CHAPTER 8 · 全书共 18 章

The Foxes Begin to Starve 狐狸们开始挨饿

第七章结尾,三个农场主在洞口扎营发誓:绝不放过狐狸。这一章,围困升级了——108 个男人手持武器把整座山围得水泄不通;洞里,小狐狸们饿得直叫,狐狸爸爸却在一片沉默里,悄悄地闻、悄悄地想……

作者 Roald Dahl 体裁 章节书 · 小说 重点 围困 · 诱惑 · 数字递进 · 悬念 适合 词汇量 3000+ 的阅读者 · Lexile 600L
夜晚,火山口里搭起三顶帐篷,周围一圈拿枪拿手电筒的男人把整座山围住,洞里一只小狐狸探出头,又饿又怕
One Hundred and Eight Men Surround the Hill —— 108 个人把山围住
8Chapter 8
01 · BEFORE YOU READ

读前热身Before You Read

The farmers have camped around Mr Fox’s hole and sworn to catch him. Now the siege tightens: one hundred and eight men surround the whole hill. Down in the tunnel, the fox family grows hungrier and hungrier. Now read “The Foxes Begin to Starve” and feel the silence inside the hole.农场主在狐狸洞口扎营,发誓要抓到狐狸。现在围困升级:一百零八个人把整座山团团围住。隧道深处,狐狸一家越来越饿。现在来读《狐狸们开始挨饿》,感受洞口里那片沉默。

About the Author · 关于作者

Roald Dahl loves a feast — and he loves to tease his readers with it. In Chapter 8 the farmers eat a huge supper right above the hungry foxes: three boiled chickens, six doughnuts, two gallons of cider. Dahl piles up the food, then piles up the danger: one hundred and eight men, guns and flashlights, surround the hill. He also builds the suspense (悬念): the cubs cry “We’re so hungry!” — and their parents say nothing at all.罗尔德·达尔爱写「盛宴」——也爱拿盛宴逗读者。第八章里,农场主就在挨饿的狐狸头顶上大吃大喝:三只白煮鸡、六个甜甜圈、两加仑苹果酒。达尔先堆食物,再堆危险:一百零八个人、枪和手电筒,围住整座山。他还在造「悬念」:小狐狸喊“我们好饿!”——而爸爸妈妈一句话也不说。

What Happened Before · 上一章回顾

Bean tried to send Bunce down the hole to fetch the fox, but Bunce screamed “Not me!” and ran away. So Bean decided to starve the fox out: “We camp here day and night watching the hole.” The three men shook hands and swore a solemn oath — they would not go home until the fox was caught.比恩想让邦斯下洞抓狐狸,邦斯却尖叫“不,我不去!”跑开了。于是比恩决定把狐狸饿出来:“我们日夜扎营守着洞口。”三人握手发下毒誓——不抓到狐狸绝不回家。

Reading Tip · 阅读小贴士:Watch three things: ① the numbers — 35, 36, 37 men grow into 108; ② the scent — “The rich scent of chicken wafted down the tunnel”; ③ the silence — “There was no answer to give.” More numbers, more danger; more hunger, less talk!注意三样东西:①数字——35、36、37 个工人越加越多,最后变成 108;②气味——“浓郁的鸡肉香飘进隧道”;③沉默——“没有答案可以回答。”数字越多越危险,肚子越饿话越少!

Predict · 猜一猜

The foxes are trapped and starving. What do you think will happen next?第八章叫《The Foxes Begin to Starve 狐狸们开始挨饿》。洞里没有食物,外面全是枪,狐狸一家会怎么办?

Pick one to remember your prediction — come back after reading to check!
点一个选项记住你的预测,读完全章后回来揭晓答案。

The Answer Is B!Mr Fox does not surrender. He creeps to the mouth of the tunnel, sniffs the air, and thinks. He tells his family, “They’re still there” — but he is already planning a way out. The next chapter is called “Mr Fox Has a Plan”!狐狸爸爸没有投降。他悄悄爬到隧道口,闻了闻空气,然后开始想。他告诉家人:“他们还在那儿”——可他已经在计划一条出路了。下一章叫《狐狸先生有办法》!

Two more questions after reading · 还有两个小问题:

1. What did Boggis tempt the fox with?
博吉斯拿什么引诱狐狸?
2. How many men surrounded the hill?
多少人包围了这座山?

02 · READ & EXPLORE

原文精读Read & Explore

跟着原文读一遍。橙色单词先别查——根据上下文猜一猜。点击任意单词弹出词典卡片(中英释义 · 发音 · 例句);点段落开头的 ▶ 听朗读(英式男声)。

Chapter 8 · The Foxes Begin to Starve

That evening three tents were put up in the crater on the hill — one for Boggis, one for Bunce and one for Bean. The tents surrounded Mr Fox’s hole. And the three farmers sat outside their tents eating their supper. Boggis had three boiled chickens smothered in dumplings, Bunce had six doughnuts filled with disgusting goose-liver paste, and Bean had two gallons of cider. All three of them kept their guns beside them.

段落大意:那天傍晚,火山口里搭起三顶帐篷,把狐狸洞口团团围住。三个农场主坐在帐篷外吃晚饭:博吉斯吃三只裹着团子的白煮鸡,邦斯吃六个填了恶心鹅肝酱的甜甜圈,比恩喝两加仑苹果酒——枪都放在身边。
三顶帐篷围住洞口,农场主吃晚餐
P1 · 大餐与挨饿 —— 鲜明的反差Feast and Hunger — A Loud Contrast
修辞手法 · 排比与对比Rhetoric · Parallelism & Contrast
Boggis ate three boiled chickens ... Bunce ate six doughnuts filled with disgusting goose-liver paste ... Bean drank two gallons of cider.
Three feasts in three parallel clauses — while underground the foxes go hungry. The lavish details make the unfairness feel almost physical.三份大餐三句平行句式——而地下的狐狸正在挨饿。丰盛的细节让这份不公几乎有了触感。
表达方式 · 细节描写Expression · Detail
All three had their guns beside them.
One flat sentence ends the feast: guns at hand. Luxury and menace sit at the same table — the trap is baited and armed.一句平淡的话收住盛宴:枪就在手边。奢侈与威胁同桌而坐——陷阱既下了饵,也上了膛。

Boggis picked up a steaming chicken and held it close to the fox’s hole. “Can you smell this, Mr Fox?” he shouted. “Lovely tender chicken! Why don’t you come up and get it?” The rich scent of chicken wafted down the tunnel to where the foxes were crouching.

段落大意:博吉斯拎起一只冒着热气的鸡凑到洞口:“狐狸先生,闻闻这个!香喷喷的嫩鸡!你上来拿呀?”浓郁的鸡肉香飘进隧道,飘到狐狸们蹲伏着的地方。
博吉斯拎着热鸡在洞口引诱
P2 · 诱饵 —— 香喷喷的嫩鸡The Bait — A Steaming Chicken
表达方式 · 语言描写Expression · Dialogue
“Mr Fox! Just smell this! A lovely tender chicken! Won’t you come up and get it?”
The words drip with honey but hide a gun: come up and get it is a trap wearing a smile. Dialogue shows cruelty disguised as kindness.话语甜得像蜜,底下却藏着枪:「你上来拿呀」是披着笑脸的陷阱。对话让我们看见伪装成善意的残忍。
修辞手法 · 通感Rhetoric · Synaesthesia
The delicious smell of the chicken drifted down the tunnel ... to where the foxes were crouching.
The smell itself travels down the tunnel — we feel the hunger through the nose, not the page. One scent carries the whole trap into the foxes’ home.香味自己顺着隧道飘下去——读者用鼻子而不是纸页感到饥饿。一缕香气把整个陷阱送进狐狸家里。

“Oh, Dad,” said one of the Small Foxes, “couldn’t we just sneak up and snatch it out of his hand?” “Don’t you dare!” said Mrs Fox. “That’s just what they want you to do.” “But we’re so hungry!” they cried. “How long will it be till we get something to eat?” Their mother didn’t answer them. Nor did their father. There was no answer to give.

段落大意:“爸爸,”一只小狐狸说,“我们不能偷偷爬上去,把鸡从他手里抢过来吗?”“你敢!”狐狸太太说,“那正是他们要你做的。”“可我们好饿!”小狐狸们喊,“还要多久才有东西吃?”妈妈没有回答,爸爸也没有回答——没有答案可以给。
小狐狸们饿得直喊
P3 · 喊饿 —— 没有答案的问题Hungry — A Question with No Answer
表达方式 · 语言描写Expression · Dialogue
“Can’t we sneak up and snatch the chicken from him?” ... “That’s exactly what they want you to do,” said Mrs Fox.
A child’s brave plan meets a mother’s clear warning: the dialogue teaches the rule of the siege without a single lecture.孩子的勇敢提议撞上妈妈的清醒警告:一段对话讲清围困的规则,不用半句说教。
表达方式 · 心理描写Expression · Mind
“But we are so hungry!” ... Mother did not answer. Father did not answer. There was no answer to give.
Three short sentences of silence: no answer to give. The pause itself is the heaviest sentence in the chapter — hunger has no easy way out.三句沉默的短句:没有答案可以给。这停顿本身是全章最重的一句话——饥饿没有捷径。

As darkness fell, Bunce and Bean switched on the powerful headlamps of the two tractors and shone them on to the hole. “Now,” said Bean, “we’ll take it in turn to keep watch. One watches while two sleep, and so on all through the night.” Boggis said, “What if the fox digs a hole right through the hill and comes out on the other side? You didn’t think of that one, did you?” “Of course I did,” said Bean, pretending he had. “Go on, then, tell us the answer,” said Boggis.

段落大意:天黑后,邦斯和比恩打开两台拖拉机的大灯照着洞口。“现在,”比恩说,“我们轮流守夜:一人守着、两人睡,整夜如此。”博吉斯问:“要是狐狸挖穿这座山,从另一边跑出来呢?你没想到吧?”“我当然想到了,”比恩假装想过的样子。“那你说说答案,”博吉斯说。
拖拉机大灯照着洞口守夜
P4 · 守夜与漏洞 —— 假装想过了Night Watch — The Hole in the Plan
表达方式 · 对话Expression · Dialogue
“What if the fox digs through the hill and comes out the other side? You didn’t think of that, did you?” ... “I did think of that,” Bean said, pretending that he had.
One question pokes a hole in the great plan, and Bean pretends his way out of it — the dialogue quietly mocks the farmers’ cleverness.一个问题戳破完美计划,比恩用假装补上窟窿——这段对话悄悄嘲笑农场主的「聪明」。
表现手法 · 喜剧反讽Technique · Comic Irony
“I did think of that,” Bean said, pretending that he had.
Pretending that he had: the narrator tells us the truth behind the lie. Irony lets the reader laugh at Bean while the farmers stay proud.Pretending that he had:叙述者揭穿谎言背后的真相。反讽让读者笑比恩,农场主们却还得意着。

Bean picked something small and black out of his ear and flicked it away. “How many men have you got working on your farm?” he asked. “Thirty-five,” Boggis said. “I’ve got thirty-six,” Bunce said. “And I’ve got thirty-seven,” Bean said. “That makes one hundred and eight men altogether. We must order them to surround the hill. Each man will have a gun and a flashlight. There will be no escape then for Mr Fox.” So the order went down to the farms, and that night one hundred and eight men formed a tight ring around the bottom of the hill. They were armed with sticks and guns and hatchets and pistols and all sorts of other horrible weapons. This made it quite impossible for a fox or indeed for any other animal to escape from the hill. The next day, the watching and waiting went on. Boggis and Bunce and Bean sat upon small stools, staring at the fox’s hole. They didn’t talk much. They just sat there with their guns on their laps. Every so often, Mr Fox would creep a little closer towards the mouth of the tunnel and take a sniff. Then he would creep back again and say, “They’re still there.” “Are you quite sure?” Mrs Fox would ask. “Positive,” said Mr Fox. “I can smell that man Bean a mile away. He stinks.”

段落大意:比恩从耳朵里挖出一点黑东西弹掉:“你农场有多少工人?”“35个。”“我36个。”“我37个。一共108个人!我们命令他们包围这座山,每人一支枪、一只手电筒,狐狸就跑不掉了!”当晚,108个人把山脚围成铁桶,棍棒、枪、斧头、手枪全带上了。第二天,三人坐在小凳上盯着洞口,话不多说。狐狸爸爸不时悄悄爬到隧道口闻一闻,再爬回来说:“他们还在。”“你确定?”狐狸太太问。“确定。我一里外就能闻到比恩那家伙——他臭得很。”
一百零八人把山围成铁桶
P5 · 铁桶阵 —— 108 人围山The Ring — 108 Men Close In
修辞手法 · 夸张Rhetoric · Exaggeration
“We will order them to surround the hill! Every man with a gun and a flashlight!”
One hundred and eight men, guns and flashlights: the number turns a grudge into an army. Exaggeration makes the odds feel impossible.一百零八人、枪和手电筒:一个数字把私怨变成军队。夸张让劣势显得几乎无解。
表达方式 · 细节与呼应Expression · Detail & Echo
“I can smell that Bean fellow from a mile away — he stinks!”
The fox’s nose returns from Chapter 3: the same boast, now used as the family’s only spy. A tiny echo turns a joke into courage.狐狸的鼻子从第三章回来了:同一句夸口,现在成了全家唯一的哨兵。一个小小的呼应,把玩笑变成了勇气。
03 · CHARACTER CARDS

人物档案Who Is on Stage Tonight

这一章:外面是丰盛的晚餐、刺眼的车灯、108 个拿枪的男人;里面是饿着肚子的小狐狸、拦着孩子的妈妈,和一位悄悄闻风、一声不响的狐狸爸爸。

IN THE TUNNEL

Mr Fox

狐狸先生 · 悄悄嗅探的守望者
SNIFF 嗅探“Mr Fox would creep a little closer… and take a sniff.” 悄悄爬近洞口闻风
REPORT 汇报“They’re still there.” “Positive.” 冷静、简短、可信
HUMOUR 幽默“I can smell that man Bean a mile away. He stinks.” 饿着肚子还有心情说俏皮话
THE PROTECTOR

Mrs Fox

狐狸太太 · 拦着孩子的保护者
FORBID 禁止“Don’t you dare!” 一眼识破这是圈套
WISDOM 智慧“That’s just what they want you to do.” 忍得住饥饿,看得清危险
SILENCE 沉默孩子喊饿,她不回答——因为真的没有答案
THE SIEGE

Boggis · Bunce · Bean

三巨头 · 围困部队的总指挥
Boggis 博吉斯“Lovely tender chicken!” 用美食当诱饵
Bean 比恩“One hundred and eight men altogether.” 数人头、下命令的军师
STYLE 风格吃大餐、亮车灯、轮流守夜——围而不打

描写分析 · Descriptions That Move the Story

这一章写围困与引诱。记叙文写「对峙」,可以写食物的香气、写安静的等待,让空气都紧张起来。

人物描写 · CHARACTER外貌 · 语言 · 动作 · 心理 · 神态
外貌描写 · APPEARANCE

Boggis had three boiled chickens smothered in dumplings, Bunce had six doughnuts filled with disgusting goose-liver paste, and Bean had two gallons of cider.

Each farmer's supper matches his body: huge Boggis eats huge food, tiny Bunce eats sweet junk, clever Bean drinks cider. Food describes character.

每个农场主的晚餐都配得上体型:胖博吉斯吃大份鸡肉,矮邦斯吃甜点,精明的比恩喝苹果酒。吃什么,也写什么人。

语言描写 · SPEECH

"Can you smell this, Mr Fox?" he shouted. "Lovely tender chicken! Why don't you come up and get it?"

Boggis uses food as a weapon, pretending to be friendly. Speech that sounds kind but is a trap shows a sly side of the farmer.

博吉斯拿食物当武器,假装热情。听上去友善、其实是陷阱的台词,写出农场主的狡猾一面。

动作描写 · ACTION

Boggis picked up a steaming chicken and held it close to the fox's hole.

One deliberate action — holding the hot chicken at the hole — makes the temptation almost real. We can smell it with the foxes.

一个刻意的动作——把热腾腾的鸡举到洞口——让诱惑几乎成真。我们仿佛和狐狸一起闻到了香味。

心理描写 · PSYCHOLOGY

There was no answer to give.

The parents' silence says everything: hungry, but no safe answer exists. Five words of inner emptiness are heavier than any speech.

父母的沉默说明一切:饿,但没有任何安全的答案。五个字里的内心空茫,比任何台词都重。

神态描写 · EXPRESSION

Boggis and Bunce and Bean sat upon small stools, staring at the fox's hole. They didn't talk much. They just sat there with their guns on their laps.

Expression through stillness: staring, not talking, guns on laps. Silence is the farmers' mood — patient, stubborn and a little absurd.

用静止写神情:盯着洞口、不说话、枪搁在腿上。沉默就是农场主的心情——耐心、固执,还有一点滑稽。

环境描写 · ENVIRONMENT场景 · 景物 · 氛围
环境描写 · ENVIRONMENT

That evening three tents were put up in the crater on the hill — one for Boggis, one for Bunce and one for Bean. The tents surrounded Mr Fox's hole.

Tents in a crater: home comforts brought into a battlefield. The image of the three tents surrounding the tiny hole shows the siege — many against one.

火山口里搭起三顶帐篷:把家常搬进战场。三顶帐篷围住小小的洞口,一图写尽围困——以多对一。

文章结构 · Story Structure 围困僵局 · The Siege

这一章是「围困加深」:大餐与挨饿(反差)→ 香鸡诱饵 → 孩子喊饿(考验)→ 守夜与漏洞 → 108 人铁桶阵(升级)。地面上的包围圈越缩越紧,地下的一家人越来越饿。

Para 1 · 开场 · 大餐与挨饿

Boggis ate three boiled chickens ... Bunce ate six doughnuts ... Bean drank two gallons of cider. ... All three had their guns beside them.

三个农场主在洞口大吃大喝,枪就放在手边。

How it expands · 怎么展开:用「反差」展开:丰盛的三餐(排比句式)对地下的饥饿——再补一句「枪在手边」,饱足与危险同框,围困的基调立刻立住。

推进 · Steps ×3诱饵 → 考验 → 升级
Step 2 · 诱饵

“Mr Fox! Just smell this! A lovely tender chicken! Won’t you come up and get it?”

博吉斯举着热鸡引诱:香喷喷的嫩鸡,你上来拿呀?

How it expands · 怎么展开:围绕 smell / come up 展开:先给声音(甜言蜜语),再给气味(香飘入洞)。用「闻得到、够不着」把诱饵的残忍写具体。

Step 3 · 考验

“But we are so hungry!” ... Mother did not answer. Father did not answer. There was no answer to give.

小狐狸喊饿,妈妈爸爸都没有回答。

How it expands · 怎么展开:用「沉默」展开:孩子的计划被妈妈拦住(那是诱饵),可饥饿没有答案——三句短句写沉默,沉默写绝望。

Step 4 · 守夜与漏洞

“What if the fox digs through the hill and comes out the other side?” ... “I did think of that,” Bean said, pretending that he had.

比恩安排轮流守夜;博吉斯问挖穿山怎么办,比恩假装想过了。

How it expands · 怎么展开:用「漏洞与补救」展开:新计谋(守夜)刚立,新漏洞(挖穿山)立刻被戳——比恩的假装让农场主的聪明减了几分可信。

Step 5 · 收束 · 铁桶阵

“We will order them to surround the hill! Every man with a gun and a flashlight!” ... “I can smell that Bean fellow from a mile away!”

108 人包围整座山;狐狸爸爸靠鼻子探哨:他们还在。

How it expands · 怎么展开:用「数字」收尾:108 人、每人一枪一手电,包围圈成形;再落回狐狸的鼻子(呼应第 3 章)——一边是钢铁的人数,一边是感官的机警。

按结构复述 · Retell by Structure(围困僵局)

这是「围困」结构,复述时沿着包围圈收紧:大餐 → 诱饵 → 喊饿 → 守夜 → 铁桶阵。

First · 大餐Around the hole the farmers feasted — chickens, doughnuts, cider — with guns at their sides.洞口外农场主大吃大喝,枪在手边。
Then · 诱饵Boggis waved a steaming chicken at the hole: “Won’t you come up and get it?”博吉斯举着热鸡引诱:「你上来拿呀?」
Next · 喊饿The cubs cried that they were hungry, but there was no answer to give.小狐狸喊饿,却没有人答得上来。
Then · 守夜At night they took turns watching the hole, with tractor beams lighting it.夜里他们用车灯照着洞口轮流守夜。
Finally · 铁桶阵One hundred and eight men surrounded the hill with guns and flashlights — and Mr Fox reported, “They are still there.”108 人持枪包围整座山,狐狸爸爸说:「他们还在。」

小提示:与「思维导图」搭配用——把导图的枝条按 大餐 → 诱饵 → 喊饿 → 守夜 → 铁桶阵 排好,先看导图复述一遍,再合上导图凭记忆复述一遍。

围困 · The Siege

Outside ↑ 外面晚餐 · 车灯 · 108 人持枪
Inside ↓ 里面黑暗 · 饥饿 · 沉默与嗅探

示意图:外面越热闹,里面越安静——这就是围困。

04 · STORY MAP & RETELL

思维导图 · 复述文章Story Map & Retelling

把第八章的信息装进这张「思维导图」,再沿着复述支架讲一遍——你也能当小老师!

The Siege of the Hill
地点人物情节关键结果

复述支架 · Retell with the scaffold

把句子补充完整,就完成了第八章的复述。

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That evening three ________ were put up in the crater on the hill.
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Boggis had three boiled ________ smothered in dumplings.
3
“Couldn’t we just ________ up and snatch it out of his hand?” asked a Small Fox.
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“Don’t you ________!” said Mrs Fox. “That’s just what they want you to do.”
5
“We must order them to ________ the hill,” said Bean. Each man will have a gun and a flashlight.
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“Positive,” said Mr Fox. “I can ________ that man Bean a mile away. He stinks.”

复述加分:用 First / Then / Next / Also / Finally 把六句话串起来;讲到帐篷里的三份大餐(three boiled chickens / six doughnuts / two gallons of cider)时放慢,报菜名一样报出来;讲到 108 这个数字时拖长、加重:one hundred and eight——数字越大,危险越大!

05 · PICTURE RETELL

看图复述Retell with Pictures

5 张图卡按情节顺序排好。看着图片,用英文把第八章讲出来——点击图片可以放大,每张图点开都有一句「提示句」帮你起头。

1火山口里搭起三顶帐篷,三个农场主坐在帐篷外吃晚餐,博吉斯面前是鸡、邦斯面前是甜甜圈、比恩抱着大罐子,枪都靠在身边,旁边是小狐狸洞口
扎营吃大餐
Say: “That evening three tents were put up in the crater on the hill. The farmers sat outside their tents eating their supper — chickens, doughnuts and cider. Guns beside them.”
那天傍晚,火山口里搭起三顶帐篷。农场主坐在帐篷外吃晚饭——鸡、甜甜圈和苹果酒,枪都放在身边。
2博吉斯蹲在洞口,手里举着一只冒着热气的香喷喷的鸡,洞口上方飘着香味,洞里隐约有几只狐狸的眼睛在黑暗中闪光
鸡肉的诱惑
Say: “Boggis picked up a steaming chicken and held it close to the hole. ‘Can you smell this, Mr Fox? Lovely tender chicken! Why don’t you come up and get it?’ The rich scent wafted down the tunnel.”
博吉斯拎起一只冒热气的鸡凑到洞口:“狐狸先生,闻闻这个!香喷喷的嫩鸡!你上来拿呀?”浓郁的香味飘进隧道。
3黑暗的隧道里,三只小狐狸张着嘴喊饿,狐狸妈妈挡在前面伸爪拦住它们,表情严肃,地上空空的,气氛又暗又饿
洞里喊饿
Say: “‘Couldn’t we just sneak up and snatch it out of his hand?’ ‘Don’t you dare!’ said Mrs Fox. ‘But we’re so hungry!’ they cried. There was no answer to give.”
“我们不能偷偷爬上去抢吗?”“你敢!”狐狸太太说。“可我们好饿!”小狐狸们喊。没有答案可以给。
4夜里,两辆拖拉机的头灯射出两道光柱照向小狐狸洞口,三个农场主坐在小凳上守着,一人醒着两人打盹,星空下紧张又安静
车灯守夜
Say: “As darkness fell, Bunce and Bean switched on the powerful headlamps and shone them on to the hole. ‘We’ll take it in turn to keep watch. One watches while two sleep, and so on all through the night.’”
天黑后,邦斯和比恩打开强力车灯照着洞口:“我们轮流守夜:一人守着、两人睡,整夜如此。”
5夜色中,一百多个拿枪拿手电筒的男人在山脚围成一个大圈,手电光连成一圈亮线,把整座山围住,山顶火山口里三顶帐篷若隐若现
108 人包围
Say: “One hundred and eight men formed a tight ring around the bottom of the hill. They were armed with sticks and guns and hatchets and pistols. The next day, Mr Fox crept to the mouth of the tunnel, took a sniff, and said, ‘They’re still there.’”
108 个人在山脚围成铁桶,拿着棍棒、枪、斧头和手枪。第二天,狐狸爸爸爬到隧道口闻了闻,说:“他们还在。”

提示:图卡可左右滑动查看全部 5 张;点「看看提示句」展开英文句子;点图片放大全屏。

1 · First 扎营吃大餐→ 2 · Then 鸡肉的诱惑→ 3 · Next 洞里喊饿→ 4 · Also 车灯守夜→ 5 · Finally 108 人包围

小挑战:先看着图讲一遍,再合上图卡,只凭记忆讲一遍——能做到,第八章就真正属于你了!

06 · WRITER’S CRAFT

写作亮点分析Why This Writing Works

这一章,Dahl 不写打斗,写「等待」:一顿大餐、一根鸡腿、一句悄悄话,就写出了围困的紧张。秘密武器是这六招:

Number Progression · 数字递进
35 → 36 → 37 → 108
“How many men have you got working on your farm?” — “Thirty-five,” Boggis said. “I’ve got thirty-six,” Bunce said. “And I’ve got thirty-seven,” Bean said. “That makes one hundred and eight men altogether.”

Dahl 不直接说「108 个人来了」。他先让三个人一个一个报数:35、36、37——像在往上堆砖头,最后 “That makes one hundred and eight” 一句收口,数字一落地,包围圈就合拢了。读者跟着数,越数越怕。

小任务:用「报数堆叠」写一句:I have 5 books. She has 6. He has 7. That makes ___ altogether.
中文写作对照 · 层递 gradation

数字从小到大一步步堆上去——中文叫「层递」;35、36、37 再到 108,就像古书里“一传十、十传百”,数字越滚越大,气势越来越压人。

Sensory Detail · 感官细节
香味会「飘」
“The rich scent of chicken wafted down the tunnel to where the foxes were crouching.”

waft 是「(气味)飘送」。Dahl 不用鼻子说「闻到了」,而用 waft 写出香味自己会走路:从博吉斯的手上,一路飘进隧道,飘到狐狸们蹲着的地方。只写香味,读者就闻到了鸡肉——也闻到了饥饿。

小任务:用 waft / drift / float 写一种气味飘过来的句子(如:The smell of coffee wafted into my room.)。
中文写作对照 · 通感/以味传情 synaesthesia

用嗅觉写场面——中文叫「通感」或「以味传情」;“香味飘进隧道”,就像古诗里“暗香浮动月黄昏”,一个味道,勾出整段心情。

Dialogue of Temptation · 诱惑对话
一句诱饵对一句喝止
“Can you smell this, Mr Fox? Lovely tender chicken! Why don’t you come up and get it?” — “Don’t you dare!” said Mrs Fox. “That’s just what they want you to do.”

博吉斯连用三个问句当诱饵(Can you...? Why don’t you...?)——像钓鱼下钩;狐狸太太只用一句 Don’t you dare! 喝住孩子——像一把剪刀剪断鱼线。一问一喝,两句对话就把「诱惑 vs 清醒」写得明明白白。

小任务:写一个「诱惑 + 拒绝」的两句对话(如:“Come on, one more piece!” — “No way!”)。
中文写作对照 · 对话对比 contrast in dialogue

用两句相反的话对撞——中文叫「对话对比」或「以言衬心」;一边甜言蜜语、一边厉声喝止,像京剧里“一个唱红脸、一个唱白脸”,张力就出来了。

Silence as Power · 沉默的力量
不回答,就是最重的回答
“Their mother didn’t answer them. Nor did their father. There was no answer to give.”

孩子喊饿,妈妈不答,爸爸也不答——然后补了一句:There was no answer to give. 前两句用 Nor 连接(否定递进),最后用 there be 句型收束(没有答案可给)。三个短句,一句比一句安静,读者的心却越来越沉。有时候,沉默比大喊大叫更有力量。

小任务:用 Nor 或 There was no ... 写一句「沉默」:He didn’t cry. Nor did his sister. There was no sound at all.
中文写作对照 · 反复 + 递进 repetition & gradation

同样的句式叠三遍、一句比一句静——中文叫「递进反复」;“妈妈没答,爸爸也没答,没有答案可给”,正是“此时无声胜有声”——沉默本身就是回答。

Character Contrast · 人物对比
天真的小狐狸 vs 清醒的妈妈
“Oh, Dad, couldn’t we just sneak up and snatch it out of his hand?” — “Don’t you dare!” said Mrs Fox. “That’s just what they want you to do.”

小狐狸想的是「快跑上去抢鸡」——天真、冲动、只看得到吃的;妈妈想的是「那是圈套」——清醒、警觉、看得到三步之后。同样是饥饿,孩子的反应是行动,妈妈的反应是忍住。对比之下,妈妈的冷静更让人心疼。

小任务:写一对「冲动 vs 冷静」的反差句(孩子说:Let’s run! 妈妈说:Wait and think.)。
中文写作对照 · 反衬 contrast

用一方的特点衬出另一方——中文叫「反衬」;孩子的天真反衬妈妈的清醒,就像“初生牛犊不怕虎”反衬“老马识途”,性格一下子立起来了。

Golden Line · 金句摘抄
饿着肚子也要说俏皮话
“Positive,” said Mr Fox. “I can smell that man Bean a mile away. He stinks.”

全家快饿死了,狐狸爸爸还不忘幽默:我能在一里外闻到比恩——他臭得很。a mile away 是夸张,stinks 是双关(又指「臭」又指「讨厌」)。Dahl 让英雄在绝境里还能开玩笑——越苦的处境,这句俏皮话越显得了不起。抄进你的好句本吧。

挑战:用夸张 + 幽默写一句吐槽:I can hear my brother a mile away. He snores like a train!
中文写作对照 · 夸张 + 幽默 hyperbole & wit

“一里外都能闻到”是「夸张」;“他臭得很”是「谐谑」——中文里这叫“苦中作乐”;绝境里的一句玩笑,比十句豪言更见英雄本色。

句子银行 · Sentence Bank(仿写句型)

数字层递(That makes ...)
"Thirty-five," said Boggis. "I've got thirty-six," said Bunce. "That makes one hundred and eight men altogether."
仿写:I have 3 books. She has 4. That makes ___ altogether. 用「报数」写一段人数越加越多的话。
感官动词 waft / drift(飘送)
The rich scent of chicken wafted down the tunnel.
仿写:The smell of bread wafted ___ (into/out of) the kitchen. 早餐的香味飘进我的房间:The smell of breakfast wafted into my room.
Nor 否定递进(也不……)
Their mother didn't answer them. Nor did their father.
仿写:He didn't move. Nor did ___ (I). 她不哭,哥哥也不哭:She didn't cry. Nor did her brother.
There was no ... to ...(没有……可……)
There was no answer to give.
仿写:There was no time to ___ (waste). 没有话可说:There was nothing to say.

中西对照小发现:英文 number progression 就是中文「层递」,sensory detail 就是「通感/以味传情」,dialogue of temptation 就是「对话对比」,silence as power 就是「此时无声胜有声」,character contrast 就是「反衬」,hyperbole + wit 就是「夸张 + 苦中作乐」。给小朋友讲的时候,中英文术语可以互相借用,哪边熟讲哪边。

07 · THINK DEEPER

思考题Questions to Think About

三个难度层级:先找细节,再推原因,最后谈看法。点「提示」给一点帮助,点「答案」对照想法。

L1 · 细节 Detail

1. What did Boggis have for supper? 博吉斯的晚餐是什么?

第一段 — “Boggis had three ___ chickens smothered in dumplings.”
Three boiled chickens smothered in dumplings.三只浸在饺子里的水煮鸡。

2. Who had two gallons of cider? 谁喝了两加仑苹果酒?

第一段 — “and Bean had two ___ of cider”
Bean.比恩。

3. How many men surrounded the hill? 多少人包围了这座山?

找 “one hundred and ___ men”
One hundred and eight (108) men.一百零八(108)个人。

L2 · 推断 Inference

4. Why did Boggis hold the chicken close to the fox’s hole? 博吉斯为什么把鸡凑到洞口?

“Why don’t you come up and get it?” 他想让狐狸做什么?
To tempt the foxes to come out of the hole, so the farmers could catch them. It was bait (诱饵).想引诱狐狸出洞,好让农场主抓住它们——那是诱饵。

5. Why did Mrs Fox say “Don’t you dare!”? 狐狸太太为什么说“你敢!”?

“That’s just what they want you to do.” 他们想要什么?
Because it was a trap. If the cubs ran up to snatch the chicken, the farmers with guns would catch or shoot them. Mrs Fox saw through the trick.因为那是个陷阱。如果小狐狸跑上去抢鸡,持枪的农场主就会抓住它们、打死它们。狐狸太太看穿了诡计。

6. Why did Bean want 108 men to surround the hill? 比恩为什么让 108 个人包围这座山?

找 “There will be no escape then for Mr Fox.”
So that Mr Fox could not escape from any side of the hill — no matter which way he came out, a man with a gun would be waiting.这样狐狸先生无论从哪边出来都逃不掉——不管他从哪个方向出洞,都有持枪的人在等着。

L3 · 评价与主题 Opinion & Theme

7. Do you think the foxes will come out for the chicken? Why or why not? 你觉得狐狸们会为了鸡出去吗?为什么?

想一想:小狐狸想不想去?妈妈怎么说的?爸爸在做什么?
开放题。可以说不会:妈妈拦住了,爸爸也很清醒;也可以说很难说:他们实在太饿了,人饿了就容易冒险——这正是 Dahl 让读者揪心的地方。

8. Why did the parents say nothing when the cubs cried “We’re so hungry!”? 小狐狸喊饿时,爸爸妈妈为什么不回答?

他们有没有吃的可以给?有没有办法?“There was no ___ to give.”
开放题。因为他们真的没有答案:没有食物,也不能冒险出去。沉默不是冷漠,而是心疼又无能为力——答案在爸爸妈妈心里,不在嘴上。

9. The next chapter is called “Mr Fox Has a Plan”. What do you think the plan will be? 下一章叫《狐狸先生有办法》,你觉得会是什么办法?

狐狸爸爸擅长什么?他们以前是怎么逃出来的?
开放题。狐狸最厉害的本领是挖洞——可能他们会在隧道里继续往下挖,或者挖一条通向农场粮仓的地下通道!(读了才知道。)

中心思想 · What is this chapter really about?

Chapter 8 is a siege of temptation: instead of digging, the farmers use food as bait, tractor beams as night watch, and one hundred and eight men to ring the hill. The cubs rush, the mother holds them back; the children cry with hunger, the parents answer in silence. The harder the trap, the more patience it takes — and when Mr Fox creeps to the mouth of the tunnel again and again, he is not going for the chicken. He is scouting.

第八章是「围困与诱惑」:农场主不再硬挖,改用美食当饵、用车灯守夜、用 108 个人围山——要让狐狸一家又饿又急,自己犯错。Dahl 真正要写的是忍耐:小狐狸冲动,妈妈拦住;孩子喊饿,父母沉默。越是绝境,越不能乱动——而狐狸爸爸在黑暗里一次次爬近洞口,不是去偷鸡,是去侦察。他沉默,是因为他已经在想办法了。

siege 围困temptation 诱惑hunger 饥饿patience 忍耐
08 · WORD LAB

词汇 · 在上下文里猜词Guess from Context

每张词卡正面是原文句子——先根据上下文猜意思,再点击翻面验证。学完 12 个核心词,别忘了下面的「拓展好词」。

cratern. 名词

“three tents were put up in the crater on the hill”
猜一猜:山坡 / 大坑 / 树林?

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crater/ˈkreɪtə(r)/n. 火山口;大坑The bomb left a huge crater in the ground.联想:火山喷发留下的坑就是 crater
smotheredadj. 形容词

“three boiled chickens smothered in dumplings”
猜一猜:裹满 / 切开 / 烤焦的?

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smothered/ˈsmʌðəd/adj. 裹满的;覆盖的(smother 的过去分词)The cake was smothered in cream.动词:smother 捂;覆盖 · 近义:covered
disgustingadj. 形容词

“six doughnuts filled with disgusting goose-liver paste”
猜一猜:美味的 / 恶心的 / 甜甜的?

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disgusting/dɪsˈɡʌstɪŋ/adj. 令人恶心的;讨厌的The soup tasted disgusting.名词:disgust 厌恶 · 近义:revolting
cidern. 名词

“Bean had two gallons of cider”
猜一猜:白开水 / 苹果酒 / 牛奶?

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cider/ˈsaɪdə(r)/n. 苹果酒;苹果汁He drank a glass of cider.搭配:a gallon of cider 一加仑苹果酒
waftedv. 动词

“The rich scent of chicken wafted down the tunnel.”
猜一猜:坠落 / 飘送 / 凝结?

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wafted/wɒft/v. 飘送;(气味)轻轻飘动(waft 的过去式)The smell of coffee wafted into the room.近义:drift, float 飘浮
crouchingv. 动词

“the foxes were crouching”
猜一猜:奔跑 / 蹲伏 / 睡觉?

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crouching/ˈkraʊtʃɪŋ/v. 蹲伏;蜷缩(crouch 的现在分词)The cat crouched, ready to jump.近义:squat 蹲 · 搭配:crouch down 蹲下
sneakv. 动词

“couldn’t we just sneak up and snatch it?”
猜一猜:大摇大摆 / 偷偷溜 / 跳起来?

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sneak/sniːk/v. 偷偷溜走;鬼鬼祟祟地走He sneaked into the room quietly.搭配:sneak up 偷偷靠近 · 近义:creep
snatchv. 动词

“sneak up and snatch it out of his hand”
猜一猜:轻轻拿 / 一把抢走 / 慢慢放?

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snatch/snætʃ/v. 一把抢走;夺走The thief snatched her bag and ran.近义:grab 抓 · 搭配:snatch sth out of 从……抢走
darev. 动词

“Don’t you dare!” said Mrs Fox.
猜一猜:你敢 / 你快点 / 你试试?

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dare/deə(r)/v. 敢;竟敢(Don't you dare! 你敢!表喝止)How dare you say that!搭配:how dare you 你竟敢 · dare to do 敢做
powerfuladj. 形容词

“switched on the powerful headlamps”
猜一猜:微弱的 / 强力的 / 彩色的?

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powerful/ˈpaʊəfl/adj. 强大的;强力的The powerful engine roared.名词:power 力量 · 反义:weak 微弱的
surroundv. 动词

“We must order them to surround the hill.”
猜一猜:挖开 / 包围 / 爬过?

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surround/səˈraʊnd/v. 包围;环绕Police surrounded the building.名词:surroundings 环境 · 近义:enclose
sniffv. 动词

“Mr Fox would creep a little closer… and take a sniff.”
猜一猜:看一眼 / 闻一下 / 听一声?

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sniff/snɪf/v./n. 嗅;吸气闻The dog sniffed at the food.搭配:take a sniff 闻一闻 · 近义:smell

拓展好词 · More Words from This Chapter

WordMeaning 释义From the text 原文
weaponsn. 武器(weapon 的复数)“all sorts of other horrible weapons”
gallonsn. 加仑(容量单位)“two gallons of cider”
dumplingsn. 团子;饺子“chickens smothered in dumplings”
pasten. 糊;酱“goose-liver paste 鹅肝酱”
creptv. 悄悄爬(creep 的过去式)“Mr Fox would creep a little closer”
stinksv. 发臭(stink 的三单)“He stinks.”
stools / headlampsn. 小凳 / 车头灯“sat upon small stools” · “powerful headlamps”
09 · GRAMMAR FOCUS

语法 · 从原文句子学语法Grammar from the Story

本章的 4 个语法点都藏在课文句子里:每个点按「规则 → 原文例句 → 即时练习」三步走,最后做综合小测检验。先找否定祈使句和反意疑问句,再看 would 表示过去习惯和 there be 存在句。

否定祈使句 · Don’t + 动词原形

Negative Imperatives

规则:Don’t + 动词原形 构成否定祈使句,用来命令别人别做某事。语气越短越有力:Don’t you dare! 你敢!Don’t talk! 别说话!

P3Don’t you dare! said Mrs Fox. P2Why don’t you come up and get it?(don’t 在一般疑问句里是助动词,不是祈使句)

Don't you dare! 是「否定祈使句 + 主语加强」——比 Don't do it! 更凶、更短。妈妈只说三个词,就把小狐狸镇住了。

即时练习

1___ (not, run) in the corridor!

2Don’t ___ (touch) that hot pan!

3翻译:你们别动!

参考答案与解析

1. Don't run——否定祈使句 = Don't + 动词原形。
2. touch——Don't 后用动词原形 touch。
3. Don't move! / Don't you dare move!——祈使句省略主语 you,直接 Don't + 动词原形。

反意疑问句 · didn’t you?

Tag Questions

规则:陈述句 + 逗号 + 简短问句=反意疑问句,用来求证或逗人。前肯定后否定,前否定后肯定。动词时态要保持一致:didn’t you? / is it? / aren’t they?

P4You didn’t think of that one, did you? P3couldn’t we just sneak up…?(couldn’t 开头的问句是委婉请求,不是反意疑问句)

Boggis 说 “You didn't think of that one, did you?”——前否定、后肯定,是拿话激 Bean:你没想到吧?句尾语调上扬,等着看对方怎么接。

即时练习

1You are hungry, ___ (aren’t / are) you?

2She didn’t see us, ___ (didn’t / did) she?

3翻译:你没想到吧?

参考答案与解析

1. aren't——前肯定 are,后否定 aren't you?
2. did——前否定 didn't,后肯定 did she?
3. You didn't think of that, did you?——前否定后肯定,句尾用 did you。

would + 动词原形 · 过去经常做

Would for Past Habits

规则:would + 动词原形 表示过去反复发生的动作或习惯,翻译成「(那时)常常……;总是……」。和 used to 意思相近,但 would 更强调“每次都会这样”。

P5Mr Fox would creep a little closer… Then he would creep back again and say, “They’re still there.” “Are you quite sure?” Mrs Fox would ask.

would creep / would ask 不是「将来会」,而是「过去每次都这样」:狐狸爸爸一次次爬过去闻,妈妈一次次问“你确定?”——重复动作写出了守望的漫长。

即时练习

1When I was little, I ___ (play) in the park every day.

2Grandpa would ___ (tell) us stories at night.

3翻译:他那时常常爬到洞口闻一闻。

参考答案与解析

1. would play——would + 动词原形,表示过去的习惯。
2. tell——would 后用动词原形。
3. He would creep to the mouth of the hole and take a sniff.——would creep 表示反复做的动作。

There was no ... · 没有……

There Be Sentences

规则:There is / are / was / were + 名词 表示「某处存在某物」。名词是单数/不可数用 is / was,复数用 are / were。There was no answer to give.=没有答案可给。

P3There was no answer to give. P5There will be no escape then for Mr Fox.

there be 用来宣布「存在/不存在」:没有答案、没有出路——两个否定句一内一外,把“里面没得吃、外面跑不掉”写绝了。

即时练习

1There ___ (is / are) two tractors in the field.

2There ___ (was / were) no water in the tunnel.

3翻译:这里没有食物。

参考答案与解析

1. are——two tractors 是复数,用 are。
2. was——water 不可数,用 was。
3. There is no food here.——there be + no + 不可数名词。

语法四步策略:① 找 Don’t + 动词原形(否定祈使句,命令别人别做);② 找 “陈述句, 简短问句”(反意疑问句,前肯后否 / 前否后肯);③ 找 would + 动词原形(过去习惯,“那时常常”);④ 找 There is / was no(存在句,宣布“没有”)。判断完再代入回读,通顺才算对。
10 · QUICK QUIZ

小测验Check What You’ve Got

5 道选择题 + 1 个配对游戏。先做选择题,再做配对,看看你能得几分!

1What was put up in the crater that evening?

2What did Boggis use to tempt the fox?

3What did Mrs Fox say when a cub wanted to snatch the chicken?

4How many men surrounded the hill?

5What did Mr Fox say about Bean?

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做完 5 道选择题,看看你的成绩!

配对游戏 · Match the Speaker to His Words

先点左边的角色,再点右边他说的话。

SPEAKER 说话人
WORDS 台词

还有 3 对要配对。

11 · STUDY GUIDE

学习指南Study Guide & Answer Key

这一页是你的自学地图:学习目标、学习步骤和全部答案都在这里,跟着走就能通关第八章。

学习目标 Learning Objectives
  • 阅读策略:用上下文猜生词(crater / waft / surround 等);体会「数字递进」与「感官细节」对气氛的烘托;识别对话对比、沉默的力量两种写法。
  • 语言知识:掌握 12 个核心词汇;学习否定祈使句、反意疑问句、would 表过去习惯、there be 存在句。
  • 写作技巧:学习数字递进、感官细节、诱惑对话、沉默的力量四种手法,并完成仿写。
  • 思维表达:借助思维导图完整复述第八章;能区分“细节—推断—评价”三类问题。
学习步骤 Suggested Steps
  • 第 1 步 · 热身(课前 10 分钟):读前热身 → 回顾第七章誓言(“Never never never!”)→ 预测“狐狸们会怎么办”;用朗读功能听读第一段(三份大餐)。
  • 第 2 步 · 精读(课中 25 分钟):精读原文(重点朗读第二段诱惑对话、第五段 108 人包围)→ 人物档案 → 思维导图梳理 → 写作亮点讲解。
  • 第 3 步 · 巩固(课后 15 分钟):复述支架练习 → 思考题分层挑战 → 小测验 → 仿写练习。
  • 小提示:如果觉得难,先完成 L1 细节题和配对游戏;想挑战自己,试试 L3 评价题和“沉默的力量”仿写。
参考答案 Answer Key
  • 预测题:B — 狐狸爸爸没有投降,他会在隧道里想出一个新计划(下一章 Mr Fox Has a Plan)。
  • 复述支架:① tents ② chickens ③ sneak ④ dare ⑤ surround ⑥ smell。
  • 思考题:见各题“答案”按钮;L3 开放题言之有理即可。
  • 选择题:1-A 2-A 3-B 4-B 5-C。
  • 配对:Boggis→Why don’t you come up and get it?;Mrs Fox→Don’t you dare!;Bean→One hundred and eight men altogether.
更多精读玩法 More Ideas
  • 报菜名:试一试像报菜名一样朗读三份大餐(three boiled chickens / six doughnuts / two gallons of cider),越快越带劲,体会 Dahl 的「食物叠堆」。
  • 数字接力:和小伙伴接力报数:35!36!37!……108!越喊越大声,感受数字递进的压迫感。
  • 复述接龙:和家人或同学一起,一个说一句,下一位接下一句,用 First / Then / Next / Finally 串完第八章。
  • 读书日志 Reading Log:每章记录 3 个新词、1 句金句、1 个问题。
  • 沉默练习:试一试演“不回答”的爸爸妈妈——什么都不说,用表情表达心疼和无奈,体会“沉默的力量”。
  • 跨章对比:第七章农场主发誓要「饿死狐狸」(围而不打),第八章把包围圈越收越紧(108 人)——狐狸的处境是变好还是变坏?狐狸爸爸为什么反而更冷静了?