CHAPTER 9 · 全书共 18 章

Mr Fox Has a Plan 狐狸先生有办法

三天三夜,狐狸一家没吃没喝。小狐狸一个劲儿地要水、要往外冲;狐狸妈妈宁可全家饿死,也不让孩子去送命。狐狸爸爸闭着眼想了很久很久——终于,他站起来,眼里闪起一丝光。他,有办法了。

作者 Roald Dahl 体裁 章节书 · 小说 重点 等待 · 计划 · 希望的火花 · 家人打气 适合 词汇量 3000+ 的阅读者 · Lexile 600L
黑暗的隧道深处,狐狸爸爸站起来,眼里闪着兴奋的光,四只小狐狸围着他仰头听,狐狸妈妈虚弱地坐在一旁,一家人抱团希望
A Spark of Hope —— 希望的火花
9Chapter 9
01 · BEFORE YOU READ

读前热身Before You Read

The waiting-game goes on for three days and three nights. The foxes are starving. The cubs want to dash out; Mrs Fox refuses to let them die under the guns. Then Mr Fox, silent for a long time, gets slowly to his feet — with a little spark of excitement in his eyes. Now read “Mr Fox Has a Plan” and watch hope return to the dark tunnel.等待游戏整整持续了三天三夜。狐狸一家快饿死了。小狐狸想冲出去,狐狸妈妈宁死也不让孩子死在枪口下。沉默良久的狐狸爸爸慢慢站起身——眼里闪起一丝兴奋的光。现在来读《狐狸先生有办法》,看黑暗隧道里如何重新亮起希望。

About the Author · 关于作者

Roald Dahl loves a good idea — and he loves to make us wait for it. In Chapter 9 the foxes are starving and desperate, and Dahl makes us feel every minute: “For three days and three nights this waiting-game went on.” Then he gives the hero his moment: Mr Fox has had a bit of an idea. Watch how Dahl turns despair into hope — first the cubs whine, then the father rises, and at last the whole family cries: “We can do it!”罗尔德·达尔爱写「办法」——也爱让读者等这个办法。第九章里狐狸一家又饿又绝望,达尔让我们一分钟一分钟地体会:“这场等待游戏整整持续了三天三夜。”然后他把高光时刻留给主角:狐狸爸爸“刚有了个主意”。看达尔如何把绝望变成希望——先是孩子叫苦,再是爸爸起身,最后全家高喊:“我们做得到!”

What Happened Before · 上一章回顾

In Chapter 8, Bean ordered one hundred and eight men to surround the hill. The three farmers camped outside the hole, eating chicken, doughnuts and cider, and took turns to keep watch with tractor headlamps. Mr Fox crept up and sniffed: “They’re still there.” The fox family was trapped — and beginning to starve.第八章里,比恩命令一百零八个人包围整座山。三个农场主在洞口扎营,吃着鸡、甜甜圈和苹果酒,用拖拉机大灯轮流守夜。狐狸爸爸悄悄爬上去闻了闻:“他们还在。”狐狸一家被围住了——开始挨饿。

Reading Tip · 阅读小贴士:Watch three things: ① the time — “three days and three nights” repeated again and again; ② the mood shift — despair (Mrs Fox: “die in peace”) turns into hope (“a little spark of excitement dancing in his eyes”); ③ the children’s courage — “Yes we are, Dad! We can do it!”注意三样东西:①时间——“三天三夜”一再重复;②情绪转折——绝望(妈妈:“宁可在洞里安静地死”)变成希望(“眼里跳动着一丝兴奋的火花”);③孩子们的勇气——“我们做得到,爸爸!”

Predict · 猜一猜

The foxes are trapped and starving. What do you think Mr Fox will do?第九章叫《狐狸先生有办法》。又饿又渴、外面全是枪,狐狸爸爸会想出什么办法?

Pick one to remember your prediction — come back after reading to check!
点一个选项记住你的预测,读完全章后回来揭晓答案。

The Answer Is B!Mr Fox does not give up. His plan uses the fox’s best skill — digging! He worries the family is too weak after three days without food, but the four Small Foxes jump up and cry, “Yes we are, Dad! We can do it!” So he says, “I suppose we could give it a try.” The next chapter is called “Boggis’s Chicken House Number One”!狐狸爸爸没有放弃。他的办法还是靠狐狸最厉害的本领——挖洞!他担心全家饿得没力气,可是四只小狐狸跳起来喊:“我们做得到,爸爸!”于是他答应:“那我们就试试吧。”下一章叫《博吉斯的1号鸡舍》!

Two more questions after reading · 还有两个小问题:

1. What did the Small Foxes cry to cheer up their father?
小狐狸们喊了什么给爸爸打气?
2. Where does Mr Fox plan to dig?
狐狸爸爸打算往哪里挖?

02 · READ & EXPLORE

原文精读Read & Explore

跟着原文读一遍。橙色单词先别查——根据上下文猜一猜。点击任意单词弹出词典卡片(中英释义 · 发音 · 例句);点段落开头的 ▶ 听朗读(英式男声)。

Chapter 9 · Mr Fox Has a Plan

For three days and three nights this waiting-game went on. “How long can a fox go without food or water?” Boggis asked on the third day. “Not much longer now,” Bean told him. “He’ll make a run for it soon. He’ll have to.” Bean was right. Down in the tunnel the foxes were slowly but surely starving to death.

段落大意:这场等待游戏整整持续了三天三夜。“狐狸不吃不喝能撑多久?”博吉斯在第三天问。“撑不了太久了,”比恩告诉他,“他很快就会冲出来,他必须冲出来。”比恩说对了——隧道深处,狐狸们正在慢慢饿死。
饿了三天的狐狸一家挤在隧道里
P1 · 三天三夜 —— 慢慢饿死Three Days — Starving Slowly
结构手法 · 时间推进Structure · Time Flow
The waiting game had gone on for three long days and three long nights.
One line of time sets the whole chapter: three days and nights. The repetition of three makes the wait feel endless before the story even moves.一句时间线定下整章基调:三天三夜。三的重复让等待在故事开始前就显得漫长得没有尽头。
修辞手法 · 反复Rhetoric · Repetition
“He will come out soon, he must come out,” Bean told him.
Soon, must: the same promise said twice becomes a farmer’s certainty. Repetition turns guesswork into a prediction the story must now answer.Soon、must:同一个预言说两遍,成了农场主的笃定。反复把猜测变成预言,故事必须回答它。

“If only we could have just a tiny sip of water,” said one of the Small Foxes. “Oh, Dad, can’t you do something?” “Couldn’t we make a dash for it, Dad? We’d have a little bit of a chance, wouldn’t we?” “No chance at all,” snapped Mrs Fox. “I refuse to let you go up there and face those guns. I’d sooner you stay down here and die in peace.”

段落大意:“要是能有一小口水就好了,”一只小狐狸说,“爸爸,你不能想想办法吗?”“我们不能冲出去吗,爸爸?总该有一点机会吧?”“一点机会都没有!”狐狸妈妈厉声说,“我不许你们上去面对那些枪。我宁可你们待在洞里,安静地死。”
狐狸妈妈厉声拒绝孩子冲出去
P2 · 绝望 —— 安静地死Despair — Die Quietly
表达方式 · 语言描写Expression · Dialogue
“There is not a hope in the world!” said Mrs Fox. “I would rather you stayed down here and died quietly.”
The mother’s hardest line is made of love: rather dead than shot. One sentence shows the siege has broken hope — but not her will to protect.妈妈最硬的一句话由爱做成:宁可安静地死,也不去面对枪。一句话表明围困击碎了希望——却没击碎她要保护孩子的心。
修辞手法 · 对比Rhetoric · Contrast
“Can’t we rush out, Dad? There must be some chance?” ... “There is not a hope in the world!”
Children see chance, mother sees none: hope and despair collide in two lines. The contrast makes the family’s trap feel absolute.孩子看见机会,妈妈看不见任何机会:希望与绝望在两句话里对撞。对比让这一家的绝境显得彻底。

Mr Fox had not spoken for a long time. He had been sitting quite still, his eyes closed, not even hearing what the others were saying. Mrs Fox knew that he was trying desperately to think of a way out. And now, as she looked at him, she saw him stir himself and get slowly to his feet. He looked back at his wife. There was a little spark of excitement dancing in his eyes. “What is it, darling?” said Mrs Fox quickly. “I’ve just had a bit of an idea,” Mr Fox said carefully. “What?” they cried. “Oh, Dad, what is it?” “Come on!” said Mrs Fox. “Tell us quickly!”

段落大意:狐狸爸爸很久没开口了。他一直安静地坐着,闭着眼睛,连别人说话都没听见。狐狸妈妈知道他正在拼命想办法。这时,她看见他动了动,慢慢站起身,回头看着妻子——眼里跳动着一丝兴奋的火花。“亲爱的,怎么了?”妈妈赶紧问。“我刚有了个主意。”“什么主意?爸爸快说!”
狐狸爸爸睁开眼,眼里闪着兴奋的火花
P3 · 火花 —— 刚有了个主意The Spark — I’ve Just Had an Idea
表达方式 · 神态描写Expression · Appearance
she saw him move. Slowly he stood up ... and in his eyes there was a little spark of excitement.
A spark of excitement: one tiny light in three days of darkness. The look does the turning-point work before any plan is spoken.一丝兴奋的火花:三天黑暗里的一小点光。不用说出计划,眼神先完成了转折。
表达方式 · 心理描写Expression · Mind
Mrs Fox knew he was thinking hard. She did not say a word.
Two short sentences show a wife who understands: she knows, she stays silent. The silence lets the idea grow instead of being talked away.两个短句写出一位懂得的妻子:她知道,她不出声。这份沉默让主意生长,而不是被话语冲散。

“Well . . .” said Mr Fox, then he stopped and sighed and sadly shook his head. He sat down again. “It’s no good,” he said. “It won’t work after all.” “Why not, Dad?” “Because it means more digging and we aren’t any of us strong enough for that after three days and nights without food.”

段落大意:“嗯……”狐狸爸爸说着,停下来,叹了口气,难过地摇摇头,又坐了下去。“不行,”他说,“这办法行不通。”“为什么不行,爸爸?”“因为那意味着更多的挖掘,可我们饿了三天三夜,谁都没有那个力气了。”
狐狸爸爸叹着气又坐下
P4 · 熄灭 —— 行不通Hope Falls — It Won’t Work
表达方式 · 动作描写Expression · Action
Mr Fox sighed, shook his head sadly, and sat down again. “No,” he said. “It won’t work.”
Sigh, shake, sit: three deflated actions carry the whole let-down. The body speaks before the words do — hope visibly shrinks.叹气、摇头、坐下:三个泄气的动作演完整个落差。身体先于语言开口——希望肉眼可见地缩了下去。
表达方式 · 心理描写Expression · Mind
“Because it would mean more digging, and we haven’t the strength for that. We haven’t eaten for three days.”
The idea dies on a practical fact: no strength. The most sensible sentence in the chapter is also the saddest one — plans need bodies to run them.主意死在一个现实上:没力气。全章最理智的一句话,也是最优伤的一句——计划要靠身体去执行。

“Yes we are, Dad!” cried the Small Foxes, jumping up and running to their father. “We can do it! You see if we can’t! So can you!” Mr Fox looked at the four Small Foxes and he smiled. What fine children I have, he thought. They are starving to death and they haven’t had a drink for three days, but they are still undefeated. I must not let them down. “I . . . I suppose we could give it a try,” he said. “Let’s go, Dad! Tell us what you want us to do!” Slowly, Mrs Fox got to her feet. She was suffering more than any of them from the lack of food and water. She was very weak. “I am so sorry,” she said, but I don’t think I am going to be much help.” “You stay right where you are, my darling,” said Mr Fox. “We can handle this by ourselves.”

段落大意:“我们有力气,爸爸!”小狐狸们叫着跳起来,跑到爸爸身边,“我们做得到!你看我们做不做得到!你也行!”狐狸爸爸看着四只小狐狸,笑了。我真是有多了不起的孩子啊,他想。他们快饿死了,三天没喝一滴水,却依然没有被打败。我不能让他们失望。“那……那我们就试试吧。”狐狸妈妈慢慢站起身,她比谁都虚弱:“对不起,我恐怕帮不上什么忙了。”“你就待在这儿,亲爱的,”狐狸爸爸说,“我们自己能行。”
四只小狐狸跳起来说我们有力气
P5 · 复燃 —— 多了不起的孩子Rekindled — What Wonderful Children
表达方式 · 语言描写Expression · Dialogue
“We’ve got the strength, Dad! We can do it! ... You can do it too!”
Three short shouts turn the family around: the children who cried for water now promise strength. Dialogue shows courage arriving from the youngest first.三句短喊扳回局面:刚才还哭着要水的孩子,现在保证有力气。对话写出勇气先从最小的孩子身上长出来。
表达方式 · 心理描写Expression · Mind
What wonderful children I have, he thought. They are starving ... yet they have not been beaten. I must not let them down.
The father’s inner voice lands on the book’s title word: wonderful. His quiet vow — I must not let them down — is the real engine of the escape.狐狸爸爸的心声落在书名那个词上:wonderful(了不起)。他默默发誓「不能让他们失望」——这才是逃生的真正引擎。
03 · CHARACTER CARDS

人物档案Who Is on Stage Tonight

这一章:狐狸爸爸沉默、起身、又坐下,心里在盘算一个办法;狐狸妈妈虚弱却清醒,拼死拦着孩子;四只小狐狸饿着肚子,却跳起来喊“我们做得到!”——希望,是在黑暗里自己点亮的。

THE THINKER

Mr Fox

狐狸先生 · 沉思的策划者
THINK 思考“He had been sitting quite still, his eyes closed, not even hearing what the others were saying.” 闭眼静坐,拼命想办法
RISE 起身“She saw him stir himself and get slowly to his feet.” 主意来了,人站起来
RESOLVE 决心“I suppose we could give it a try.” 孩子们一打气,他答应再试一次
THE PROTECTOR

Mrs Fox

狐狸太太 · 拼死护家的妈妈
FORBID 禁止“I refuse to let you go up there and face those guns.” 宁可全家饿死,不许孩子送命
FRAIL 虚弱“She was very weak. I don’t think I am going to be much help.” 她比谁都难受,却先道歉
TRUST 信任爸爸一站起来,她立刻问:“What is it, darling?”
THE CHEER SQUAD

The Four Small Foxes

四只小狐狸 · 饿而不馁的打气小队
THIRSTY 口渴“If only we could have just a tiny sip of water.” 三天没喝一滴水
BOLD 大胆“Couldn’t we make a dash for it, Dad?” 想冲出去,却被妈妈拦下
CHEER 打气“Yes we are, Dad! We can do it! So can you!” 全家勇气的小火苗

描写分析 · Descriptions That Move the Story

这一章写狐狸先生想出主意。记叙文写「转折」,常让主角先沉默、再行动,用动作和内心把希望一点点点亮。

人物描写 · CHARACTER外貌 · 语言 · 动作 · 心理 · 神态
外貌描写 · APPEARANCE

She was suffering more than any of them from the lack of food and water. She was very weak.

Simple honest details — suffering, very weak — show Mrs Fox's state. Weakness makes her kindness at the end even more touching.

朴实的描写——最受苦、很虚弱——写出狐狸妈妈的状况。她的虚弱,让结尾的体贴更动人。

语言描写 · SPEECH

"Yes we are, Dad!" cried the Small Foxes, jumping up and running to their father. "We can do it!"

Words plus action together: they cry, jump and run as they speak. The small foxes' courage comes out in voice and body at once.

语言和动作一起上:边喊边跳、冲向爸爸。小狐狸们的勇气,同时从声音和身体里迸出来。

动作描写 · ACTION

She saw him stir himself and get slowly to his feet. He looked back at his wife. There was a little spark of excitement dancing in his eyes.

Slow motion again: stir, get up, look back — then a spark in his eyes. Small movements build hope beat by beat before a single word is said.

又是慢镜头:动一动、起身、回头看——然后眼里闪过火花。一句话没说,希望已经随着小动作一点一点燃起来。

心理描写 · PSYCHOLOGY

What fine children I have, he thought. They are starving to death ... but they are still undefeated. I must not let them down.

The clearest inner speech in the book: love, pride and duty in one short thought. Psychology here carries the heart of the whole story.

全书最清楚的一段内心独白:爱、骄傲和责任感浓缩在一念之间。这一念,就是整个故事的心脏。

神态描写 · EXPRESSION

"Well . . ." said Mr Fox, then he stopped and sighed and sadly shook his head. He sat down again.

Expression in three beats: stop, sigh, shake his head. Hope drains out of his face before a single word is said — the despair of the whole tunnel in one gesture.

神情分三步:停住、叹气、摇头。一个动作就让希望从脸上流走——整条地道的绝望,浓缩在一个姿势里。

环境描写 · ENVIRONMENT场景 · 景物 · 氛围
环境描写 · ENVIRONMENT

For three days and three nights this waiting-game went on. ... Down in the tunnel the foxes were slowly but surely starving to death.

"Three days and three nights" makes time feel endless, and "down in the tunnel" paints the dark prison below ground. The setting itself — darkness, hunger, waiting — becomes the enemy the foxes must fight.

“三天三夜”让时间变得没有穷尽,“地道深处”画出地下黑暗的监狱。环境本身——黑暗、饥饿、等待——就是狐狸一家必须对抗的敌人。

文章结构 · Story Structure 心理转折 · Turning Point

这一章是「绝境中的心理转折」:三天三夜(饿死边缘)→ 绝望(安静地死)→ 火花(有个主意)→ 熄灭(没力气)→ 复燃(孩子们的勇气)。希望死去又活来,最后落在一个决定上:再挖一次。

Para 1 · 开场 · 三天三夜

The waiting game had gone on for three long days and three long nights. ... deep in the tunnel, the foxes were slowly starving to death.

等待游戏持续三天三夜,狐狸一家正在慢慢饿死。

How it expands · 怎么展开:围绕 three days and nights / starving 展开:先写时间(三的重复),再写结果(饿死)。外部等待与内部绝望同时到位,把局面压到最低点。

推进 · Steps ×3绝望 → 火花 → 熄灭 → 复燃
Step 2 · 绝望

“I would rather you stayed down here and died quietly.”

狐狸妈妈厉声拒绝:宁可安静地死,也不去面对枪。

How it expands · 怎么展开:用「爱的狠话」展开:孩子要机会,妈妈给答案——没有机会。一句话让绝境具体化,也让妈妈的保护力立起来。

Step 3 · 火花

Slowly he stood up ... and in his eyes there was a little spark of excitement. “I’ve just had an idea.”

狐狸爸爸睁开眼,眼里闪着兴奋的火花:我刚有了个主意。

How it expands · 怎么展开:转折点用「眼神」写:不用大动作,一丝火花就够了。先静默铺垫(他知道她在想办法),再让火花点亮。

Step 4 · 熄灭

Mr Fox sighed, shook his head sadly, and sat down again. “No,” he said. “It won’t work.”

狐狸爸爸又坐下:不行,需要更多挖掘,可全家没力气了。

How it expands · 怎么展开:用「希望落地」展开:先动作泄气(叹气、摇头、坐下),再说现实(没力气)。让希望灭一次,后面的复燃才更有力。

Step 5 · 收束 · 复燃

“We’ve got the strength, Dad! ... You can do it too!” ... “Then we’ll try it!”

小狐狸们跳起来说有力气,狐狸爸爸决定:那我们就试试。

How it expands · 怎么展开:收束用「孩子的勇气」:先喊口号(我们有力气),再落心声(多了不起的孩子、不能让他们失望),最后一句「那我们就试试吧」把章末变成新起点。

按结构复述 · Retell by Structure(心理转折)

这是「心理转折」结构,复述时沿着希望的变化走:三天三夜 → 绝望 → 火花 → 熄灭 → 复燃。

First · 三天三夜After three days and nights of waiting, the foxes were slowly starving to death.三天三夜的等待,狐狸们正在慢慢饿死。
Then · 绝望Mrs Fox refused to let the cubs rush out: “I would rather you died quietly.”狐狸妈妈不让孩子们冲出去:「宁可安静地死。」
Next · 火花Mr Fox opened his eyes with a spark of excitement: “I’ve just had an idea.”狐狸爸爸眼里闪着火花:「我刚有了个主意。」
Then · 熄灭But the idea needed digging, and they had no strength after three hungry days.可这主意要挖洞,饿了三天,全家没力气。
Finally · 复燃“We’ve got the strength, Dad!” cried the cubs. “Then we’ll try it!”「我们有力气!」小狐狸喊。「那我们就试试吧!」

小提示:与「思维导图」搭配用——把导图的枝条按 三天三夜 → 绝望 → 火花 → 熄灭 → 复燃 排好,先看导图复述一遍,再合上导图凭记忆复述一遍。

围困 · The Siege

Despair ↓ 绝望die in peace · 没有力气 · 没有答案
Hope ↑ 希望a spark of excitement · We can do it!

示意图:绝望与希望之间,只隔着一个站起来的身影。

04 · STORY MAP & RETELL

思维导图 · 复述文章Story Map & Retelling

把第九章的信息装进这张「思维导图」,再沿着复述支架讲一遍——你也能当小老师!

A Spark of Hope in the Dark Tunnel
地点人物情节关键结果

复述支架 · Retell with the scaffold

把句子补充完整,就完成了第九章的复述。

1
For three days and three ________ this waiting-game went on.
2
“If only we could have just a tiny ________ of water,” said a Small Fox.
3
“Couldn’t we make a ________ for it, Dad?”
4
“I ________ to let you go up there and face those guns,” said Mrs Fox.
5
There was a little ________ of excitement dancing in his eyes.
6
“We can do it! ... they are still ________,” thought Mr Fox.

复述加分:用 First / Then / Next / Also / Finally 把六句话串起来;讲到“three days and three nights”放慢,读出漫长;讲到妈妈那句“No chance at all”要短促有力;讲到爸爸眼里“a little spark of excitement”,声音突然亮起来——希望回来了!

05 · PICTURE RETELL

看图复述Retell with Pictures

5 张图卡按情节顺序排好。看着图片,用英文把第九章讲出来——点击图片可以放大,每张图点开都有一句「提示句」帮你起头。

1黑暗的隧道深处,狐狸一家蜷缩在一起又饿又渴,小狐狸张着嘴,狐狸妈妈沉默地搂着它们,地上空空的,气氛压抑
三天三夜
Say: “For three days and three nights this waiting-game went on. Down in the tunnel the foxes were slowly but surely starving to death.”
这场等待游戏整整持续了三天三夜。隧道深处,狐狸们正在慢慢饿死。
2隧道里,一只小狐狸可怜巴巴地仰头要水喝,另一只小狐狸往洞口方向比划着想冲出去,狐狸妈妈伸爪拦住它们,表情严肃
要水 · 想冲
Say: “‘If only we could have just a tiny sip of water,’ said one of the Small Foxes. ‘Couldn’t we make a dash for it, Dad?’ ‘No chance at all,’ snapped Mrs Fox.”
“要是能有一小口水就好了,”一只小狐狸说。“我们不能冲出去吗,爸爸?”“一点机会都没有!”狐狸妈妈厉声说。
3狐狸爸爸慢慢站起来,闭了很久的眼睛睁开了,眼里闪着一点兴奋的光,狐狸妈妈和四只小狐狸都仰头望着他
爸爸有主意了
Say: “Mrs Fox knew that he was trying desperately to think of a way out. She saw him stir himself and get slowly to his feet. There was a little spark of excitement dancing in his eyes. ‘I’ve just had a bit of an idea,’ said Mr Fox.”
狐狸妈妈知道他正在拼命想办法。她看见他动了动,慢慢站起身——眼里跳动着一丝兴奋的火花。“我刚有了个主意。”
4狐狸爸爸叹了口气,难过地摇摇头又坐回地上,小狐狸们围着他一脸不解,隧道里重新安静下来
又摇头了
Say: “‘Well . . .’ said Mr Fox, then he stopped and sighed and sadly shook his head. ‘It’s no good. It won’t work after all. Because it means more digging and we aren’t any of us strong enough for that.’”
“嗯……”狐狸爸爸停下来,叹了口气,难过地摇摇头:“不行,这办法行不通。因为那意味着更多的挖掘,可我们没有那个力气了。”
5四只小狐狸跳起来围着狐狸爸爸打气,举起小爪子喊加油,狐狸爸爸微笑着看它们,狐狸妈妈虚弱地坐在一旁微笑,隧道里重新充满希望
全家振作
Say: “‘Yes we are, Dad! We can do it! You see if we can’t! So can you!’ cried the Small Foxes. Mr Fox looked at them and he smiled. ‘I suppose we could give it a try,’ he said.”
“我们有力气,爸爸!我们做得到!你看我们做不做得到!你也行!”小狐狸们叫着。狐狸爸爸看着它们笑了:“那我们就试试吧。”

提示:图卡可左右滑动查看全部 5 张;点「看看提示句」展开英文句子;点图片放大全屏。

1 · First 三天三夜→ 2 · Then 要水 · 想冲→ 3 · Next 爸爸有主意了→ 4 · Also 又摇头了→ 5 · Finally 全家振作

小挑战:先看着图讲一遍,再合上图卡,只凭记忆讲一遍——能做到,第九章就真正属于你了!

06 · WRITER’S CRAFT

写作亮点分析Why This Writing Works

这一章,Dahl 不写挖洞,写「一个主意是怎么来的」:三天三夜的等待、一句句恳求、一次起身、一次摇头、一声欢呼。秘密武器是这六招:

Time Repetition · 时间反复
三天三夜,字字都是漫长
“For three days and three nights this waiting-game went on.” ... “after three days and nights without food.” ... “they haven’t had a drink for three days.”

“three days and three nights” 这一组词在全章出现三次:开头定调、中间解释难题、结尾写孩子们仍然不放弃。Dahl 不换词,就靠重复——让读者一次次想起:他们真的等了很久很久了。重复,就是强调。

小任务:用反复写一句等待:I waited and waited and waited.(等啊等啊等啊。)
中文写作对照 · 反复 repetition

同一个词反复出现,加深印象——中文叫「反复」;“三天三夜”出现三次,就像“盼望着,盼望着,东风来了”,一遍比一遍沉。

Question & Answer Rhythm · 问答推进
一问一答,把悬念推给读者
“How long can a fox go without food or water?” — “Not much longer now.” ... “Why not, Dad?” — “Because it means more digging...”

Boggis 问一句,Bean 答一句;小狐狸问一句,爸爸答一句。每一组问答都像一小步台阶——读者跟着一步一步爬,直到最紧张的那一刻:爸爸站起来说“I’ve just had a bit of an idea”,又摇头坐下。问答把悬念推得又高又紧。

小任务:写一组问答:“Why are you sad?” — “Because it is raining.”(为什么难过?因为下雨了。)
中文写作对照 · 设问 self-directed question

自问自答推进情节——中文叫「设问」;一问一答步步紧逼,就像“问君能有几多愁?恰似一江春水向东流”,先吊胃口,再给答案。

Despair vs Hope · 绝望与希望对撞
一句死别,一丝火花
“I’d sooner you stay down here and die in peace.” — “There was a little spark of excitement dancing in his eyes.”

前一刻,妈妈说出全书最绝望的话:die in peace,宁可在洞里安静地死;后一刻,爸爸眼里跳起一丝火花。黑暗里一点光,比阳光还亮。Dahl 把「最绝望」和「最有希望」放在同一页,读者的心就跟着翻了个跟头。

小任务:用「绝望 → 希望」写两句:The room was dark. Then a tiny light came on.(房间很暗。然后亮起一点光。)
中文写作对照 · 对比/反衬 contrast

黑暗衬出光——中文叫「反衬」;“山重水复疑无路,柳暗花明又一村”,绝望越重,希望的火花越亮。

Triple Action Beat · 三连动作
停 · 叹 · 摇头,一步比一步沉
“Then he stopped and sighed and sadly shook his head.”

三个动作连在一起,中间没有一句废话:停下、叹气、难过地摇头。Dahl 不说“他很失望”,只用三个动作演给你看——读者眼前仿佛看见了那个缓缓低下去的头。

小任务:用三个动作写一种心情:She opened the book, read one page, and closed it sadly.(她翻开书,读了一页,又难过地合上。)
中文写作对照 · 排比 parallelism

三个并列动作一气呵成——中文叫「排比」;“停住、叹气、摇头”,就像“举头望明月,低头思故乡”,节奏一顺,感情就出来了。

Show, Don’t Tell · 用神态写内心
不写「他兴奋」,只写「眼里的光」
“There was a little spark of excitement dancing in his eyes.”

Dahl 从不说“Mr Fox was excited”。他写:一丝兴奋的火花在眼睛里跳舞。dancing 一词让光动了起来——读者「看见」了那道光,就「懂得」了那份希望。Show, don’t tell:把心情演出来,而不是说出来。

小任务:用神态写开心:Her eyes shone like stars.(她的眼睛像星星一样闪亮。)
中文写作对照 · 神态白描 gesture description

不直说心情,只写表情动作——中文叫「神态白描」或「以形写神」;“眼含热泪”“眼睛一亮”,比“很兴奋”“很难过”有画面得多。

Golden Line · 金句摘抄
爸爸心里的话
“What fine children I have, he thought. They are starving to death and they haven’t had a drink for three days, but they are still undefeated. I must not let them down.”

这句话没有对白——是狐狸爸爸心里的话。快饿死的是他们,说“We can do it!”的也是他们。undefeated 是全书最好的一词之一:没有输,没有被打败。爸爸想到的不是自己的累,而是不能让孩子们失望。抄进你的好句本吧。

挑战:用 undefeated 写一句:Even when I lose a game, my spirit is undefeated.(即使输了比赛,我的精神也没有被打败。)
中文写作对照 · 直抒胸臆 + 感叹 direct expression

直接说出心里话——中文叫「直抒胸臆」;“我真是有多了不起的孩子啊”一句感叹,把父爱和担当写透,正是“谁言寸草心,报得三春晖”的心意。

句子银行 · Sentence Bank(仿写句型)

情态动词 + 动词原形(can / could / will / would / must)
"We can handle this by ourselves."
仿写:We can do our ___ (best). 我能帮你:I can help you.
过去完成进行时 had been + v-ing
He had been sitting quite still, his eyes closed.
仿写:They had been ___ (dig) all night. 他一直在想办法:He had been thinking of a way out.
I’d sooner ...(我宁可……)
I'd sooner you stay down here and die in peace.
仿写:I’d sooner ___ (stay) at home. 我宁可饿死也不投降:I’d sooner starve than surrender.
What + 名词感叹句
What fine children I have!
仿写:What a ___ (clever) fox! 多好的主意啊:What a good idea!

中西对照小发现:英文 time repetition 就是中文「反复」,question & answer rhythm 就是「设问」,despair vs hope 就是「对比/反衬」,triple action beat 就是「排比」,show, don’t tell 就是「神态白描/以形写神」,golden line 里的心里话就是「直抒胸臆」。给小朋友讲的时候,中英文术语可以互相借用,哪边熟讲哪边。

07 · THINK DEEPER

思考题Questions to Think About

三个难度层级:先找细节,再推原因,最后谈看法。点「提示」给一点帮助,点「答案」对照想法。

L1 · 细节 Detail

1. How long did the waiting-game go on? 这场等待游戏持续了多久?

第一句 — “For three days and three ___ ...”
Three days and three nights.三天三夜。

2. What did the Small Fox ask for? 小狐狸要什么?

“If only we could have just a tiny ___ of water”
A tiny sip of water (一小口水).

3. What did Mrs Fox want the cubs to do instead of dashing out? 狐狸妈妈不让孩子冲出去,宁可他们怎样?

“I’d sooner you stay down here and ___ in peace.”
Stay down in the tunnel and die in peace, rather than face the guns.留在隧道里安安静静地死去,也不去面对那些枪。

L2 · 推断 Inference

4. Why did Mr Fox shake his head after saying “I’ve just had a bit of an idea”? 爸爸说完“有个主意”,为什么又摇头?

他的主意需要什么?“Because it means more ___”
Because his idea meant more digging, and after three days without food they were too weak to do it.因为他的办法意味着要挖更多的洞,而饿了三天的他们已经没有力气了。

5. Why did Mrs Fox refuse to let the cubs dash out? 狐狸妈妈为什么不许小狐狸冲出去?

洞口外面有什么?“No ___ at all.”
Because the farmers were waiting with guns. There was no chance at all — the cubs would be caught or shot.因为农场主正拿着枪等着。一点机会都没有——小狐狸会被抓住,或被开枪打死。

6. Why did Mr Fox smile at the four Small Foxes? 狐狸爸爸为什么看着四只小狐狸微笑?

他心里想:“What ___ children I have!” 他们饿着肚子却喊什么?
Because he was proud of them: they were starving, but they were still undefeated and full of courage — they cheered him up.因为他为他们骄傲:他们饿着肚子,却仍然没有认输、充满勇气——他们让他振作了起来。

L3 · 评价与主题 Opinion & Theme

7. Do you think Mr Fox’s plan will work? Why or why not? 你觉得狐狸爸爸的办法会成功吗?为什么?

想一想:狐狸最厉害的本领是什么?他们的难题又是什么?
开放题。可以说会:挖洞是狐狸最厉害的本领,而且全家团结;也可以说难说:饿了三天,体力是最大的问题——这正是 Dahl 让读者揪心的地方。

8. What does “undefeated” mean in this story? 这里的“不败”是什么意思?

他们输了吗?他们放弃了吗?
开放题。不是“没有输过”,而是“没有放弃”:饿着肚子依然喊 “We can do it!”——勇气没有被打败,就还没有输。

9. If you were in the tunnel, what would you say to the family? 如果你在隧道里,会对狐狸一家说什么?

可以对他们喊加油,也可以帮他们想一个主意。
开放题。示例:“Don’t give up! Your family is your best plan.”(别放弃!家人就是最好的办法。)

中心思想 · What is this chapter really about?

Chapter 9 brings the family to the very edge — three days of hunger, a mother who would rather die quietly than lose her children, and a father who finds an idea, loses it, then finds his courage again in his cubs. What makes Mr Fox fantastic is not one trick; it is that he will try again, hungry and tired, for his family.

第九章把一家逼到悬崖边:三天的饥饿、宁可安静死去也不让孩子冒险的妈妈、还有想到主意又放下、最后从孩子身上找回勇气的爸爸。狐狸爸爸的了不起,不在某一次计谋——而在又饿又累时,为了家人,他还愿意再挖一次。

patience 忍耐hope 希望courage 勇气family 家人
08 · WORD LAB

词汇 · 在上下文里猜词Guess from Context

每张词卡正面是原文句子——先根据上下文猜意思,再点击翻面验证。学完 12 个核心词,别忘了下面的「拓展好词」。

starvingv. 动词

“the foxes were slowly but surely starving to death”
猜一猜:喝水 / 挨饿 / 睡觉?

点击翻面看看 ▸
starving/stɑːvɪŋ/v. 挨饿;饿死(starve 的现在分词)The lost cat was starving.名词:starvation 饥饿 · starve to death 饿死
sipn./v. 名词/动词

“just a tiny sip of water”
猜一猜:一大口 / 一小口 / 一桶?

点击翻面看看 ▸
sip/sɪp/n./v. 一小口;小口喝She took a sip of tea.搭配:take a sip 抿一口 · 反义:gulp 大口喝
dashn./v. 名词/动词

“Couldn’t we make a dash for it, Dad?”
猜一猜:慢慢走 / 猛冲 / 躲起来?

点击翻面看看 ▸
dash/dæʃ/n./v. 猛冲;飞奔He made a dash for the door.搭配:make a dash for it 冲出去 · 近义:sprint
refusev. 动词

“I refuse to let you go up there”
猜一猜:答应 / 拒绝 / 假装?

点击翻面看看 ▸
refuse/rɪˈfjuːz/v. 拒绝;不肯She refused to answer the question.搭配:refuse to do 拒绝做 · 反义:accept 接受
snappedv. 动词

“No chance at all,” snapped Mrs Fox.
猜一猜:轻声说 / 厉声说 / 笑着说?

点击翻面看看 ▸
snapped/snæpt/v. 厉声说;咔嚓折断(snap 的过去式)“Stop it!” she snapped.近义:bark 呵斥 · 搭配:snap at sb 冲某人厉声说话
desperatelyadv. 副词

“he was trying desperately to think of a way out”
猜一猜:慢慢地 / 拼命地 / 随便地?

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desperately/ˈdespərətli/adv. 拼命地;绝望地He desperately wanted to win.形容词:desperate 绝望的 · 近义:frantically
stirv. 动词

“she saw him stir himself and get slowly to his feet”
猜一猜:睡熟 / 动弹 / 坐下?

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stir/stɜː(r)/v. 动一动;搅动He stirred in his sleep.搭配:stir oneself 起身活动 · 近义:move
sparkn. 名词

“a little spark of excitement dancing in his eyes”
猜一猜:泪光 / 火花 / 灰尘?

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spark/spɑːk/n. 火花;闪光;一丝(希望)A spark of hope lit up her face.搭配:a spark of hope 一丝希望 · 近义:gleam 微光
sighedv./n. 动词/名词

“then he stopped and sighed and sadly shook his head”
猜一猜:大笑 / 叹气 / 咳嗽?

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sighed/saɪd/v. 叹气(sigh 的过去式)He sighed and put down the book.搭配:sigh deeply 深深叹气 · 名词:a sigh 一声叹息
undefeatedadj. 形容词

“they are still undefeated”
猜一猜:被打败 / 未被击败 / 饿昏了?

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undefeated/ˌʌndɪˈfiːtɪd/adj. 未被击败的;不认输的The team stayed undefeated all year.动词:defeat 打败 · 反义:defeated 被打败的
supposev. 动词

“I suppose we could give it a try”
猜一猜:保证 / 猜想 / 拒绝?

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suppose/səˈpəʊz/v. 猜想;以为;(表不确定)也许I suppose he is right.近义:think, guess · I suppose so 我想是吧
handlev. 动词

“We can handle this by ourselves.”
猜一猜:放弃 / 应付 / 扔掉?

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handle/ˈhændl/v. 应付;处理;操作Don’t worry, I can handle it.近义:deal with, manage · 名词:把手

拓展好词 · More Words from This Chapter

WordMeaning 释义From the text 原文
diggingn. 挖掘(dig 的动名词)“it means more digging”
lackn. 缺乏;没有“the lack of food and water”
weakadj. 虚弱的“She was very weak.”
sufferingv. 受苦(suffer 的现在分词)“She was suffering more than any of them”
darlingn. 亲爱的(称呼语)“What is it, darling?”
peacen. 平静;安宁“die in peace”
idean. 主意;想法“a bit of an idea”
excitementn. 兴奋;激动“a spark of excitement”
09 · GRAMMAR FOCUS

语法 · 从原文句子学语法Grammar from the Story

本章的 4 个语法点都藏在课文句子里:每个点按「规则 → 原文例句 → 即时练习」三步走,最后做综合小测检验。先找情态动词,再看过去完成进行时、would sooner 和 What 感叹句。

情态动词 + 动词原形 · can / could / will / must

Modal Verbs

规则:情态动词(can, could, will, would, must, shall, should, may, might)后面接动词原形,表示能力、可能、意愿、必须。情态动词没有 to、不加 -s、不随人称变化。

P2Can’t you do something? P5We can handle this by ourselves. P1He’ll make a run for it soon.

can’t you do?—can’t(情态动词)+ do(原形);We can handle—can + handle。情态动词后面的动词永远用原形,没有第三人称单数。

即时练习

1We ___ (can) do it!

2I must ___ (finish) my homework first.

3翻译:你能帮帮我吗?

参考答案与解析

1. can——情态动词 + 动词原形 do。
2. finish——must 后用动词原形 finish。
3. Can you help me?——can + 主语 + 动词原形构成疑问句。

过去完成进行时 · had been + v-ing

Past Perfect Progressive

规则:had been + 现在分词 表示过去某个时间点之前一直进行的动作。had done 是过去完成(已经做完),had been doing 是过去完成进行(一直在做)。

P3Mr Fox had not spoken for a long time. He had been sitting quite still, his eyes closed.

had not spoken:过去完成(一直没说话);had been sitting:过去完成进行(一直在坐着想)。两个时态连用,写出爸爸长时间的沉思。

即时练习

1She ___ (wait) for an hour before he came.

2They had been ___ (dig) all night.

3翻译:他一直在想办法。

参考答案与解析

1. had been waiting——在他来之前,她一直等了一个小时。
2. digging——had been + digging。
3. He had been thinking of a way out.——过去完成进行时表示持续的思考。

I’d sooner ... · 我宁可……

Would Sooner / Rather

规则:I’d sooner / I’d rather + 动词原形(或从句) 表示「我宁可……,也不愿……」,用来表达强烈的选择。比 I prefer 语气更重。

P2I’d sooner you stay down here and die in peace.

I’d sooner you stay down here:我宁可你们待在洞里。妈妈的意思其实是:与其让你们冲出去送死,我宁可全家饿死在洞里——最狠的话,藏着最深的爱。

即时练习

1I’d sooner ___ (stay) at home than go out.

2I’d rather ___ (die) than surrender.

3翻译:我宁可饿死也不投降。

参考答案与解析

1. stay——would sooner + 动词原形。
2. die——would rather + 动词原形。
3. I’d sooner starve than surrender.——sooner/ rather + 原形 + than + 原形。

What + 名词 · 感叹句

Exclamations with What / How

规则:What + (a/an) + 形容词 + 名词 + 主谓! 用来感叹;How + 形容词/副词 + 主谓! 也可以。句尾用感叹号,语气强烈。

P5What fine children I have, he thought. 练习What a good idea it is! How brave the cubs are!

What fine children I have!:我真是有多了不起的孩子啊!fine children 是名词词组,所以用 What;如果只有形容词,就用 How:How brave they are! 感叹句是心里话的扩音器。

即时练习

1What a ___ (clever) fox he is!

2___ brave the cubs are!(用 How / What)

3翻译:多好的主意啊!

参考答案与解析

1. clever——What + a + 形容词 + 名词。
2. How——How + 形容词 brave + 主谓。
3. What a good idea!——What + a + 形容词 + 名词。

语法四步策略:① 找情态动词(can / could / will / must)+ 动词原形;② 找 had been + v-ing(过去完成进行,“一直在做”);③ 找 I’d sooner / rather(“宁可……”);④ 找 What + 名词 / How + 形容词(感叹句)。判断完再代入回读,通顺才算对。
10 · QUICK QUIZ

小测验Check What You’ve Got

5 道选择题 + 1 个配对游戏。先做选择题,再做配对,看看你能得几分!

1How long did the waiting-game go on?

2What did one Small Fox ask for?

3What did Mrs Fox say about dashing out?

4What did Mr Fox see dancing in his eyes?

5Why did Mr Fox shake his head sadly?

0 / 5
选择题得分
做完 5 道选择题,看看你的成绩!

配对游戏 · Match the Speaker to His Words

先点左边的角色,再点右边他说的话。

SPEAKER 说话人
WORDS 台词

还有 3 对要配对。

11 · STUDY GUIDE

学习指南Study Guide & Answer Key

这一页是你的自学地图:学习目标、学习步骤和全部答案都在这里,跟着走就能通关第九章。

学习目标 Learning Objectives
  • 阅读策略:用上下文猜生词(starving / sip / spark 等);体会「时间反复」与「情绪转折」对气氛的作用;识别问答推进、三连动作、神态白描三种写法。
  • 语言知识:掌握 12 个核心词汇;学习情态动词 + 动词原形、过去完成进行时、would sooner、What 感叹句。
  • 写作技巧:学习时间反复、设问、对比反衬、三连动作、神态白描、直抒胸臆六种手法,并完成仿写。
  • 思维表达:借助思维导图完整复述第九章;能区分“细节—推断—评价”三类问题。
学习步骤 Suggested Steps
  • 第 1 步 · 热身(课前 10 分钟):读前热身 → 回顾第八章 108 人围山 → 预测“狐狸爸爸会想什么办法”;用朗读功能听读第一段(三天三夜)。
  • 第 2 步 · 精读(课中 25 分钟):用朗读功能精读原文(重点朗读第三段希望升起、第五段全家打气)→ 看人物档案 → 用思维导图梳理情节 → 看写作亮点讲解。
  • 第 3 步 · 巩固(课后 15 分钟):复述支架练习 → 思考题分层挑战 → 小测验 → 完成仿写。
  • 小提示:如果觉得难,先完成 L1 细节题和配对游戏;想挑战自己,试试 L3 评价题和“undefeated”仿写。
参考答案 Answer Key
  • 预测题:B — 狐狸爸爸的办法就是挖洞,他担心力气不够,但孩子们给了他勇气(下一章 Boggis’s Chicken House Number One)。
  • 复述支架:① nights ② sip ③ dash ④ refuse ⑤ spark ⑥ undefeated。
  • 思考题:见各题“答案”按钮;L3 开放题言之有理即可。
  • 选择题:1-A 2-A 3-A 4-A 5-A。
  • 配对:Mrs Fox→I refuse to let you go up there...;Mr Fox→We can handle this by ourselves.;A Small Fox→Couldn’t we make a dash for it, Dad?
更多精读玩法 More Ideas
  • 沉默练习:试一试,演一演“闭着眼想主意的爸爸”和“拦着孩子的妈妈”——用表情和动作把心里话说出来,体会 Show, Don’t Tell。
  • 情绪曲线:画一条「心情过山车」:绝望(die in peace)→ 有主意(I’ve just had a bit of an idea)→ 泄气(It won’t work)→ 振作(We can do it!),看看情绪怎么上下起伏。
  • 复述接龙:和家人或同学一起,一个说一句,下一位接下一句,用 First / Then / Next / Finally 串完第九章。
  • 读书日志 Reading Log:每章记录 3 个新词、1 句金句、1 个问题。
  • 家人打气:聊一聊:你遇到困难时,家人是怎么给你打气的?像四只小狐狸那样说一句“You can do it!”。
  • 跨章对比:想一想——第八章狐狸爸爸沉默是因为“没有答案”;第九章他沉默是因为“正在想答案”。同一份沉默,前后意思一样吗?