CHAPTER 2 · 全书共 18 章

Mr Fox 狐狸爸爸

第一章我们认识了三位「不好惹」的农场主;这一章,真正的主角登场——住在山丘树林树洞里的狐狸一家。每晚,狐狸爸爸都会趁着夜色下山「拿」晚餐……农场主们气得发狂,一场斗智斗勇要开始了!

作者 Roald Dahl 体裁 章节书 · 小说 重点 悬念 · 习惯 · 对话 适合 词汇量 3000+ 的阅读者 · Lexile 600L
黄昏的树林里,一棵大树下的树洞旁,狐狸爸爸和狐狸妈妈带着四只小狐狸,温馨的一家
Mr Fox & his family —— 住在树洞里的狐狸一家
2Chapter 2
01 · BEFORE YOU READ

读前热身Before You Read

Meet the star of the story, then make your predictions. Reading with questions helps you understand more.先认识故事的主角,再大胆猜一猜,带着问题去读,理解会更深。

About the Author · 关于作者

Roald Dahl’s Fantastic Mr Fox was published in 1970 and became a children’s classic. The story is full of his signature tricks: funny exaggerations, quick dialogue and a hero who is always one step ahead of the bad guys.《了不起的狐狸爸爸》出版于 1970 年,是罗尔德·达尔的经典之作。这本书里有他的招牌手法:夸张的幽默、节奏飞快的对话,还有一个永远比坏人快一步的主角。

What Is This Book About? · 这本书讲什么?

Mr Fox lives with his wife and four children in a hole under a huge tree on the hill. Every night he sneaks down to the valley to take a plump chicken, duck or turkey from the three farmers. In Chapter 1 we met the furious farmers; now meet the clever fox himself!狐狸先生和太太、四个孩子住在山上大树下的洞里。每晚他都会溜下山谷,从三位农场主那里「拿」一只肥鸡、肥鸭或火鸡。第一章我们认识了暴跳如雷的农场主;这一章,轮到聪明的狐狸爸爸登场!

Reading Tip · 阅读小贴士:The chapter opens like a camera zooming in: hill → wood → tree → hole → the foxes. Watch how the writer leads you to the hero step by step!这一章的开头像镜头一样不断推进:小山 → 树林 → 大树 → 树洞 → 狐狸一家。注意作者是怎样一步步把你带到主角面前的。

Predict · 猜一猜

Before you read: Mr Fox is about to take tonight’s dinner. What do you think happens?还没读之前,猜猜看:狐狸爸爸今晚去「拿」晚餐,会发生什么?

Pick one to remember your prediction — come back after reading to check!
点一个选项记住你的预测,读完全章后回来揭晓答案。

The Answer Is B!Mr Fox is too clever for them — he always walks into the wind so he can smell danger far away. Did you guess right?狐狸先生「太聪明了」——他总是迎着风走,这样老远就能闻到危险。你猜对了吗?

Two more questions after reading · 还有两个小问题:

1. How does Mr Fox know there is danger before he even sees it?
狐狸爸爸还没看到危险,是怎么提前察觉的?
2. The farmers make a plan at the end — what is it?
结尾农场主们想出了一个计划——是什么计划?

02 · READ & EXPLORE

原文精读Read & Explore

跟着原文读一遍。橙色单词先别查——根据上下文猜一猜。点击任意单词弹出词典卡片(中英释义 · 发音 · 例句);点段落开头的 ▶ 听朗读(英式男声)。

Chapter 2 · Mr Fox

On a hill above the valley there was a wood. In the wood there was a huge tree. Under the tree there was a hole. In the hole lived Mr Fox and Mrs Fox and their four Small Foxes.

段落大意:山谷上方的小山上有一片树林,林子里有棵大树,树下有个洞,洞里住着狐狸先生、狐狸太太和四只小狐狸。
山坡树林里的狐狸洞
P1 · 开场段 —— 镜头推进The Opening Paragraph — A Zoom-in Shot
结构手法 · 镜头式开头Structure · Zoom-in Opening
On a hill above the valley there was a wood. → In the wood ... a huge tree. → Under the tree ... a hole. → In the hole lived Mr Fox ...
The camera zooms in step by step — valley, hill, wood, tree, hole — until it lands on the fox family. Each new sentence picks up the last noun and tightens the focus.镜头一层层推进:山谷→山坡→树林→大树→树洞→狐狸一家。每句话咬住上一个名词往下走,视野越收越小,最后落到主角身上。
表达方式 · 环境描写Expression · Setting Description
On a hill above the valley there was a wood.
The story opens with the setting, placing the fox family high above the farms before any character speaks — setting prepares the stage for the hero.开头先交代地点,把狐狸一家放在高处俯瞰农场——环境描写先搭台,主角再登场。

Every evening as soon as it got dark, Mr Fox would say to Mrs Fox, “Well, my darling, what shall it be this time? A plump chicken from Boggis? A duck or a goose from Bunce? Or a nice turkey from Bean?” And when Mrs Fox had told him what she wanted, Mr Fox would creep down into the valley in the darkness of the night and help himself.

段落大意:每天天一黑,狐狸先生就问太太:“亲爱的,今晚吃什么?博吉斯的肥鸡?邦斯的鸭或鹅?还是比恩的好火鸡?”等太太选好,他就趁夜色溜下山谷去“自己拿”。
狐狸先生夜间溜下山谷
P2 · 狐狸一家 —— 温柔的对话The Fox Family — A Gentle Conversation
表达方式 · 语言描写Expression · Dialogue
“Well, my darling, what shall it be this time? A plump chicken from Boggis? A duck or a goose from Bunce? Or a nice turkey from Bean?”
Mr Fox’s nightly question is gentle and playful — “my darling” shows love. Dialogue builds the family warmth in just one line.狐狸先生每晚的问话温柔又俏皮——一声 “my darling” 满是爱意。一句对话就写出了家的温暖。
修辞手法 · 排比Rhetoric · Parallelism
A plump chicken from Boggis? A duck or a goose from Bunce? Or a nice turkey from Bean?
Three parallel questions, one per farmer, create a rhythm that lists the whole valley’s farms — and makes the nightly raid sound like a menu.三个排比问句,一个农场主对应一句,节奏整齐地列出全山谷的农场——把每晚偷猎写得像在点菜。

Boggis and Bunce and Bean knew very well what was going on, and it made them wild with rage. They were not men who liked to give anything away. Less still did they like anything to be stolen from them. So every night each of them would take his shotgun and hide in a dark place somewhere on his own farm, hoping to catch the robber.

段落大意:三个农场主知道狐狸在偷他们的东西,气得发狂——他们最不喜欢把东西送人,更不喜欢东西被偷。所以每晚他们都拿着猎枪躲在自己农场的暗处,想抓住这个贼。
农场主持枪埋伏
P3 · 农场主 —— 气得发狂The Farmers — Wild with Rage
表达方式 · 心理描写Expression · Psychology
It made them wild with rage. They were not men who liked to give anything away.
The farmers’ anger is explained from the inside: they hate losing anything. Inner feelings make us understand why they chase the fox all night.直接写农场主的内心:他们气到发狂,因为什么都舍不得给。交代心理,读者就明白了他们为何彻夜追捕。
修辞手法 · 夸张Rhetoric · Exaggeration
Less still did they like anything to be stolen from them.
The double negative piles up the meanness — “less still” exaggerates how selfish they are.双重否定把吝啬写到极致——“更别说被偷”用夸张把他们的自私放大。

But Mr Fox was too clever for them. He always approached a farm with the wind blowing in his face, and this meant that if any man were lurking in the shadows ahead, the wind would carry the smell of that man to Mr Fox’s nose from far away. Thus, if Mr Boggis was hiding behind his Chicken House Number One, Mr Fox would smell him out from fifty yards off and quickly change direction, heading for Chicken House Number Four at the other end of the farm.

段落大意:但狐狸先生太聪明了:他总是迎着风接近农场——如果前面暗处有人埋伏,风会把那人的气味从老远送进他的鼻子;他马上改变方向,去农场另一头的四号鸡舍。
狐狸先生迎着风嗅出危险
P4 · 狐狸先生 —— 聪明绝顶Mr Fox — Too Clever for Them
表现手法 · 对比Technique · Contrast
But Mr Fox was too clever for them. He always approached a farm with the wind blowing in his face.
“too clever for them” sets the fox against the farmers. The contrast of a quick fox versus slow men makes the chase funny.“聪明得让他们没辙”把狐狸与农场主放在天平两端。机灵的狐狸对比笨拙的猎人,追捕变得滑稽。
表达方式 · 动作描写Expression · Action
Mr Fox would smell him out from fifty yards off and quickly change direction, heading for Chicken House Number Four at the other end of the farm.
The action chain — smell, change direction, head elsewhere — shows the fox’s skill in three quick steps.一连串动作——闻到气味、改变方向、直奔别处——三步就写出狐狸的本事。

“Dang and blast lousy beast!” cried Boggis. “I’d like to rip his guts out!” said Bunce. “He must be killed!” cried Bean. “But how?” said Boggis. “How on earth can we catch the blighter?” Bean picked his nose delicately with a long finger. “I have a plan,” he said. “You’ve never had a decent plan yet,” said Bunce. “Shut up and listen,” said Bean. “Tomorrow night we will all hide just outside the hole where the fox lives. We will wait there until he comes out. Then . . . Bang! Bang-bang-bang.” “Very clever,” said Bunce. “But first we shall have to find the hole.” “My dear Bunce, I’ve already found it,” said the crafty Bean. “It’s up in the wood on the hill. It’s under a huge tree . . .”

段落大意:农场主们气得直骂:“该死的畜生!”“我要撕开他的肚皮!”“必须杀了他!”比恩想出一个计划:明晚躲在狐狸洞口,等他一出来就开枪!比恩还得意地说,他已经找到了那个洞——就在山上的树林里,一棵大树底下……
比恩说出抓狐狸的计划
P5 · 对话 —— 计划诞生The Dialogue — A Plan Is Born
表达方式 · 语言描写Expression · Dialogue
“Dang and blast that lousy beast!” cried Boggis. “I’d like to rip his guts out!” said Bunce. “He must be killed!” cried Bean.
Short angry lines, each with a speech tag (cried / said), show three different tempers — dialogue alone drives the scene forward.一句句短促的怒骂配上 cried / said 提示语,三种脾气各不相同——光靠对话,场面就动起来了。
结构手法 · 伏笔与铺垫Structure · Foreshadowing
Bean picked his nose delicately with a long finger. “I have a plan,” he said.
Bean’s “I have a plan” plants the seed — the ambush at the hole will drive the whole next chapter. A small line, a big hook.比恩的“我有计划”埋下钩子——洞口埋伏正是下一章的开端。一句小话,牵出大情节。
朗读提示:第一遍默读,圈出第一段的「地点链」(hill → wood → tree → hole);第二遍大声朗读,读到农场主们的话时用夸张生气的语气,感受对话里喷涌而出的怒气。
03 · CHARACTER CARDS

人物档案Meet the Fox Family

这一章的主角是狐狸一家,还有追捕他们的三位农场主。一边聪明谨慎,一边气得发狂。

STAR OF THE STORY

Mr Fox

狐狸先生 · 主角
TRICK 绝招too clever for them 聪明得让他们没辙
HABIT 习惯would creep down every night 每晚溜下山谷
SECRET 秘密迎着风走,老远就能闻到埋伏
MUM

Mrs Fox

狐狸太太 · 温柔持家
ROLE 角色chooses tonight’s dinner 决定今晚的菜单
VOICE 台词“Well, my darling, what shall it be this time?”
CLUE 线索关心丈夫,一家之主是狐狸先生
THE BAD GUYS

Boggis · Bunce · Bean

三位农场主 · 追捕者
FEELING 心情wild with rage 气得发狂
PLAN 每晚行动hide with shotguns 持枪埋伏守夜
CLUE 线索比恩最聪明,想出了「洞口埋伏」计划

描写分析 · Descriptions That Move the Story

这一章写狐狸先生的机警:夜里出动、迎着风走、闻出危险。记叙文写人物,除了外貌,还可以用「他怎么做」来写。

人物描写 · CHARACTER外貌 · 语言 · 动作 · 心理 · 神态
外貌描写 · APPEARANCE

But Mr Fox was too clever for them. He always approached a farm with the wind blowing in his face.

Instead of looks, Dahl gives us intelligence and habit: clever, wind in his face, always ready. Character can be built from a way of doing things, not just a face.

不写长相,而写聪明和习惯:迎着风走、永远警觉。人物的性格不光靠脸,也可以靠「做事的方式」来立住。

语言描写 · SPEECH

"Well, my darling, what shall it be this time? A plump chicken from Boggis? A duck or a goose from Bunce? Or a nice turkey from Bean?"

Mr Fox's question is full of rhyme and rhythm — Boggis, Bunce, Bean — and a gentle, loving tone. Even a question shows how he cares for his family every night.

狐狸先生的问话有节奏、押韵——Boggis、Bunce、Bean——语气温柔体贴。一句问话就写出了他每晚为家人操心的形象。

动作描写 · ACTION

Mr Fox would smell him out from fifty yards off and quickly change direction, heading for Chicken House Number Four at the other end of the farm.

The action is quick and clever: smell first, change direction, head elsewhere. One sentence shows the fox's skill and makes the farmers look slow.

动作快而机灵:先闻到气味,马上转向,直奔另一头。一句话写出狐狸的本事,也衬出农场主的笨拙。

心理描写 · PSYCHOLOGY

It made them wild with rage. They were not men who liked to give anything away.

The farmers' rage comes from selfishness: they hate giving anything away. Their inner anger gives readers a reason to enjoy the fox's tricks.

农场主的暴怒来自小气:他们什么都舍不得给。这份内心的怒火,也让读者更爱看狐狸的小把戏。

环境描写 · ENVIRONMENT场景 · 景物 · 氛围
环境描写 · ENVIRONMENT

On a hill above the valley there was a wood. In the wood there was a huge tree. Under the tree there was a hole. In the hole lived Mr Fox and Mrs Fox and their four Small Foxes.

The camera zooms in step by step: valley, hill, wood, tree, hole, fox family. Each sentence repeats the last noun, tightening the focus until we land on the heroes.

镜头一层层推进:山谷→山坡→树林→大树→树洞→狐狸一家。每句话咬住上一个名词往下走,视野越收越小,最后落到主角身上。

文章结构 · Story Structure 时间顺序 · Time Order

这一章按「时间 + 地点」双线推进:从黄昏的树洞(家)开始,讲到每晚的偷猎、每晚的埋伏,最后落到「明晚的计谋」。看懂顺序,复述就有了时间轴。

Para 1 · 开场 · 地点链

On a hill above the valley there was a wood. In the wood there was a huge tree. Under the tree there was a hole. In the hole lived Mr Fox and Mrs Fox and their four Small Foxes.

山丘 → 树林 → 大树 → 树洞 → 狐狸一家。

How it expands · 怎么展开:围绕「家在哪儿」展开——每一句咬住上一个名词(wood → tree → hole),镜头由远及近,最后落在主角身上。这就是镜头式的开头。

推进 · Steps ×4每晚 → 每晚 → 每次 → 明晚
Step 2 · 习惯

Every evening as soon as it got dark, Mr Fox would say to Mrs Fox, "Well, my darling, what shall it be this time?" ... Mr Fox would creep down into the valley in the darkness of the night and help himself.

每晚天一黑,狐狸先生问太太想吃什么,然后溜下山「自己拿」。

How it expands · 怎么展开:围绕关键词 every evening / would 展开——用 would 反复写「习惯性动作」:问话、下山、拿食物。三个排比问句列出农场主,点明「向谁拿」。

Step 3 · 冲突

Boggis and Bunce and Bean knew very well what was going on, and it made them wild with rage. ... So every night each of them would take his shotgun and hide in a dark place ... hoping to catch the robber.

农场主知道被偷,气得发狂,每晚持枪埋伏。

How it expands · 怎么展开:中心句先给情绪(knew → wild with rage),再给原因(舍不得给 / 更讨厌被偷),最后给行动(每晚拿枪躲起来)。情绪 → 原因 → 行动,一步步递进。

Step 4 · 转折

But Mr Fox was too clever for them. He always approached a farm with the wind blowing in his face ... the wind would carry the smell ... Mr Fox would smell him out from fifty yards off and quickly change direction.

但狐狸先生太聪明——迎风闻味,提前转向。

How it expands · 怎么展开:用 But 转折引出狐狸的优势,围绕关键词 clever / wind / smell 展开:方法(迎风走)→ 原理(风送气味)→ 结果(五十码外转向)。一环扣一环,证明「抓不到他」。

Step 5 · 收束 · 计谋

"Dang and blast that lousy beast!" cried Boggis. ... Bean picked his nose delicately with a long finger. "I have a plan," he said. "Tomorrow night we will all hide just outside the hole..."

三人的怒骂之后,比恩说出计划:明晚洞口守候。

How it expands · 怎么展开:用对话收尾——三句怒骂(三种脾气)→ 比恩的「我有计划」。时间词 Tomorrow night 把冲突推向下一章,留下悬念。

按结构复述 · Retell by Structure(时间顺序)

这是时间顺序结构,所以复述也按时间轴:开场 → 每晚 → 埋伏 → 脱身 → 计谋。

First · 开场On a hill above the valley there was a wood — under a huge tree there was a hole.山谷上方的山坡有片树林,大树底下有个洞。
Then · 每晚Every evening Mr Fox asked Mrs Fox what she wanted, then crept down and helped himself.每晚狐狸先生问太太想吃什么,再溜下山自己拿。
Next · 埋伏The farmers knew and grew wild with rage — every night they hid with shotguns.农场主气得发狂,每晚持枪埋伏。
After · 脱身But Mr Fox smelled them from fifty yards off and quickly changed direction.可狐狸先生老远闻到气味,马上改变方向。
Finally · 计谋Bean said, "I have a plan" — tomorrow night we will hide outside the hole.比恩说:我有计划,明晚洞口守候。

小提示:与「思维导图」搭配用——把导图的枝条按 开场 → 每晚 → 埋伏 → 脱身 → 计谋 排好,先看导图复述一遍,再合上导图凭记忆复述一遍。

对峙双方 · Fox vs Farmers

Mr Fox聪明 clever · 谨慎 careful
The Farmers狂怒 rage · 发誓要抓他

示意图:一边用鼻子思考,一边用猎枪说话——你猜谁会赢?

04 · STORY MAP & RETELL

思维导图 · 复述文章Story Map & Retelling

把第二章的信息装进这张「思维导图」,再沿着复述支架讲一遍——你也能当小老师!

Mr Fox’s Night
地点人物情节智慧悬念

故事地图 · Where does the story happen?

示意图 —— 狐狸一家住在山上的树洞里,每晚下山偷食;农场主们在山谷里设伏

The Wood · 树林 Mr Fox’s hole Mr Fox’s night route Boggis’s Farm chickens 鸡 Bunce’s Farm ducks & geese 鸭鹅 Bean’s Farm turkeys & apples 火鸡苹果

复述支架 · Retell with the scaffold

把句子补充完整,就完成了第二章的复述。

1
On a hill above the valley there was a ________.
2
In the wood there was a ________ tree.
3
Under the tree there was a ________.
4
In the hole lived Mr Fox and his ________.
5
Every evening Mr Fox would ________ down into the valley for food.
6
The farmers were furious, and Bean made a ________ to catch him.

复述加分:用 First / Then / Also / Finally 把六句话串起来;先讲给同桌听,再闭上眼睛自己讲一遍。

05 · PICTURE RETELL

看图复述Retell with Pictures

5 张图卡按情节顺序排好。看着图片,用英文把第二章讲出来——点击图片可以放大,每张图点开都有一句「提示句」帮你起头。

1小山丘上的树林里有一棵巨大的老树,树根下有一个树洞
大树下的树洞
Say: “On a hill there was a wood, and in the wood there was a huge tree with a hole under it.”
山上有一片树林,树林里有棵大树,树下有个洞。
2月夜里,狐狸先生叼着一只鸭子,轻手轻脚地从山坡上走下来
夜色里的晚餐任务
Say: “Every night Mr Fox would creep down into the valley to get food for his family.”
每晚狐狸先生都会溜下山谷,为家人找食物。
3夜晚的农场里,三个农场主拿着猎枪躲在谷仓旁的阴影中
持枪埋伏的农场主
Say: “The three farmers hid in dark places with their shotguns, hoping to catch the robber.”
三个农场主拿着猎枪躲在暗处,想抓住这个贼。
4夜色中,一只狐狸立在山坡上仰头嗅着风,远处隐约有猎人身影
迎风嗅出危险
Say: “Mr Fox always approached a farm with the wind blowing in his face, so he could smell danger far away.”
狐狸先生总是迎着风接近农场,老远就能闻到危险。
5夜晚的草地上,三个农场主围坐在火堆旁密谋,高瘦的那个正指向远处
比恩的计划
Say: “Bean made a plan: wait outside the fox’s hole tomorrow night, and go Bang! Bang-bang-bang!”
比恩的计划:明晚守在狐狸洞口,等他一出来就开枪!

提示:图卡可左右滑动查看全部 5 张;点「看看提示句」展开英文句子;点图片放大全屏。

1 · First 地点→ 2 · Then 夜袭→ 3 · Next 埋伏→ 4 · Also 迎风→ 5 · Finally 计划

小挑战:先看着图讲一遍,再合上图卡,只凭记忆讲一遍——能做到,第二章就真正属于你了!

06 · WRITER’S CRAFT

写作亮点分析Why This Writing Works

这一章,Dahl 只用几句话就把狐狸爸爸的「聪明」和农场主们的「暴怒」写得活灵活现。他的秘密武器是这五招:

Zoom-in Opening · 镜头式开头
从大远景一步步推到主角家门口
On a hill above the valley there was a wood. In the wood there was a huge tree. Under the tree there was a hole. In the hole lived Mr Fox and Mrs Fox and their four Small Foxes.

小山 → 树林 → 大树 → 树洞 → 狐狸一家:每一句都缩小一点范围,像电影镜头慢慢推近,最后才揭晓主角——悬念感拉满。

小任务:模仿这个开头写你的家——In/On/Under ___ there was/were ___.
中文写作对照 · 顶真 + 排比 anadiplosis / parallelism

wood → wood,tree → tree,hole → hole:前句的结尾词就是后句的开头词,首尾相连叫「顶真」;四句又都是 there was 开头,还兼有「排比」。中文名句:归来见天子,天子坐明堂。

The Power of “would” · 习惯的力量
would 三连,写出「每晚如此」的节奏
Every evening, as soon as it got dark, Mr Fox would say to Mrs Fox, “Well, my darling, what shall it be this time? A plump chicken from Boggis? A duck or a goose from Bunce? Or a nice turkey from Bean?”
And when Mrs Fox had told him what she wanted, Mr Fox would creep down into the valley in the darkness of the night and help himself.
So every night each of them would take his shotgun and hide in a dark place somewhere on his own farm, hoping to catch the robber.

would + 动词原形表示「过去常常」。三句连起来看:would say → would creep → would take,三个 would 排在一起,把狐狸爸爸的夜生活写成固定流程——也让读者知道:今晚他还会再去。

小任务:用 would 写你爷爷的习惯——Every morning my grandpa would ___.
中文写作对照 · 排比 / 反复 repetition

would say ... would creep ... and help himself:三个 would 结构相同、节奏整齐,把「每晚如此」写成固定流程。

Fierce Dialogue · 喷火的对话
三句狠话,三个感叹号
“Dang and blast that lousy beast!” / “I’d like to rip his guts out!” / “He must be killed!”

不用旁白解释「他们很生气」,一句句狠话 + 感叹号就把怒气直接甩到读者脸上。台词越短越有力。

小任务:写三句「生气」的台词,都用感叹号结尾。
中文写作对照 · 短句 + 感叹 exclamation

三句狠话句式相似、句句带感叹号——中文修辞里是「排比式短句」,怒气直接甩到读者脸上。

Suspense Ending · 悬念收尾
省略号停在最关键处
“My dear Bunce, I’ve already found it. It’s up in the wood on the hill. It’s under a huge tree . . .”

比恩刚说出洞口位置,句子就断了——省略号像钩子,勾着读者必须翻到第三章:接下来会发生什么?

小任务:用 . . . 结尾写一个悬念句,让同学猜下文。
中文写作对照 · 留白 ellipsis

话说到一半故意停住——言有尽而意无穷,比把话说完更有悬念。

Onomatopoeia · 拟声词
用声音代替画面
“Then . . . Bang! Bang-bang-bang.”

Bang 是拟声词(模仿枪声)。连续三个 Bang,节奏像真的枪响一样急促,让读者「听见」了埋伏。

小任务:用拟声词描写一个声音(Bang / Boom / Splash / Tick-tock...)。
中文写作对照 · 摹声 onomatopoeia

用声音词直接模拟枪响,让读者「听见」画面——中文修辞里叫「摹声」或「拟声」。

Golden Line · 金句摘抄
最短的悬念,最响的声音
“Tomorrow night we will all hide just outside the hole where the fox lives. We will wait there until he comes out. Then . . . Bang! Bang-bang-bang.”

三个短句一层层收紧:地点 → 等待 → 开枪。计划越具体,悬念越强——把这段抄进你的「好句本」吧。

挑战:你能用「地点 → 等待 → 行动」三步写一个小悬念吗?
中文写作对照 · 层递 climax

地点、等待、开枪,一步比一步紧张——层层推进,把情绪顶到最高点。

句子银行 · Sentence Bank(仿写句型)

there was / were + 地点链
In the wood there was a huge tree. Under the tree there was a hole.
仿写:用三句 there was/were 从远到近介绍一个地方。
would + 动词原形(过去习惯)
Every evening Mr Fox would say ... would creep down ...
仿写:写一件你小时候「每天都会」做的事。
as soon as + 从句
As soon as it got dark, Mr Fox would say to Mrs Fox...
仿写:As soon as I got home, I ___.
too + adj + for + sb
Mr Fox was too clever for them.
仿写:The puzzle is too difficult for me. 试着自己造一句。

中西对照小发现:英文 anadiplosis 就是中文「顶真」,parallelism 就是「排比」,ellipsis 就是「留白」,onomatopoeia 就是「摹声」。给小朋友讲的时候,中英文术语可以互相借用,哪边熟讲哪边。

07 · THINK DEEPER

思考题Questions to Think About

三个难度层级:先找细节,再推原因,最后谈看法。点「提示」给一点帮助,点「答案」对照想法。

L1 · 细节 Detail

1. Where do the foxes live? 狐狸一家住在哪儿?

注意第一段的地点在不断缩小:hill → wood → tree → ?
In a hole under a huge tree in the wood on a hill above the valley — with Mrs Fox and their four Small Foxes.住在山谷上方小山上、树林里一棵大树下的洞里——和狐狸太太以及四只小狐狸住在一起。

2. What does Mr Fox ask Mrs Fox every evening? 每晚狐狸先生问太太什么?

跟「吃」有关——他列了三个选择。
“Well, my darling, what shall it be this time?” — a plump chicken, a duck or goose, or a turkey.“亲爱的,这次想吃点什么?”——一只肥鸡、一只鸭子或鹅,或者一只火鸡。

3. What do the three farmers do every night? 三个农场主每晚做什么?

找 “So every night each of them would...”
Each of them would take his shotgun and hide in a dark place on his own farm, hoping to catch the robber.他们每晚都拿着猎枪,藏在自己农场的暗处,等着抓那个小偷。

L2 · 推断 Inference

4. Why does Mr Fox walk into the wind? 狐狸先生为什么总是迎着风走?

想一想:风会把什么送到他的鼻子里?
Because the wind carries the smell of any lurking man to his nose from far away — so he can smell danger before he sees it.因为风会把远处躲着的人的气味吹进他鼻子里——他还没看见危险,就能先闻到。

5. How do you know the farmers are “wild with rage”? 从哪里看出他们气疯了?

读他们说的话——找感叹号。
Their angry words show it: “Dang and blast that lousy beast!” / “I’d like to rip his guts out!” / “He must be killed!”从他们气急败坏的话里能看出来:“该死的臭野兽!”“我真想扯出他的肠子!”“他必须被杀死!”

6. What makes Mr Fox “too clever for them”? 狐狸先生聪明在哪里?

看第四段:他靠近农场时做了什么特别的事?
He always approaches into the wind, smells the farmer 50 yards away, and quickly changes direction to another chicken house.他总是迎着风靠近,能闻到 50 码外的农夫,然后迅速改道,去另一间鸡舍。

L3 · 评价与主题 Opinion & Theme

7. Is it right for Mr Fox to take food from the farmers? Why? 狐狸先生「拿」食物对吗?为什么?

想想两边:狐狸一家要靠他养活;农场主们又是什么样的主人?
开放题。可以说:他为养家而拿,每晚只拿够吃的;但农场主的东西毕竟是别人的财产。作者故意让农场主又贪又坏,让我们更同情狐狸爸爸。

8. Will the farmers’ plan work? Why or why not? 农场主的计划会成功吗?

这次狐狸先生知道他们在洞口等着吗?他有防备吗?
开放题。狐狸先生很聪明,但他并不知道洞口已有人埋伏——所以很可能会中埋伏(这正是第三章的悬念)。欢迎有不同的猜测!

9. The next chapter is called “The Shooting”. What do you think happens? 下一章叫《枪击》,你猜会发生什么?

想想比恩的计划:明晚、洞口、Bang! Bang-bang-bang。
狐狸先生晚上出洞时很可能遭到枪击——但别担心,书名叫《了不起的狐狸爸爸》,他也许会有惊人的办法躲过一劫!(开放式答案)

中心思想 · What is this chapter really about?

Chapter 2 brings the clever Mr Fox and the furious farmers face to face — a zoom-in opening, the nightly rhythm of “would” and blazing dialogue set the stage. One side lives by wit to feed his family; the other by greed and rage. The real game is just beginning.

第二章用「镜头式地点推进 + would 的习惯节奏 + 喷火的对话」,让聪明的狐狸爸爸和暴怒的农场主正式对阵——一边是养家糊口的机智,一边是贪心刻薄的暴怒。好戏,才刚刚开场。

cleverness 机智habit 习惯suspense 悬念family 家庭
08 · WORD LAB

词汇 · 在上下文里猜词Guess from Context

每张词卡正面是原文句子——先根据上下文猜意思,再点击翻面验证。学完 12 个核心词,别忘了下面的「拓展好词」。

woodn. 名词

“On a hill above the valley there was a wood.”
猜一猜:树林 / 河流 / 山谷?

点击翻面看看 ▸
wood/wʊd/n. 树林;木材The birds are singing in the wood.近义:forest 森林
hugeadj. 形容词

“In the wood there was a huge tree.”
猜一猜:巨大的 / 矮小的 / 细长的?

点击翻面看看 ▸
huge/hjuːdʒ/adj. 巨大的The elephant is huge!近义:enormous · 反义:tiny
holen. 名词

“Under the tree there was a hole.”
猜一猜:洞 / 桥 / 房子?

点击翻面看看 ▸
hole/həʊl/n. 洞;孔The rabbit disappeared into its hole.近义:opening 口子
plumpadj. 形容词

“A plump chicken from Boggis?”
猜一猜:瘦的 / 肥美的 / 生病的?

点击翻面看看 ▸
plump/plʌmp/adj. 圆胖的;肥美的A plump tomato is ripe and juicy.近义:chubby · 反义:thin
creepv. 动词

“Mr Fox would creep down into the valley.”
猜一猜:飞奔 / 悄悄溜 / 游泳?

点击翻面看看 ▸
creep/kriːp/v. 悄悄移动;爬行(crept)The cat crept up on the mouse.近义:sneak 溜
darknessn. 名词

“in the darkness of the night”
猜一猜:黑暗 / 黎明 / 正午?

点击翻面看看 ▸
darkness/ˈdɑːknəs/n. 黑暗The stars shone in the darkness.反义:light 光明
ragen. 名词

“it made them wild with rage”
猜一猜:快乐 / 狂怒 / 担心?

点击翻面看看 ▸
rage/reɪdʒ/n. 盛怒;狂怒He was shaking with rage.近义:anger, fury
robbern. 名词

“hoping to catch the robber”
猜一猜:小偷 / 警察 / 邮差?

点击翻面看看 ▸
robber/ˈrɒbə(r)/n. 强盗;盗贼The robber ran away with the money.近义:thief 小偷
lurkingv. 动词

“if any man were lurking in the shadows”
猜一猜:潜伏 / 唱歌 / 跑步?

点击翻面看看 ▸
lurking/ˈlɜːkɪŋ/v. 潜伏;埋伏(lurk 的现在分词)A cat was lurking under the car.近义:hiding 躲藏
smelln./v. 名词/动词

“the wind would carry the smell of that man”
猜一猜:气味 / 声音 / 颜色?

点击翻面看看 ▸
smell/smel/n. 气味 v. 闻出I can smell fresh bread.搭配:smell out 闻出来
decentadj. 形容词

“You’ve never had a decent plan yet.”
猜一猜:像样的 / 可怕的 / 古怪的?

点击翻面看看 ▸
decent/ˈdiːsnt/adj. 像样的;不错的He finally got a decent job.近义:proper, fine
craftyadj. 形容词

“said the crafty Bean”
猜一猜:老实的 / 狡猾的 / 懒惰的?

点击翻面看看 ▸
crafty/ˈkrɑːfti/adj. 狡猾的;诡计多端的The crafty fox tricked the farmer.近义:sly, cunning

拓展好词 · More Words from This Chapter

WordMeaning 释义From the text 原文
beastn. 畜生;野兽“Dang and blast that lousy beast!”
shotgunn. 猎枪“would take his shotgun”
gutsn. 内脏;胆量“I’d like to rip his guts out!”
blightern.(口语)家伙;讨厌鬼“catch the blighter”
delicatelyadv. 小心翼翼地“picked his nose delicately”
approachv. 接近;靠近“approached a farm”
09 · GRAMMAR FOCUS

语法 · 从原文句子学语法Grammar from the Story

本章的 5 个语法点都藏在课文句子里:每个点按「规则 → 原文例句 → 即时练习」三步走,最后做 8 道综合小测检验。先划时态标志词和连接词,再判断时态与句型。

There be 句型 · 镜头式地点链

There be + place chain

规则:there be 表示“某处有某物”,be 动词由后面的名词决定:单数用 is/was,复数用 are/were。描述过去用 there was / there were。地点状语可以放在句首:In the wood there was a huge tree.

P1On a hill there was a wood. In the wood there was a huge tree. Under the tree there was a hole.

三个 there was 连续出现,地点从大到小——镜头式地点链由此而来。

即时练习

1In the wood there ___ (be) a huge tree.

2On the hill there ___ (be) three farms.

3There ___ (be) a fox and four small foxes in the hole. A. was B. were C. is

参考答案与解析

1. was——a huge tree 是单数,故事用过去时,用 there was。
2. were——three farms 是复数,用 there were。
3. A / C 均可,参考答案 is——就近原则:离 be 最近的是 a fox(单数),用 is;故事里也可用 was。

would + 动词原形 · 过去习惯

would + verb (past habit)

规则:would + 动词原形表示过去常常做的事(现在可能不做了)。时间标志:every evening / every night / when I was little。它让「每晚如此」的节奏感很强。

P2Every evening ... Mr Fox would say to Mrs Fox ... Mr Fox would creep down ... and help himself.

三个 would 排比,把狐狸爸爸的「夜班工作」写得像固定流程。

即时练习

1Every morning my grandpa would ___ (take) a walk in the park.

2When I was little, I would ___ (play) with my dog in the garden.

3The farmers would ___ (hide) in dark places every night.

参考答案与解析

1. take——would 后面永远用动词原形。
2. play——would + play 原形,表示小时候的习惯。
3. hide——would + hide 原形,表示农场主每晚的固定动作。

时间状语从句 · as soon as / until

Time clauses

规则:as soon as(一……就)、until(直到……才)引导时间状语从句,说明主句动作发生的时间。从句位置可前可后,放前面时加逗号。

P2As soon as it got dark, Mr Fox would say to Mrs Fox... P5We will wait there until he comes out.

天一黑就出发;一直等到他出来——时间关系清清楚楚。

即时练习

1___ ___ ___ it got dark, Mr Fox left the hole. A. As soon as B. Until C. Because

2We waited ___ the rain stopped. A. as soon as B. until C. if

3用 as soon as 把两个句子连起来:I got home. I did my homework.

参考答案与解析

1. A(As soon as)——「天一黑,就……」表示紧接着发生。
2. B(until)——「一直等到雨停」用 until。
3. As soon as I got home, I did my homework.——一回家就写作业。

条件句 · if ... would

if-clauses

规则:if 引导条件状语从句,说明「如果……就会……」。与将来可能有关时:if 从句用一般现在时,主句用 will/would + 动词原形。这里还藏着虚拟语气:if any man were lurking(其实没有人在埋伏)用 were 表示假设。

P4If any man were lurking in the shadows, the wind would carry the smell ... P4If Mr Boggis was hiding ..., Mr Fox would smell him out.

假设一成立,结果就跟着来——这是狐狸爸爸的「雷达系统」。

即时练习

1If it ___ (rain) tomorrow, we will stay at home.

2If the wind ___ (blow) the smell, Mr Fox will smell danger.

3If I were a fox, I ___ (be) as clever as Mr Fox! A. will B. would C. am

参考答案与解析

1. rains——if 从句用一般现在时,主语 it 用 rains。
2. blows——the wind 是第三人称单数,用 blows。
3. B(would)——If I were ... 是虚拟假设,主句用 would。

对话引语 · said / cried + 主语

Speech verbs

规则:引语后面常用 said / cried / asked + 主语。主语是名词时常常倒装:cried Boggis(= Boggis cried);主语是人称代词时不倒装:he said。

P5“Dang and blast that lousy beast!” cried Boggis. “I have a plan,” he said.

cried / said 放在说话人后面,句子更紧凑,语气也更「像小说」。

即时练习

1“Help!” ___ the boy. A. cried B. said C. asked

2“I’m hungry,” ___ my little sister.

3把 “Let’s go!” said she. 改成正常语序:she ___。

参考答案与解析

1. A(cried)——呼救用 cried 更有画面感。
2. said——主语 my little sister 是名词,可写成 said my little sister 或 my little sister said。
3. said——she said。记住:代词主语不倒装。

语法四步策略:① 找时态标志词(every evening / as soon as / tomorrow night → 判断过去、现在还是将来);② 看主语定 be 动词(单数 is/was,复数 are/were);③ 辨连接词(as soon as / until / if 各管一类从句);④ 代入回读——把答案放回句子读一遍,通顺才算对。
10 · QUICK QUIZ

小测验Check What You’ve Got

5 道选择题 + 1 个配对游戏。先做选择题,再做配对,看看你能得几分!

1狐狸一家住在哪里?

2“A plump chicken” — what does plump mean? plump 是什么意思?

3狐狸先生怎样提前发现危险?

4“He must be killed!” — who cried this? 谁喊的这句话?

5Bean 的计划是什么?

0 / 5
选择题得分
做完 5 道选择题,看看你的成绩!

配对游戏 · Match the Farmer to His Words

先点左边的农场主,再点右边他说的话。

FARMER 农场主
WORDS 台词

还有 3 对要配对。

11 · STUDY GUIDE

学习指南Study Guide & Answer Key

这一页是你的自学地图:学习目标、学习步骤和全部答案都在这里,跟着走就能通关第二章。

学习目标 Learning Objectives
  • 阅读策略:学会用上下文猜生词(plump / creep / crafty 等);梳理「镜头式地点链」和人物对立关系。
  • 语言知识:掌握 12 个核心词汇;认识 there be 地点链、would 表习惯、as soon as / until / if 从句。
  • 写作技巧:学习镜头式开头、对话塑造、悬念结尾、拟声词四种手法,并完成仿写。
  • 思维表达:借助思维导图完整复述第二章;能区分「细节—推断—评价」三类问题。
学习步骤 Suggested Steps
  • 第 1 步 · 热身(课前 10 分钟):读前热身 → 作者回顾 → 预测活动;用朗读功能听读或播放第一段。
  • 第 2 步 · 精读(课中 25 分钟):精读原文(点击生词卡)→ 人物档案 → 思维导图梳理 → 写作亮点讲解。
  • 第 3 步 · 巩固(课后 15 分钟):复述支架练习 → 思考题分层挑战 → 小测验 → 仿写练习。
  • 小提示:如果觉得难,先完成 L1 细节题和配对游戏;想挑战自己,试试 L3 评价题和「三步悬念」仿写。
参考答案 Answer Key
  • 预测题:B — too clever for them,迎风闻出危险。
  • 复述支架:① wood ② huge ③ hole ④ family ⑤ creep ⑥ plan。
  • 思考题:见各题「答案」按钮;L3 开放题言之有理即可。
  • 选择题:1-B 2-C 3-B 4-C 5-A。
  • 配对:Boggis→lousy beast;Bunce→rip guts;Bean→must be killed。
更多精读玩法 More Ideas
  • 分角色朗读:一人演狐狸先生(温和机智),两人演农场主(怒气冲冲),大声读对话。
  • 迎风侦察游戏:蒙眼同学「闻风」判断同伴藏在哪边,体验狐狸爸爸的本领。
  • 读书日志 Reading Log:每章记录 3 个新词、1 句金句、1 个问题。
  • 人物追踪表:把狐狸先生和三位农场主的新情报记下来,整理成一张自己的角色追踪海报。
  • 金句仿写集:把每章的句子银行仿写抄进自己的好句本,攒成一本小诗集。
  • 跨章对比:读完第 3 章 The Shooting 后,对比「狐狸先生的夜袭 vs 农场主的埋伏」。