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Application Letter for School Open Day Volunteers · 审题拆解 + 参考范文 + 金句仿写

80-100 词审题拆解参考范文金句仿写词汇积累

一、原题呈现

ORIGINAL TASK · 题目 + 要求

题 假如你是李华,十一月份你校将举办校园开放日,届时会接待一批参加 APEC 会议的外国来宾。你校正在招募志愿者,请你写一封英文自荐信,说明申请原因,介绍自己的优势,并期待收到回复。

求 要求:80-100 词,包含所有要点,不得出现真实姓名和校名。开头和结尾已给出:Dear Sir or Madam, / Yours sincerely, / Li Hua

析 三步结构:① 开头:I'm Li Hua. I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer for ...(申请 + 身份 + 背景:十一月校园开放日、接待 APEC 外宾)→ ② 主体:First ... Second ...(申请原因 + 自身优势,各写 1-2 句)→ ③ 结尾:I hope to hear from you soon.(期待回复)。

二、审题拆解

TASK ANALYSIS · 体裁 / 对象 / 要点 / 高分句型
体裁应用文 · 自荐信第一人称 I
对象学校(Sir or Madam);语气礼貌、自信;用 I'm writing to / I'd like to / I hope 等得体的表达。
要点3 个必写
①申请原因:想锻炼英语口语、向外国朋友介绍深圳与中国文化、为学校尽一份力(任选 1-2 个,说明"为什么想当志愿者")。
②自身优势:英语口语好、熟悉深圳的名胜与文化、开朗外向乐于助人、有类似接待/引导经验(be good at / have done / once worked as)。
③期待回复:I hope to hear from you soon. / Looking forward to your reply.
注意80-100 词不出现真实姓名校名
提醒称呼、署名用卷面给定的 Dear Sir or Madam / Yours sincerely / Li Hua;文中不得写自己学校真名,介绍城市时写 Shenzhen 即可。
加分高分句型
句型① I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer for ...(申请信标配);② I'd like to take this chance for two reasons.(总起主体);③ First / Second 引出理由;④ I have visited many places of interest ...(现在完成时加分);⑤ I once worked as a guide ...(一般过去时举例);⑥ I hope to hear from you soon.(结尾)。

三、参考范文精读

MODEL ESSAY · 词性标注 + 译文 + 亮点句型

范文约 95 词。绿色=动词、粉字=形容词、蓝字=副词、紫字=介词、橙字=连词;黄色高亮为高分亮点句型。

开头 · 申请与背景

S1Dear Sir or Madam,尊敬的先生 / 女士:

S2I'm Li Hua. I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer for the School Open Day in November, when our school will receive some foreign guests attending the APEC meeting.我是李华。我写信是为了申请担任十一月校园开放日的志愿者,届时我校将接待一批参加 APEC 会议的外国来宾。

主体 · 原因 + 优势

S3I'd like to take this chance for two reasons.我想抓住这个机会,原因有二。

S4First, I am good at spoken English and I have visited many places of interest in Shenzhen, so I can introduce our city and culture to the guests.第一,我的英语口语很好,而且游览过深圳的许多名胜,所以我可以向来宾介绍我们的城市和文化。

S5Second, I am outgoing and always ready to help others, and I once worked as a guide at our school's sports festival.第二,我性格开朗,乐于助人,还曾在学校运动会上担任过引导员。

结尾 · 期待回复

S6I hope to hear from you soon.期待尽快收到您的回复。

S7Yours sincerely,此致 敬礼

S8Li Hua李华

四、金句积累与仿写

WRITING BOOST · 黑色为框架,灰色底纹为可替换词

把自荐信的好句子拆成"句型框架",换词即用,考试直接套。

句 1 I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer for the School Open Day in November.

I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer for the School Open Day / a member of the English Club / a helper for the sports festival.

仿写:I'm writing to apply to be a member of the English Club. 我写信是为了申请加入英语俱乐部。

适用:任何申请信/自荐信的开头第一句。

句 2 I'd like to take this chance for two reasons.

I'd like to take this chance for two / three reasons. / There are two / three reasons for my application.

仿写:There are two reasons for my application. 我的申请有两个理由。

适用:主体段总起,引出 First / Second。

句 3 I am good at spoken English and I have visited many places of interest in Shenzhen, so I can introduce our city and culture to the guests.

I am good at spoken English / painting / basketball and I have visited many places of interest / taken part in many activities / learnt a lot, so I can introduce our city and culture to the guests / help you well / share my experience.

仿写:I am good at painting and I have taken part in many activities, so I can help you well. 我擅长绘画,参加过很多活动,所以我能很好地帮忙。

适用:用 First 引出"优势 + 我能做什么"(be good at + have done + so 因果)。

句 4 I am outgoing and always ready to help others, and I once worked as a guide at our school's sports festival.

I am outgoing / patient / hard-working and always ready to help others / learn new things / communicate with foreigners, and I once worked as a guide / took part in the volunteer work / helped organize activities.

仿写:I am patient and always ready to communicate with foreigners, and I once took part in the volunteer work. 我很有耐心,乐于与外国人交流,还参加过志愿工作。

适用:Second 引出"性格 + 相关经历"(用 once + 一般过去时举例)。

句 5 I hope to hear from you soon.

I hope to hear from you soon. / Looking forward to your reply. / Thank you for your consideration.

仿写:Looking forward to your early reply. 期待您的早日回复。

适用:信件结尾固定搭配,二选一即可。

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