一、原题呈现
ORIGINAL TASK · 题目 + 要求
题
假如你是李华,十一月份你校将举办校园开放日,届时会接待一批参加 APEC 会议的外国来宾。你校正在招募志愿者,请你写一封英文自荐信,说明申请原因,介绍自己的优势,并期待收到回复。
求
要求:80-100 词,包含所有要点,不得出现真实姓名和校名。开头和结尾已给出:Dear Sir or Madam, / Yours sincerely, / Li Hua
析
三步结构:① 开头:I'm Li Hua. I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer for ...(申请 + 身份 + 背景:十一月校园开放日、接待 APEC 外宾)→ ② 主体:First ... Second ...(申请原因 + 自身优势,各写 1-2 句)→ ③ 结尾:I hope to hear from you soon.(期待回复)。
三、参考范文精读
MODEL ESSAY · 词性标注 + 译文 + 亮点句型
范文约 95 词。绿色=动词、粉字=形容词、蓝字=副词、紫字=介词、橙字=连词;黄色高亮为高分亮点句型。
开头 · 申请与背景
S1Dear Sir or Madam,尊敬的先生 / 女士:
S2I'm Li Hua. I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer for the School Open Day in November, when our school will receive some foreign guests attending the APEC meeting.我是李华。我写信是为了申请担任十一月校园开放日的志愿者,届时我校将接待一批参加 APEC 会议的外国来宾。
主体 · 原因 + 优势
S3I'd like to take this chance for two reasons.我想抓住这个机会,原因有二。
S4First, I am good at spoken English and I have visited many places of interest in Shenzhen, so I can introduce our city and culture to the guests.第一,我的英语口语很好,而且游览过深圳的许多名胜,所以我可以向来宾介绍我们的城市和文化。
S5Second, I am outgoing and always ready to help others, and I once worked as a guide at our school's sports festival.第二,我性格开朗,乐于助人,还曾在学校运动会上担任过引导员。
结尾 · 期待回复
S6I hope to hear from you soon.期待尽快收到您的回复。
S7Yours sincerely,此致 敬礼
S8Li Hua李华
四、金句积累与仿写
WRITING BOOST · 黑色为框架,灰色底纹为可替换词
把自荐信的好句子拆成"句型框架",换词即用,考试直接套。
句 1
I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer for the School Open Day in November.
I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer for the School Open Day / a member of the English Club / a helper for the sports festival.
仿写:I'm writing to apply to be a member of the English Club. 我写信是为了申请加入英语俱乐部。
适用:任何申请信/自荐信的开头第一句。
句 2
I'd like to take this chance for two reasons.
I'd like to take this chance for two / three reasons. / There are two / three reasons for my application.
仿写:There are two reasons for my application. 我的申请有两个理由。
适用:主体段总起,引出 First / Second。
句 3
I am good at spoken English and I have visited many places of interest in Shenzhen, so I can introduce our city and culture to the guests.
I am good at spoken English / painting / basketball and I have visited many places of interest / taken part in many activities / learnt a lot, so I can introduce our city and culture to the guests / help you well / share my experience.
仿写:I am good at painting and I have taken part in many activities, so I can help you well. 我擅长绘画,参加过很多活动,所以我能很好地帮忙。
适用:用 First 引出"优势 + 我能做什么"(be good at + have done + so 因果)。
句 4
I am outgoing and always ready to help others, and I once worked as a guide at our school's sports festival.
I am outgoing / patient / hard-working and always ready to help others / learn new things / communicate with foreigners, and I once worked as a guide / took part in the volunteer work / helped organize activities.
仿写:I am patient and always ready to communicate with foreigners, and I once took part in the volunteer work. 我很有耐心,乐于与外国人交流,还参加过志愿工作。
适用:Second 引出"性格 + 相关经历"(用 once + 一般过去时举例)。
句 5
I hope to hear from you soon.
I hope to hear from you soon. / Looking forward to your reply. / Thank you for your consideration.
仿写:Looking forward to your early reply. 期待您的早日回复。
适用:信件结尾固定搭配,二选一即可。