一、文章
PASSAGE · Who do you admire? A survey report(21-25)
调查报告类文本的行文套路:抛出问题(Who do you admire?)→ 摆出数据与今昔对比(65% … in the past / today)→ 分析原因(the pandemic / the growing attention on science)→ 提出提醒与观点(admiration should not be blind / not perfection, but courage)。做细节题时先按题干关键词回到这一步一步的“骨架”上定位。
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Who do you admire? A recent survey of 2,000 Chinese teenagers asked this question. The results might surprise you.
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In the past, most young people said they admired pop stars, actors, or rich businesspeople. However, things have changed over the past few years. Today’s teenagers are more likely to admire scientists, doctors, and teachers. About 65% of them said they look up to people who have made real contributions to society.
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Why has this happened? Experts believe that the pandemic played a big role. When people were in trouble, it was not pop stars but doctors and nurses who risked their lives to save others. It was very brave of these medical workers to work day and night, often without enough rest. Young people saw this and their ideas about heroes changed.
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Another reason is the growing attention on science and technology in China. Stories of scientists like Zhong Nanshan and Yuan Longping are now taught more widely in schools. It is inspiring for young people to learn about these scientists’ dedication. What’s more, the government has also encouraged young people to see scientists as their role models.
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However, experts also warn that admiration should not be blind. It is important for teenagers to understand that even heroes have weaknesses. What makes a person admirable is not perfection, but the courage to keep going when things get hard.
三、文章精读
INTENSIVE READING · 词性套色 + 从句划线 + 逐句翻译
精读说明:按《词性标注配色规则》套色——绿=谓语动词,绿底=不定式,墨绿+灰底=动名词,玫红=形容词/形容词性物主代词,玫红+粉底=分词,蓝=副词,紫=介词,橙=连词,橙底=that 类引导词,蓝底=wh- 类引导词,红=疑问词,深灰=冠词/代词/名词;句子下的橙色下划线=that 类从句,蓝色下划线=wh- 类从句。每句末尾的小喇叭可单独朗读该句,点击生词可查词典。
配色速查
谓语动词
不定式
动名词
形容词/物主代词
分词
副词
介词
连词
that 类引导词
wh- 类引导词
疑问词
冠词/代词/名词
P1 · 调查问题
S1Who do you admire?你崇拜谁?
S2A recent survey of 2,000 Chinese teenagers asked this question.最近一项针对 2,000 名中国青少年的调查提出了这个问题。
S3The results might surprise you.结果可能会让你吃惊。
P2 · 今昔变化
S1In the past, most young people said they admired pop stars, actors, or rich businesspeople.过去,大多数年轻人说他们崇拜流行歌星、演员或富有的商人。
S2However, things have changed over the past few years.然而,过去几年里情况已经发生了变化。
S3Today’s teenagers are more likely to admire scientists, doctors, and teachers.如今的青少年更有可能崇拜科学家、医生和教师。
S4About 65% of them said they look up to people who have made real contributions to society.他们中约 65% 的人说,他们敬佩那些为社会做出真正贡献的人。
P3 · 疫情原因
S1Why has this happened?为什么会发生这种变化?
S2Experts believe that the pandemic played a big role.专家认为,疫情起了很大的作用。
S3When people were in trouble, it was not pop stars but doctors and nurses who risked their lives to save others.当人们身处困境时,冒着生命危险去救别人的不是流行歌星,而是医生和护士。
S4It was very brave of these medical workers to work day and night, often without enough rest.这些医护人员日日夜夜地工作,常常得不到足够的休息,这非常勇敢。
S5Young people saw this and their ideas about heroes changed.年轻人看到了这些,他们对英雄的看法也就改变了。
P4 · 科教关注
S1Another reason is the growing attention on science and technology in China.另一个原因是国内对科学技术的关注日益增长。
S2Stories of scientists like Zhong Nanshan and Yuan Longping are now taught more widely in schools.像钟南山、袁隆平这样的科学家的故事,现在在学校里被更广泛地讲授。
S3It is inspiring for young people to learn about these scientists’ dedication.了解这些科学家的奉献精神对年轻人很有鼓舞作用。
S4What’s more, the government has also encouraged young people to see scientists as their role models.而且,政府也鼓励年轻人把科学家视为自己的榜样。
P5 · 理性崇拜
S1However, experts also warn that admiration should not be blind.然而,专家也提醒说,崇拜不应是盲目的。
S2It is important for teenagers to understand that even heroes have weaknesses.对青少年来说,明白即使是英雄也有弱点是重要的。
S3What makes a person admirable is not perfection, but the courage to keep going when things get hard.让一个人令人钦佩的不是完美,而是在事情变得艰难时坚持下去的勇气。
四、作文金句仿写
WRITING · 3 个可套用句型
金句 1
In the past, most young people said they admired pop stars, actors, or rich businesspeople.
In the past / Ten years ago, most young people / students / parents said they admired / liked / chose pop stars, actors, or rich businesspeople / cartoon heroes or film stars.
仿写:In the past, most students said they liked cartoon heroes or film stars. 过去,大多数学生说他们喜欢卡通英雄或电影明星。
适用:写“今昔对比”类作文的开头——先用 In the past 摆出过去的普遍看法,再用 However 转折到现在的变化;注意 said 后是省略 that 的宾语从句,语序用陈述语序(they admired…)。
金句 2
However, things have changed over the past few years.
However, things have changed / have improved / have become better over the past few years / months / weeks.
仿写:However, things have improved over the past few months. 然而,过去几个月里情况已经好转了。
适用:今昔对比作文的“转折句”,一句话完成时间过渡;over the past few years 常与现在完成时(have changed)连用,不能改成一般过去时。
金句 3
What makes a person admirable is not perfection, but the courage to keep going when things get hard.
What makes a person admirable / What makes a good friend / What makes a real hero is not perfection / money / good grades, but the courage to keep going when things get hard / honesty and kindness / the will to help others.
仿写:What makes a good friend is not money, but honesty and kindness. 让一个人成为好朋友的不是金钱,而是诚实和善良。
适用:议论性作文的“亮观点”结尾句——What 引导主语从句作主语(谓语用单数 is),not … but … 对举出真正的标准,气势强、得分高。
写作提示:这三句都来自本篇调查报告,可直接替换 灰色方框 里的内容:写“今昔对比”用金句 1(过去)+ 金句 2(转折);写“我心目中的英雄/榜样”“什么是真正的美”这类观点作文,把金句 3 放在结尾最亮眼。