be born出生 show interest展现兴趣 grow up长大 learn to do学习做 study hard努力学习 invent发明 create创造 develop研发 write写作 compose作曲 help帮助 change改变
副
高级副词
加分项 · 让句子更出彩
全篇加分
enormously极其 fantastically极好地 greatly极大地 deeply深深地 widely广泛地 successfully成功地 bravely勇敢地 truly真正地 completely完全地 remarkably显著地 finally最终 patiently耐心地
介
常用介词短语
把短语用对,句子更地道
全篇通用
be born in出生于 grow up in在……长大 be interested in对……感兴趣 be famous for因……闻名 be good at擅长 at the age of在……岁时 in the countryside在乡下 from an early age从小 as well as以及 because of因为 later in life后来 all over the world全世界
国
国家形容词
介绍人物来自哪国
用于第 1 步
Chinese中国的 German德国的 English英国的 American美国的 French法国的 Japanese日本的 Russian俄国的 Italian意大利的 Spanish西班牙的 Canadian加拿大的 Australian澳大利亚的 Indian印度的

小任务:从六列里各挑 2—3 个词,试着拼出一句介绍你敬佩的人!

第五站 · 名人预测

考试可能考到的写人话题,按领域分好类;每个领域都配好了能直接套用的词。

科
科学领域
改变世界的人
Qian Xuesen钱学森 Tu Youyou屠呦呦 Albert Einstein爱因斯坦 Marie Curie居里夫人
适配词汇
scientist科学家 discover发现 develop研发 do experiments做实验 win the Nobel Prize获诺贝尔奖 curious好奇的 hard-working勤奋的 the Father of China's Missiles中国导弹之父 the Father of Hybrid Rice杂交水稻之父 discoverer of artemisinin青蒿素发现者
动
体育领域
永不放弃的人
Eileen Gu谷爱凌 Kobe Bryant科比 Yao Ming姚明 Liu Xiang刘翔
适配词汇
champion冠军 player运动员 train hard刻苦训练 win赢得 break the record破纪录 brave勇敢的 never give up永不放弃
艺
艺术领域
富有创造力的人
Leonardo da Vinci达·芬奇 Beethoven贝多芬 Nie Er聂耳 Qi Baishi齐白石
适配词汇
painter画家 musician音乐家 create创造 compose作曲 show talent展现天赋 creative有创造力的 be famous for因……闻名
航
航天领域
探索星空的人
Yang Liwei杨利伟 Wang Yaping王亚平 Neil Armstrong阿姆斯特朗
适配词汇
astronaut宇航员 fly to space飞向太空 explore探索 brave勇敢的 achieve实现 make history创造历史
医
医护英雄
守护大家的人
Zhong Nanshan钟南山 Florence Nightingale南丁格尔 Norman Bethune白求恩
适配词汇
doctor医生 nurse护士 save people救人 fight against与……作斗争 kind善良的 responsible有责任心的
万用句型
科学家 Qian Xuesen was a great Chinese scientist. He is called the Father of China's Missiles.
运动员 Eileen Gu is a great skater. She trains hard and never gives up.
艺术家 Beethoven was a great musician. He wrote many famous pieces.
宇航员 Yang Liwei is a great astronaut. He was the first Chinese to fly into space.
医护英雄 Zhong Nanshan is a great doctor. He works hard to save people's lives.