一、完整文章(答案已填入)
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Su Shi is familiar to us because we often study his ci in textbooks. He is remembered as one of the Eight Great Prose Masters of the Tang and Song Dynasties.
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After becoming an official, Su Shi faced many challenges1. Other officials spoke badly2 of him, and as a result, he was demoted (贬谪) to serve in distant areas. However, he remained brave3 through these difficulties.
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First, he was sent to Huangzhou. There, he farmed land called Dongpo—a name4 that later became his nickname. It’s said that he even invented Dongpo Pork around5 that time. Many of his famous poems were also written there.
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Later, he was sent to Danzhou. Though6 he found the weather hot and the dialect (方言) difficult, he didn’t give up. Instead, he set up7 schools and made friends with locals.
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Su Shi left behind8 valuable cultural heritage. His poems encourage9 people to stay hopeful even in hard times. As Lin Yutang said, Su Shi was an optimist (乐天派), a friend of the people, and a true master—someone we can still admire10 today.
三、文章精读
INTENSIVE READING · 词性套色 + 从句划线
精读说明:按《词性标注配色规则》套色——绿=谓语动词,绿底=不定式,墨绿+灰底=动名词,玫红=形容词/形容词性物主代词,玫红+粉底=分词,蓝=副词,紫=介词,橙=连词,橙底=that 类引导词,蓝底=wh- 类引导词,红=疑问词,深灰=冠词/代词/名词;句子下的橙色下划线=that 类从句,蓝色下划线=wh- 类从句。每句末尾的小喇叭可单独朗读该句,点击生词可查词典。
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谓语动词
不定式
动名词
形容词/物主代词
分词
副词
介词
连词
that 类引导词
wh- 类引导词
疑问词
冠词/代词/名词
P1 · 词传千古
S1Su Shi is familiar to us because we often study his ci in textbooks.苏轼对我们来说很熟悉,因为我们常在课本里学习他的词。
S2He is remembered as one of the Eight Great Prose Masters of the Tang and Song Dynasties.他被人们铭记为唐宋八大家之一。
P2 · 仕途坎坷
S1After becoming an official, Su Shi faced many challenges.成为官员后,苏轼面临许多挑战。
S2Other officials spoke badly of him, and as a result, he was demoted to serve in distant areas.其他官员说他坏话,结果他被贬到偏远地区任职。
S3However, he remained brave through these difficulties.然而,在这些困难中他依然勇敢。
P3 · 黄州东坡
S1First, he was sent to Huangzhou.起初,他被贬到黄州。
S2There, he farmed land called Dongpo—a name that later became his nickname.在那里,他耕种一块叫“东坡”的土地——一个后来成为他名号的名字。
S3It’s said that he even invented Dongpo Pork around that time.据说他大约就在那段时间发明了东坡肉。
S4Many of his famous poems were also written there.他许多著名的诗词也是在那里写成的。
P4 · 儋州办学
S1Later, he was sent to Danzhou.后来,他又被贬到儋州。
S2Though he found the weather hot and the dialect difficult, he didn’t give up.尽管他觉得天气炎热、方言难懂,他也没有放弃。
S3Instead, he set up schools and made friends with locals.相反,他创办学校,还与当地人交朋友。
P5 · 千古大师
S1Su Shi left behind valuable cultural heritage.苏轼留下了宝贵的文化遗产。
S2His poems encourage people to stay hopeful even in hard times.他的诗词鼓励人们在艰难时刻仍心怀希望。
S3As Lin Yutang said, Su Shi was an optimist , a friend of the people, and a true master—someone we can still admire today.正如林语堂所说,苏轼是乐天派,是人民的朋友,是真正的大师——一个我们今天仍然敬佩的人。
四、作文金句仿写
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把文中的好句子拆成“句型框架”,换上你自己的词,就能写出漂亮的作文句子。
金句 1
Su Shi is familiar to us because we often study his ci in textbooks.
Su Shi / Yuan Longping / Tu Youyou is familiar to us / Chinese students / young people because we often study his ci in textbooks / we learn his story in class / everyone knows her name.
仿写:Yuan Longping is familiar to Chinese students because we learn his story in our biology textbooks. 袁隆平对中国学生来说很熟悉,因为我们在生物课本里学过他的故事。
适用:写“我最敬佩的人/伟人”的开头,用 be familiar to sb. + because 交代熟悉的原因。
金句 2
He is remembered as one of the Eight Great Prose Masters of the Tang and Song Dynasties.
He / She / They is / are remembered as one of the Eight Great Prose Masters / the greatest writers / the most important scientists of the Tang and Song Dynasties / modern China / the twentieth century.
仿写:She is remembered as one of the greatest scientists of modern China. 她作为现代中国最伟大的科学家之一而被人们铭记。
适用:人物评价类作文的“定性句”,be remembered as one of the + 最高级 + 复数名词,一句话抬高人物地位。
金句 3
However, he remained brave through these difficulties.
However / Still / Even so, he / she / they remained / stayed brave / calm / hopeful / hard-working through these difficulties / those hard years / the hardest time.
仿写:However, she remained calm through those hard years. 然而,在那些艰难的岁月里她始终镇定。
适用:写人物“遇到困难但不放弃”的转折句,However + remain + 形容词,简洁有力。
金句 4
His poems encourage people to stay hopeful even in hard times.
His poems / His words / Her story encourage / teach / help people / us / young people to stay hopeful / to keep trying / to work hard even in hard times / difficult situations / times of trouble.
仿写:Her story teaches young people to keep trying even in hard times. 她的事迹教导年轻人在艰难时刻也要不断努力。
适用:作文结尾写“人物给我们带来的精神力量”,encourage sb. to do sth. + even in hard times 是高频收束句式。