CHAPTER 18 · 全书共 18 章 · 最后一章

Still Waiting 还在等待

“盛宴结束了,故事还没有。”地面上,博吉斯、邦斯和比恩坐在帐篷边,把枪放在膝上,等着狐狸从洞里出来。天开始下雨,水顺着三个男人的脖子流进鞋里。“他现在撑不了多久了,”博吉斯说。“那畜生肯定饿坏了,”邦斯说。“说得对,”比恩说,“他随时都会冲出来。把枪拿好。”他们坐在洞口,等狐狸出来。而据我所知——他们还在等待。

作者 Roald Dahl 体裁 章节书 · 小说 重点 结尾章 · 雨夜等待 · 三人对话 · 开放式结局 · 书名点题 适合 词汇量 3000+ 的阅读者 · Lexile 600L
雨夜中,三个农夫坐在帐篷边,把枪放在膝上,望着黑漆漆的狐狸洞口,雨水顺着他们的帽子流下来,四周一片安静
Still Waiting —— 还在等待
18Chapter 18
01 · BEFORE YOU READ

读前热身Before You Read

The feast is over. Up above ground, Boggis, Bunce and Bean sit beside their tents with their guns on their laps. It begins to rain — water trickles down the necks of the three men and into their shoes. “He won’t stay down there much longer now,” says Boggis. “The brute must be famished,” says Bunce. “That’s right,” says Bean. “He’ll be making a dash for it any moment. Keep your guns handy.” They sit there by the hole, waiting for the fox to come out. And so far as I know, they are still waiting. Now read “Still Waiting” — the last chapter of the book.盛宴结束了。地面上,博吉斯、邦斯和比恩坐在帐篷边,把枪放在膝上。天开始下雨——水顺着三个男人的脖子流进鞋里。“他现在撑不了多久了,”博吉斯说。“那畜生肯定饿坏了,”邦斯说。“说得对,”比恩说,“他随时都会冲出来。把枪拿好。”他们坐在洞口,等狐狸出来。而据我所知,他们还在等待。现在来读《还在等待》——全书的最后一章。

About the Author · 关于作者

Dahl ends the whole book with the three farmers still waiting by the hole — guns on their laps, rain dripping down their necks. After a book full of digging and outsmarting, the enemy is reduced to a frozen picture: three men who can only wait. He even steps into the story himself: “And so far as I know, they are still waiting.” The narrator’s voice turns the ending into a joke that never gets old — and gives the book its title. Dahl’s rule of endings: the cleverest trick is to leave the reader smiling.达尔用三个农夫还在洞口等待为全书收尾——枪放膝上,雨水顺着脖子流。一整本书的挖掘与智斗之后,敌人被定格成一幅静止的画面:三个只能等待的男人。他甚至亲自走进故事:“而据我所知,他们还在等待。”叙述者的声音把结尾变成一个永远不会过时的笑话——也给了这本书它的书名。达尔的结尾法则:最聪明的收尾,是让读者带着微笑合上书。

What Happened Before · 上一章回顾

In Chapter 17, Mr Fox bricked up the hole in the wall and they headed home — each holding a jar of cider. He sang a little song as he ran, and Badger joined in. They rounded the final corner and burst in upon a large dining-room hollowed out of the earth, where twenty-nine animals sat around a huge table covered with chickens, ducks, geese, hams and bacon. Mrs Fox hugged Mr Fox, everyone hugged everyone else, and Badger raised his glass: “A toast — to Mr Fox!” Mr Fox stood up and promised: “We will make a little underground village — and every day we will eat like kings.” The cheering that followed went on for many minutes.第十七章里,狐狸爸爸封好墙上的洞,他们每人抱着一罐苹果酒回家。他边跑边唱一支小曲,獾先生也加入进来。他们转过最后一个弯,冲进地下挖出的大餐厅——二十九只动物围坐在铺满鸡、鸭、鹅、火腿和培根的大桌旁。狐狸太太拥抱狐狸爸爸,大家互相拥抱,獾先生举起酒杯:“敬狐狸爸爸一杯!”狐狸爸爸站起来许诺:“我们要建一座地下村庄——每天像国王一样吃饭。”随之而来的欢呼持续了好几分钟。

Reading Tip · 阅读小贴士:Watch three things: ① the scene — three farmers frozen by the hole, guns on their laps; ② the rain — water trickling down necks and into shoes, a picture of useless waiting; ③ the ending — “so far as I know, they are still waiting”: the narrator steps in, the story stays open, and the book gets its title.注意三样东西:①画面——三个农夫定格在洞口,枪放膝上;②雨——水顺着脖子流进鞋里,一幅徒劳等待的画面;③结尾——“据我所知,他们还在等待”:叙述者亲自登场,故事保持开放,书名就此点题。

Predict · 猜一猜

Up above, the three farmers sit beside their tents with their guns on their laps, waiting for Mr Fox to come out. It is beginning to rain. Will they catch him?地面上,三个农夫坐在帐篷边,把枪放在膝上,等狐狸爸爸从洞里出来。天开始下雨。他们会抓住他吗?

Pick one to remember your prediction — come back after reading to check!
点一个选项记住你的预测,读完全章后回来揭晓答案。

The Answer Is B!The last line of the book says it: “And so far as I know, they are still waiting.” Mr Fox never comes out. The animals have their underground village with a safe tunnel to three of the finest stores in the world — they eat like kings every day. The farmers wait in the rain by the hole, and they are still waiting.书的最后一句就是答案:“而据我所知,他们还在等待。”狐狸爸爸再也没出来。动物们拥有通往世界上三家最好商店的安全隧道的地下村庄——每天像国王一样吃饭。农夫们在洞口淋着雨等,一直等到现在。

Two more questions after reading · 还有两个小问题:

1. Where did the three farmers sit?
三个农夫坐在哪里?
2. What did the rain do to the three men?
雨把三个男人怎么样了?

02 · READ & EXPLORE

原文精读Read & Explore

跟着原文读一遍。橙色单词先别查——根据上下文猜一猜。点击任意单词弹出词典卡片(中英释义 · 发音 · 例句);点段落开头的 ▶ 听朗读(英式男声)。

Chapter 18 · Still Waiting

Outside the fox’s hole, Boggis and Bunce and Bean sat beside their tents with their guns on their laps.

段落大意:在狐狸洞外,博吉斯、邦斯和比恩坐在帐篷边,把枪放在膝上。
雨夜中,三个农夫坐在帐篷边的凳子上,把枪放在膝上,盯着黑漆漆的狐狸洞口,神情专注
P1 · 洞外 —— 枪在膝上Guns on Their Laps
结构手法 · 首尾呼应Structure · Where It All Began
Outside the fox’s hole, Boggis and Bunce and Bean sat beside their tents with their guns on their laps.
The book began with these three farmers waiting for the fox, and it ends with exactly the same picture. The circle closes: after all the digging, the stealing and the feasting, the enemy is exactly where he started — outside the hole, waiting.这本书以三个农夫等狐狸开场,又以一模一样的画面收尾。圆圈合拢:经过挖掘、偷窃和盛宴,敌人还在他出发的地方——洞口外,等待着。
表达方式 · 场面定格Expression · A Frozen Picture
They sat beside their tents with their guns on their laps.
Nobody moves. The sentence is short and still, like a photograph: tents, guns, laps. Everything about the farmers is waiting, and nothing about them is working — while underground, the animals are building a village.没有人动。句子又短又静,像一张照片:帐篷、枪、膝头。农夫的一切都是等待,没有一样是在行动——而地下,动物们正在建村庄。

It was beginning to rain. Water was trickling down the necks of the three men and into their shoes.

段落大意:天开始下雨。水顺着三个男人的脖子流下来,流进他们的鞋里。
细雨中,三个农夫坐在洞口边的帐篷前,雨水顺着他们的帽檐和脖子流下来,汇进鞋子里,三人缩着脖子
P2 · 下雨 —— 水顺脖流The Trickling Rain
环境描写 · 以景衬情Environment · Rain on the Watchers
It was beginning to rain. Water was trickling down the necks of the three men and into their shoes.
Rain is not a disaster — it is just uncomfortable: down the necks, into the shoes. The detail is small and physical, and it does the job of a whole paragraph. The weather is against the farmers, and the reader feels it on his own neck.雨不是灾难——只是不舒服:顺着脖子,流进鞋里。细节又小又具体,顶得上整整一段。天气站在农夫们的对立面,读者自己脖子上都有感觉。
表现手法 · 徒劳的等待Technique · The Useless Waiting
Water was trickling down the necks of the three men and into their shoes.
The rain is not just weather; it is a comment. Every drop says the same thing: nothing is happening, nothing will happen. Dahl chooses the smallest details of discomfort to paint a picture of waiting that has no end.雨不只是天气,更是一句评论。每一滴都在说同一件事:什么都没发生,什么都不会发生。达尔挑出最细微的不适细节,画出一幅没有尽头的等待图景。

“He won’t stay down there much longer now,” Boggis said.

段落大意:“他现在撑不了多久了,”博吉斯说。
帐篷边,胖胖的博吉斯抱着枪、皱着眉头开口说话,邦斯和比恩在旁边听着,三人淋着细雨
P3 · 博吉斯 —— 撑不了多久He Won’t Stay Much Longer
表达方式 · 语言描写Expression · Boggis Speaks
“He won’t stay down there much longer now,” Boggis said.
Boggis speaks with total confidence: not “I think” or “maybe” — just “he won’t.” The certainty is the joke, because the reader knows something Boggis does not: the fox is not coming out at all.博吉斯说得斩钉截铁:不是“我想”或“也许”——而是“他不会”。这份笃定就是笑点,因为读者知道博吉斯不知道的事:狐狸根本不会出来。
修辞 · 戏剧性反讽Rhetoric · The Empty Promise
“He won’t stay down there much longer now,” Boggis said.
The readers and the animals share a secret the farmers will never learn: the underground village is already being built. Every word of Boggis’s prediction is true in his own mind and false in the story — that is dramatic irony.读者和动物们共享一个农夫永远不知道的秘密:地下村庄已经开建。博吉斯的每一句预测在他自己心里是真的,在故事里却是假的——这就是戏剧性反讽。

“The brute must be famished,” Bunce said.

段落大意:“那畜生肯定饿坏了,”邦斯说。
矮胖的邦斯缩着脖子、一脸愠怒地开口说话,雨水顺着他的帽檐滴下来,旁边的博吉斯和比恩也在淋雨
P4 · 邦斯 —— 肯定饿坏了The Brute Must Be Famished
表达方式 · 语言描写Expression · Bunce Judges
“The brute must be famished,” Bunce said.
Bunce calls Mr Fox “the brute” — one word of hatred. And he is wrong: the fox is not famished at all; he has just finished the greatest feast of his life. The word “famished” belongs to the farmers, not to the fox.邦斯把狐狸爸爸叫作“那畜生”——一个字的恨意。而且他错了:狐狸一点也不饿,他刚刚享用完一生中最盛大的一餐。“饿坏了”这个词属于农夫们,不属于狐狸。
特别项 · must 表推测Special · Must Be Famished
The brute must be famished.
Must + be + adjective = a very strong guess. Bunce is not saying the fox is hungry; he is saying he is certain it is. The grammar shows how sure he is — and how completely wrong.must + be + 形容词 = 非常有把握的推测。邦斯不是说狐狸饿,而是说他确信狐狸饿。这个语法点显出了他有多笃定——以及有多离谱。

“That’s right,” Bean said. “He’ll be making a dash for it any moment.

段落大意:“说得对,”比恩说,“他随时都会冲出来。”
瘦高的比恩坐在帐篷边开口说话,神情严肃,博吉斯和邦斯转头看着他,三人淋着细雨抱着枪
P5 · 比恩 —— 随时会冲出来The Dash for It
结构手法 · 对话链条Structure · Three Voices
“He won’t stay down there much longer now,” Boggis said. “The brute must be famished,” Bunce said. “That’s right,” Bean said.
One line each, three speakers, in order: Boggis guesses, Bunce agrees, Bean confirms. The three short speeches build one shared certainty — and the certainty is the joke, because every word is wrong.一人一句,三个说话人,按顺序来:博吉斯猜测,邦斯附和,比恩确认。三句短话拼成一个共同的笃定——而这笃定就是笑点,因为句句都错。
表达方式 · 语言描写Expression · Bean Agrees
“That’s right,” Bean said. “He’ll be making a dash for it any moment.”
“That’s right” is a short echo, and “any moment” is the promise of action that never comes. Bean talks about the fox as if he were already out of the hole — he is describing a moment the reader knows will never arrive.“说得对”是一声简短的回响,“随时”则是永不兑现的行动许诺。比恩说起狐狸好像他已经出了洞——他描述的这一刻,读者知道永远不会到来。

“Keep your guns handy.”

段落大意:“把枪拿好。”
三个农夫各自抱着枪、警觉地盯着黑漆漆的狐狸洞口,雨水打湿了他们的衣服,四周静悄悄的
P6 · 命令 —— 把枪拿好Keep Your Guns Handy
表达方式 · 祈使命令Expression · Keep Your Guns Handy
“Keep your guns handy.”
No “please”, no subject — just a command: Keep your guns handy. It is the shortest sentence in the chapter, and it carries all the tension: the men are ready for a dash that will never happen.没有“请”,没有主语——只有一条命令:把枪拿好。这是本章最短的句子,却扛着全部紧张:他们准备好迎接一场永远不会发生的冲刺。
表现手法 · 蓄势与落空Technique · The Dash That Never Comes
He’ll be making a dash for it any moment. Keep your guns handy.
The whole chapter builds one expectation: any moment, the fox will dash out. Every line of the farmers feeds this tension — and the last line of the book quietly lets it run for ever. The build-up is the whole joke.全章只铺垫一个期待:随时,狐狸会冲出来。农夫们的每句话都在喂养这份紧张——而全书最后一句悄悄让它永远延续。这铺垫本身就是全部笑点。

They sat there by the hole, waiting for the fox to come out.

段落大意:他们坐在洞口,等狐狸出来。
三个农夫坐在洞口边的帐篷前,枪放在膝上,眼巴巴地望着黑漆漆的狐狸洞口,雨水不停地落下
P7 · 等待 —— 坐着等狐狸Sitting and Waiting
表达方式 · 叙述短句Expression · Sitting and Waiting
They sat there by the hole, waiting for the fox to come out.
One short sentence, one picture: they sat, they waited. No action, no progress, no dialogue. The sentence is as still as the scene — and the stillness is exactly the point.一个短句,一幅画面:坐着,等着。没有动作,没有进展,没有对话。句子和场景一样静止——而这种静止正是要点。
结构手法 · 悬念延宕Structure · The Open Wait
They sat there by the hole, waiting for the fox to come out.
Waiting for the fox to come out — the sentence looks forward to something that never happens. Dahl stretches the suspense instead of resolving it, and the open wait becomes the whole ending.等狐狸出来——这句话期待着一件永远不会发生的事。达尔把悬念拉长而不是解开,这开放的等待就成了整个结尾。

And so far as I know, they are still waiting.

段落大意:而据我所知,他们还在等待。
画面拉远:雨幕中,三个农夫仍然坐在洞口边,枪放在膝上,像三尊雕像,远处田野一片寂静,雨还在下
P8 · 还在等待 —— 全书最后一句They Are Still Waiting
特别项 · 作者直接发声Special · The Narrator Speaks
And so far as I know, they are still waiting.
“So far as I know” — suddenly the storyteller steps into the story and talks straight to the reader. The first-person voice makes the ending feel like a true report, and the joke belongs to us: the farmers are still there, waiting, to this day.“据我所知”——突然讲故事的人走进故事,直接对读者说话。第一人称的声音让结尾像一份真实报道,而笑点属于我们:农夫们还在那儿,一直等到今天。
特别项 · 书名点题 · 开放式结局Special · The Title in the Last Line
And so far as I know, they are still waiting.
The book ends with its own title: still waiting. The ending is open, funny and permanent — the farmers wait, the village grows, and the reader smiles. A perfect last line: it closes the book and leaves the story alive.全书以书名收尾:还在等待。这个结尾开放、幽默、永恒——农夫们等着,村庄在生长,读者会心一笑。完美的末句:它合上了书,却让故事活着。
03 · CHARACTER CARDS

人物档案Who Is on Stage Tonight

这一章:盛宴结束,故事还没有。三个农夫坐在洞外的帐篷边,把枪放在膝上,在雨里等狐狸出来。他们一句接一句地猜测——「他撑不了多久了」「那畜生肯定饿坏了」「他随时都会冲出来」——可每一句肯定都落了空。狐狸爸爸待在地下,和动物们建起村庄;洞外,三个农夫还在等待。

THE CONFIDENT

Boggis

博吉斯 · 自信的断言者
WAIT 等待Boggis and Bunce and Bean sat beside their tents with their guns on their laps. 枪放在膝上,坐成三尊雕像
PREDICT 预言“He won’t stay down there much longer now,” Boggis said. 斩钉截铁的自信,句句落空
FREEZE 定格They sat there by the hole, waiting for the fox to come out. 只剩等待,再无行动
THE FURIOUS

Bunce

邦斯 · 愠怒的诅咒者
JUDGE 咒骂“The brute must be famished,” Bunce said. 一句“畜生”,满腹恨意
GUESS 推测must be famished — he is certain the fox is starving. must 表确信,却与事实完全相反
DRIP 淋雨Water was trickling down the necks of the three men and into their shoes. 雨水灌进脖领,狼狈的等待
THE COMMANDER

Bean

比恩 · 冷静的指挥官
AGREE 附和“That’s right,” Bean said. 两个字,锁死三人的共同判断
DASH 预言“He’ll be making a dash for it any moment.” 预言一场永不发生的冲刺
ORDER 下令“Keep your guns handy.” 最短的命令,最紧的等待

描写分析 · Descriptions That Shape the Character

描写分析仅限本章内容。这一章写「三个农夫在雨里等狐狸」:记叙文写「性格」,用语言(自信断言 vs 愠怒咒骂)写愚蠢与顽固、用动作(枪放膝上一动不动)写僵持与徒劳、用心理(“随时会冲出来”的期待)写落空——每一处描写,都在塑造三个失败者:自信的博吉斯、愠怒的邦斯、冷静的比恩。

人物描写 · CHARACTER外貌 · 语言 · 动作 · 心理 · 神态
语言描写 · SPEECH

“He won’t stay down there much longer now,” Boggis said.

Boggis speaks with total confidence: not “I think” or “maybe”, just “he won’t.” The certainty is the joke, because the reader knows something Boggis does not: the fox is not coming out at all. One short sentence shows the farmer’s whole character — proud, stubborn and wrong.

博吉斯说得斩钉截铁:不是“我想”或“也许”——而是“他不会”。这份笃定就是笑点,因为读者知道博吉斯不知道的事:狐狸根本不会出来。一个短句显出农夫的整个性格——骄傲、固执、错得离谱。

语言描写 · SPEECH

“The brute must be famished,” Bunce said.

Bunce calls Mr Fox “the brute” — one word of hatred. And he is wrong: the fox has just finished the greatest feast of his life. The word “famished” belongs to the farmers, not to the fox. His anger shows in a single insult, and his ignorance shows in a single guess.

邦斯把狐狸爸爸叫作“那畜生”——一个字的恨意。而且他错了:狐狸刚刚享用完一生中最盛大的一餐。“饿坏了”这个词属于农夫们,不属于狐狸。他的怒火藏在一个侮辱里,他的无知藏在一个猜测里。

动作描写 · ACTION

Boggis and Bunce and Bean sat beside their tents with their guns on their laps. They sat there by the hole, waiting for the fox to come out.

Nobody moves. Sat, sat, waiting — the verbs are all stillness. Guns on laps, eyes on the hole: the men are fixed like statues, and the sentence never lets them leave. Their only action is inaction, and that is exactly what the ending needs.

没有人动。坐着、坐着、等着——动词全是静止。枪放膝上,眼睛盯着洞口:三个人像雕像一样定住,句子始终不让他们离开。他们唯一的动作就是不动,这正是结尾需要的。

心理描写 · PSYCHOLOGY

“That’s right,” Bean said. “He’ll be making a dash for it any moment.”

“Any moment” is a mind full of expectation — the farmer’s whole inner world is one long wait for something that will never come. Dahl shows the psychology without explaining it: the men think in “any moment”, and the reader knows the moment never arrives.

“随时”是一个装满期待的脑子——农夫的整个内心世界就是一场漫长的等待,等一件永远不会来的事。达尔不用解释就写出了心理:男人们用“随时”思考,而读者知道那一刻永远不会到来。

环境描写 · ENVIRONMENT场景 · 景物 · 氛围
环境描写 · ENVIRONMENT

It was beginning to rain. Water was trickling down the necks of the three men and into their shoes.

The rain is not just weather; it is a comment. Every drop says the same thing: nothing is happening, nothing will happen. Dahl chooses the smallest details of discomfort — down the necks, into the shoes — to paint a picture of waiting that has no end. The setting itself becomes the joke.

雨不只是天气,更是一句评论。每一滴都在说同一件事:什么都没发生,什么都不会发生。达尔挑出最细微的不适细节——顺着脖子,流进鞋里——画出一幅没有尽头的等待图景。场景本身变成了笑点。

等待 vs 安居 · Waiting vs Home

The Farmers ↑ 地上 · 等待“He’ll be making a dash for it any moment. Keep your guns handy.” · 枪、雨、永远不来的狐狸——三个农夫坐在洞口,等一场永不发生的冲刺
The Animals ↓ 地下 · 家园An underground village with streets and houses, where every day they eat like kings. · 街道、房屋、盛宴——动物们在地下建起村庄,每天像国王一样吃饭

示意图:全书的最后一幕就压在这对反义词上——地上是枪与雨,地下是村庄与盛宴。农夫们只会等待,动物们已经安居。对比越鲜明,那句“他们还在等待”就越好笑、越动人。

文章结构 · Story Structure 开放式结尾 · 首尾呼应 · The Open Wait

这一章是「等待 → 对话 → 定格」的收束结构:洞外雨夜定格三个农夫 → 三人对话把紧张推到顶点 → 一句 “still waiting” 让悬念永远延续。它接住全书的开场(三个农夫在洞口等),以同一个画面合拢圆圈——等待,就是这本书的最后一章。

等待STILL洞外雨夜,枪放膝上,三尊雕像
对话VOICES博吉斯断言 → 邦斯咒骂 → 比恩下令
定格STILL WAITING作者发声:据我所知,他们还在等待
Part 1 · 定格 · 洞外雨夜

Outside the fox’s hole, Boggis and Bunce and Bean sat beside their tents with their guns on their laps.

「在狐狸洞外,博吉斯、邦斯和比恩坐在帐篷边,把枪放在膝上。」

How it expands · 怎么展开:用「镜头定格」展开:开场就是一个静止的中景——洞、帐篷、枪、膝。三个人被画成一幅画,为全章定下“等待”的基调。

推进 · Steps ×3下雨 → 对话 → 命令
Step 1 · 下雨

It was beginning to rain. Water was trickling down the necks of the three men and into their shoes.

「天开始下雨。水顺着三个男人的脖子流下来,流进他们的鞋里。」

How it expands · 怎么展开:用「环境加压」展开:雨不是灾难,只是难受——顺着脖子、流进鞋里。天意站在农夫们对面,等待变得更狼狈。

Step 2 · 对话

“He won’t stay down there much longer now,” Boggis said. “The brute must be famished,” Bunce said. “That’s right,” Bean said.

「『他现在撑不了多久了,』博吉斯说。『那畜生肯定饿坏了,』邦斯说。『说得对,』比恩说。」

How it expands · 怎么展开:用「对话链条」展开:一人一句,博吉斯猜测、邦斯附和、比恩确认——三句话拼成一个共同的笃定,而句句都与真相相反。

Step 3 · 命令

“He’ll be making a dash for it any moment. Keep your guns handy.”

「『他随时都会冲出来。把枪拿好。』」

How it expands · 怎么展开:用「短句收束」展开:一句预言接一条命令——“any moment”把紧张推到顶点,“Keep your guns handy”让三个人绷成满弓,等待一场永不发生的冲刺。

Part 3 · 定格 · 还在等待

And so far as I know, they are still waiting.

「而据我所知,他们还在等待。」

How it expands · 怎么展开:用「作者发声」收尾:讲故事的人直接走进故事——“so far as I know”让结局像一句真实报道,“still waiting”接住开场的等待画面,也用书名合拢全书。悬念不解决,笑点不落幕。

按结构复述 · Retell by Structure(场景顺序)

这是「首尾呼应的开放式结尾」结构,复述时沿着画面走:洞外 → 雨 → 三人对话 → 命令 → 坐着等 → 作者收尾。先讲画面,再讲对话,最后讲那个永远不结束的等待。

First · 洞外Outside the fox’s hole, Boggis and Bunce and Bean sat beside their tents with their guns on their laps.狐狸洞外,博吉斯、邦斯和比恩坐在帐篷边,把枪放在膝上。
Then · 下雨It was beginning to rain. Water was trickling down the necks of the three men and into their shoes.天开始下雨,水顺着他们的脖子流进鞋里。
Next · 博吉斯“He won’t stay down there much longer now,” Boggis said.「他现在撑不了多久了,」博吉斯说。
Then · 邦斯“The brute must be famished,” Bunce said.「那畜生肯定饿坏了,」邦斯说。
Next · 比恩“That’s right,” Bean said. “He’ll be making a dash for it any moment.”「说得对,」比恩说,「他随时都会冲出来。」
Then · 命令“Keep your guns handy.”「把枪拿好。」
Next · 坐着等They sat there by the hole, waiting for the fox to come out.他们坐在洞口,等狐狸出来。
Finally · 还在等待And so far as I know, they are still waiting.而据我所知,他们还在等待。

小提示:与「思维导图」搭配用——把导图的枝条按 等待 → 对话 → 定格 排好,先看导图复述一遍,再合上导图凭记忆复述一遍。

04 · STORY MAP & RETELL

思维导图 · 复述文章Story Map & Retelling

把第十八章的信息装进这张「思维导图」,再沿着复述支架讲一遍——你也能当小老师!

Still Waiting
地点人物情节关键结果

复述支架 · Retell with the scaffold

把句子补充完整,就完成了第十八章的复述。

1
Outside the fox’s hole, Boggis and Bunce and Bean sat beside their tents with their guns on their ________.
2
It was beginning to rain. Water was trickling down the necks of the three men and into their ________.
3
“He won’t stay down there much longer now,” ________ said.
4
“The brute must be famished,” ________ said.
5
“That’s right,” ________ said.
6
“He’ll be making a dash for it any moment. Keep your guns ________.”
7
They sat there by the hole, waiting for the fox to come ________.
8
And so far as I know, they are still ________.

复述加分:用 First / Then / Next / Then / Next / Then / Then / Finally 把八句话串起来;讲到三个农夫说话,一人一句,用越来越不耐烦的口气——雨越大,等待越久,你的复述就越有味!

05 · PICTURE RETELL

看图复述Retell with Pictures

8 张图卡按情节顺序排好。看着图片,用英文把第十八章讲出来——点击图片可以放大,每张图点开都有一句「提示句」帮你起头。

1雨夜中,三个农夫坐在帐篷边的凳子上,把枪放在膝上,盯着黑漆漆的狐狸洞口,神情专注
洞外守候
Say: Outside the fox’s hole, Boggis and Bunce and Bean sat beside their tents with their guns on their laps.
狐狸洞外,博吉斯、邦斯和比恩坐在帐篷边,把枪放在膝上。
2细雨中,三个农夫坐在洞口边的帐篷前,雨水顺着他们的帽檐和脖子流下来,汇进鞋子里,三人缩着脖子
开始下雨
Say: It was beginning to rain. Water was trickling down the necks of the three men and into their shoes.
天开始下雨,水顺着三个男人的脖子流下来,流进他们的鞋里。
3帐篷边,胖胖的博吉斯抱着枪、皱着眉头开口说话,邦斯和比恩在旁边听着,三人淋着细雨
博吉斯断言
Say: “He won’t stay down there much longer now,” Boggis said.
「他现在撑不了多久了,」博吉斯说。
4矮胖的邦斯缩着脖子、一脸愠怒地开口说话,雨水顺着他的帽檐滴下来,旁边的博吉斯和比恩也在淋雨
邦斯咒骂
Say: “The brute must be famished,” Bunce said.
「那畜生肯定饿坏了,」邦斯说。
5瘦高的比恩坐在帐篷边开口说话,神情严肃,博吉斯和邦斯转头看着他,三人淋着细雨抱着枪
比恩预言
Say: “That’s right,” Bean said. “He’ll be making a dash for it any moment.”
「说得对,」比恩说,「他随时都会冲出来。」
6三个农夫各自抱着枪、警觉地盯着黑漆漆的狐狸洞口,雨水打湿了他们的衣服,四周静悄悄的
把枪拿好
Say: “He’ll be making a dash for it any moment. Keep your guns handy.”
「他随时都会冲出来。把枪拿好。」
7三个农夫坐在洞口边的帐篷前,枪放在膝上,眼巴巴地望着黑漆漆的狐狸洞口,雨水不停地落下
坐着等待
Say: They sat there by the hole, waiting for the fox to come out.
他们坐在洞口,等狐狸出来。
8画面拉远:雨幕中,三个农夫仍然坐在洞口边,枪放在膝上,像三尊雕像,远处田野一片寂静,雨还在下
还在等待
Say: And so far as I know, they are still waiting.
而据我所知,他们还在等待。

提示:图卡可左右滑动查看全部 8 张;点「看看提示句」展开英文句子;点图片放大全屏。

1 · First 洞外守候→ 2 · Then 开始下雨→ 3 · Next 博吉斯断言→ 4 · Also 邦斯咒骂→ 5 · Then 比恩预言→ 6 · Next 把枪拿好→ 7 · Also 坐着等待→ 8 · Finally 还在等待

小挑战:先看着图讲一遍,再合上图卡,只凭记忆讲一遍——能做到,第十八章就真正属于你了!

06 · WRITER’S CRAFT

写作亮点分析Why This Writing Works

这一章,Dahl 不写「再挖一条隧道」,写「等一只不会出来的狐狸」:洞口、帐篷、膝上的枪、顺脖子流下的雨,还有三句越来越肯定的猜测。全书最安静的一章,秘密武器是这八招:

Still, Waiting · 还在等待
结构手法 · 首尾呼应,一幅画面合拢全书
Outside the fox’s hole, Boggis and Bunce and Bean sat beside their tents ... And so far as I know, they are still waiting.

全书开头,三个农夫在洞口等狐狸;最后一章,同一幅画面原样端上来:枪还在膝上,人还在洞口。首尾相接,故事绕了一圈回到起点——唯一不同的是,读者已经知道狐狸赢了。等待,就是这本书的结局。

小任务:用「首尾呼应」写一天:Morning: "One more hour!" Evening: "Still one more hour!"(早上:「再等一小时!」晚上:「还在等一小时!」)
中文写作对照 · 首尾呼应 echoing opening and ending

开头「洞外等待」,结尾「还在等待」——中文叫「首尾呼应」;一幅画面首尾相接,故事绕一圈回来,等待成了结局本身。

An End That Stays Open · 不落幕的结局
结构手法 · 开放式结尾,悬念永不落地
“And so far as I know, they are still waiting.”

故事的结尾不回答「狐狸有没有被抓住」,只回答「据我所知,他们还在等」。达尔故意不解决悬念:狐狸的胜利不需要盖章,三个农夫的等待也不需要终止——让读者带着笑合上书,就是最好的句号。

小任务:用「开放式结尾」写谜题:And to this day, nobody knows where the treasure went.(直到今天,没有人知道宝藏去了哪里。)
中文写作对照 · 留白结尾 / 开放式结尾 an open ending

不写「结果如何」,只写「据我所知还在等」——中文叫「留白」;话不说尽,余味更长。

Rain Does the Talking · 让雨说话
表达方式 · 环境描写,以景衬情
It was beginning to rain. Water was trickling down the necks of the three men and into their shoes.

这一章没有打斗、没有追逐,达尔让雨来当配角:顺着脖子、流进鞋里——雨不大,却一刻不停。环境不说话,但它每时每刻都在说:这里什么都没发生,这里什么都不会发生。

小任务:用「环境写心情」写等待:The rain kept falling, drop by drop.(雨一刻不停,一滴一滴地落。)
中文写作对照 · 环境描写 / 以景衬情 environmental description

用雨写等待,不写「很无聊」,只写「水顺着脖子流进鞋」——中文叫「以景衬情」;景物不说话,情绪全在上面。

Three Certain Voices · 三句笃定的话
表达方式 · 语言描写,对话链条推高自信
“He won’t stay down there much longer now,” Boggis said. “The brute must be famished,” Bunce said. “That’s right,” Bean said.

博吉斯断言、邦斯诅咒、比恩附和——三句话拼成一条对话链,一句比一句肯定,像接力一样把自信传下去。读者知道狐狸正在地下赴宴,于是每一句「肯定」都变成一次小小的反讽:越笃定,越好笑。

小任务:用「对话链条」写放学:“He’ll come out soon,” Mum said. “He always comes out,” Dad said. “Right,” I said.(「他马上就出来,」妈妈说。「他总是会出来,」爸爸说。「对,」我说。)
中文写作对照 · 语言描写 speech description

一人一句,接力断言——中文叫「语言描写」;话不旁白,性格和愚蠢都在台词里。

A Frozen Picture · 雕像式的静止
表达方式 · 动作描写,唯一的动作是「不动」
Boggis and Bunce and Bean sat beside their tents with their guns on their laps. They sat there by the hole, waiting for the fox to come out.

全章的动词几乎只有 sat 和 waiting:没有人追、没有人喊、没有人开枪。达尔用「零动作」写等待——三个人被钉在画面里,像三尊雕像。动作越少,僵持越久,结尾那句「还在等待」就越有分量。

小任务:用「静止写等待」写一句:He stood at the window, watching for the bus.(他站在窗前,望着公交车来。)
中文写作对照 · 动作描写(静态) stillness as action

不写「他们等着」,只写「他们坐着、枪放在膝上」——中文叫「以静写动」;一动不动,反而把等待写到了极致。

The Brute Must Be Famished · 读者知道的秘密
修辞手法 · 戏剧性反讽,笃定与真相错位
“The brute must be famished,” Bunce said.

邦斯用 must 斩钉截铁地推测:狐狸肯定饿坏了。可读者刚看完盛宴——狐狸吃得像国王。台词与真相完全相反,这就是戏剧性反讽:农夫们越肯定,读者越乐。一个 must,把三个人的愚蠢说得明明白白。

小任务:用「戏剧性反讽」写一句:“He must be so worried,” she said — but the dog was asleep in the sun.(「他肯定急坏了,」她说——可那只狗正躺在太阳下睡大觉。)
中文写作对照 · 反讽 / 说反话 dramatic irony

「他肯定饿坏了」——读者知道他刚吃过盛宴——中文叫「反讽」;话与真相错位,笑点就出来了。

The Feast vs The Wait · 盛宴与等待
表现手法 · 对比,把全书压成一幅画
Up above: guns on their laps, rain in their shoes ... Down below: streets and houses, every day we will eat like kings.

一章之内,达尔只给了两个画面:地上是枪和雨,地下是村庄和盛宴。农夫们守着洞口等一场永远不会来的冲刺,动物们在地下建起了家。这一对反义词不是装饰,是全书的总结——谁在等,谁在赢,一眼便知。

小任务:用「对比」写周末:Outside the rain kept falling; inside the fire was warm.(外面雨下个不停;屋里炉火暖暖的。)
中文写作对照 · 对比 contrast

「地上枪与雨,地下家与宴」——中文叫「对比」;两个世界并排一站,结局不言自明。

The Narrator Steps In · 叙述者登台
特别项 · 作者直接发声,一句点题收尾
And so far as I know, they are still waiting.

全书的最后一句,达尔亲自走进故事:「据我所知」。一句像新闻播报的话,把童话的结尾说得像真事——「还在等待」既是故事的结局,也是书名 Fantastic Mr Fox 背后那句潜台词:了不起的狐狸赢了,三个农夫还在等。作者一开口,全书定格。

小任务:用「作者发声」写结尾:And so far as I know, the star is still shining.(而据我所知,那颗星星还在闪耀。)
中文写作对照 · 直接抒情 / 卒章显志 the narrator’s voice at the end

结尾作者亲自开口,「据我所知」一句点题——中文叫「卒章显志」;最后一句话落下,主旨水落石出。

句子银行 · Sentence Bank(仿写句型)

sit ... with ... on one’s lap(坐在……把……放在膝上)
They sat beside their tents with their guns on their laps.
仿写:Grandpa sat by the fire with a book on his lap. 爷爷坐在炉火边,把书放在膝上。
be beginning to + 动词(开始……)
It was beginning to rain.
仿写:The leaves were beginning to fall. 树叶开始飘落。
trickle down / into(顺着……流下 / 流进)
Water was trickling down the necks of the three men and into their shoes.
仿写:Sweat trickled down my forehead. 汗水顺着我的额头流下来。
must be + 形容词(表推测:肯定……)
“The brute must be famished,” Bunce said.
仿写:He must be tired after the long walk. 走了这么远的路,他肯定累了。
make a dash for it(冲出去 / 逃跑)
“He’ll be making a dash for it any moment.”
仿写:The cat made a dash for the door. 猫朝门口冲去。
so far as I know(据我所知)
And so far as I know, they are still waiting.
仿写:So far as I know, the train has not left. 据我所知,火车还没有开。

中西对照小发现:英文 still, waiting 就是中文「首尾呼应」,an end that stays open 就是「开放式结尾/留白」,rain does the talking 就是「以景衬情」,three certain voices 就是「语言描写」,a frozen picture 就是「以静写动」,the brute must be famished 就是「反讽」,the feast vs the wait 就是「对比」,the narrator steps in 就是「卒章显志」。给小朋友讲的时候,中英文术语可以互相借用,哪边熟讲哪边。

07 · THINK DEEPER

思考题Questions to Think About

三个难度层级:先找细节,再推原因,最后谈看法。点「提示」给一点帮助,点「答案」对照想法——每道题都有英文参考答案和中文释义。

L1 · 细节 Detail

1. Where did the three farmers sit? 三个农夫坐在哪里?

第一句——「Outside the fox’s hole, Boggis and Bunce and Bean sat ___ their tents」?
Beside their tents, outside the fox’s hole, with their guns on their laps.在狐狸洞外的帐篷边,把枪放在膝上。

2. What was happening to the men’s shoes? 男人的鞋怎么了?

「Water was trickling down the necks of the three men and into their ___」?
Rain water was trickling into their shoes.雨水正流进他们的鞋里。

3. What did Bean say the fox would do any moment? 比恩说狐狸随时会做什么?

「He’ll be making a ___ for it any moment.」——哪个词?
Make a dash for it — run out of the hole.冲出来逃跑——从洞里冲出去。

L2 · 推断 Inference

4. Why were the farmers so sure the fox would come out? 农夫们为什么这么肯定狐狸会出来?

「The brute must be ___」——他们以为狐狸怎么了?他们知道地下盛宴吗?
Because they thought he must be famished — but the reader knows he is enjoying a feast underground.因为他们以为狐狸饿坏了——但读者知道,他正在地下享受盛宴。

5. Why is the rain important in this chapter? 为什么这场雨很重要?

雨顺着脖子流、流进鞋里——农夫们舒服吗?他们在等的这件事,发生了吗?
It makes the waiting look silly and endless — everything is against the farmers.它让等待显得愚蠢而漫长——一切都在跟农夫们作对。

6. Why does the narrator say “so far as I know”? 叙述者为什么说「据我所知」?

「so far as I know」像一句什么话?——新闻?保证?它让故事结束还是继续?
It turns the ending into a real-life report and keeps the story open — the wait never ends.它把结尾变成一句真实报道,并让故事保持开放——等待永远不会结束。

L3 · 评价与主题 Opinion & Theme

7. Do the farmers look clever or silly in this chapter? Why? 这一章里农夫们显得聪明还是愚蠢?为什么?

他们说了什么?他们等到了什么?读者知道什么他们不知道的?
开放题。示例:Silly — they wait in the rain with guns for a fox who is enjoying a feast underground; every confident word comes true in reverse.愚蠢——他们端着枪在雨里等一只正在地下享受盛宴的狐狸;每一句自信的话都恰恰落空。

8. Why is “still waiting” a good ending for the whole book? 为什么「还在等待」是全书的好结尾?

结尾里谁在动、谁不动?狐狸和农夫各自在干什么?书名最后一句是谁说的?
开放题。示例:Because it is an open ending that matches the title — the clever fox wins for ever, and the farmers wait for ever; the story keeps smiling after the book closes.因为这是与书名呼应的开放式结尾——聪明的狐狸永远赢了,农夫们永远等待;合上书后,故事还在微笑。

9. What do the animals’ underground life and the farmers’ rainy wait tell us about winning? 动物们的地下生活与农夫们的雨中等待,告诉我们「赢」是什么?

动物们得到了什么?农夫们守着什么?赢是吃得香,还是守得久?
开放题。示例:Winning is not waiting or grabbing — it is building a life you love; the animals build a village, the farmers only hold guns.赢不是等待也不是霸占——是经营一种你热爱的生活;动物们在建村庄,农夫们只会握枪。

中心思想 · What is this chapter really about?

Chapter 18 is about waiting that never ends. The farmers sit in the rain with guns on their laps; the fox stays underground, feasting like a king. Every word they say sounds certain, and every certainty is wrong. The last chapter is a joke about pride: the men who tried to catch a fantastic fox are left as three statues in the rain — still waiting.

第十八章写的是「永远不会结束的等待」。农夫们把枪放在膝上坐在雨里;狐狸待在地下,像国王一样赴宴。他们每句话都说得那么肯定,而每句肯定都错了。最后一章是一则关于骄傲的笑话:想要抓住一只了不起的狐狸的人,最终成了雨中的三尊雕像——还在等待。

waiting 等待rain 雨pride 骄傲forever 永远
08 · WORD LAB

词汇 · 在上下文里猜词Guess from Context

每张词卡正面是原文句子——先根据上下文猜意思,再点击翻面验证。学完 12 个核心词,别忘了下面的「拓展好词」。

lapsn. 膝部(复数)

with their guns on their laps.
猜一猜:膝上 / 头上 / 脚下?

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laps/læps/n. 膝部;大腿上方(laps 是 lap 的复数)The cat sat on her lap.联想:gun on the lap = 把枪放在膝上 · 近义:knees 膝
tentsn. 帐篷(复数)

Boggis and Bunce and Bean sat beside their tents.
猜一猜:帐篷 / 汽车 / 房屋?

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tents/tents/n. 帐篷;营帐(tent 的复数)They slept in tents all summer.联想:beside their tents = 在帐篷边 · 露营 = camping
tricklingv. 滴流(现在分词)

Water was trickling down the necks of the three men.
猜一猜:滴流 / 喷涌 / 冻结?

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trickling/ˈtrɪklɪŋ/v. 细流;一滴一滴地流Tears trickled down her cheeks.近义:drip 滴 · 联想:trickle down = 顺着……往下流
necksn. 脖子(复数)

Water was trickling down the necks of the three men.
猜一猜:脖子 / 手臂 / 后背?

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necks/neks/n. 脖子;颈部(neck 的复数)The giraffe has a very long neck.联想:down the neck = 顺着脖子 · 颈 = neck
famishedadj. 饿极的

“The brute must be famished,” Bunce said.
猜一猜:饿极的 / 饱足的 / 开心的?

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famished/ˈfæmɪʃt/adj. 饿极了的;非常饥饿的After the long hike we were famished.近义:starving 饿坏的 · 名词:famine 饥荒
bruten. 畜生(骂人话)

“The brute must be famished,” Bunce said.
猜一猜:畜生 / 绅士 / 朋友?

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brute/bruːt/n. 畜生;残忍的人/动物(贬义称呼)The brute ate all my food!联想:call sb a brute = 骂某人畜生 · 近义:beast 野兽
dashn. 冲刺;猛冲

“He’ll be making a dash for it any moment.”
猜一猜:冲刺 / 散步 / 唱歌?

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dash/dæʃ/n. 猛冲;突进;v. 飞奔He made a dash for the bus.搭配:make a dash for it 冲出去 · 近义:rush 冲
handyadj. 手边的;方便的

“Keep your guns handy.”
猜一猜:手边的 / 远处的 / 昂贵的?

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handy/ˈhændi/adj. 在手边;方便的;灵巧的Keep your phone handy.搭配:keep sth handy 把……放在手边 · 名词:hand 手
stilladv. 仍然;还

And so far as I know, they are still waiting.
猜一猜:仍然 / 已经 / 从不?

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still/stɪl/adv. 仍然;依旧(强调动作没有结束)He is still asleep.近义:yet 还 · 反义:already 已经 · 联想:still waiting = 还在等
waitingv. 等待(现在分词)

waiting for the fox to come out ... they are waiting.
猜一猜:等待 / 逃跑 / 挖洞?

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waiting/ˈweɪtɪŋ/v. 等待;等候(wait 的现在分词)She is waiting for the bus.搭配:wait for 等…… · 联想:still waiting = 还在等待
momentn. 时刻;瞬间

“He’ll be making a dash for it any moment.”
猜一猜:时刻 / 星期 / 房间?

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moment/ˈməʊmənt/n. 片刻;瞬间;时刻Wait a moment, please.搭配:any moment 随时 · 近义:minute 一会儿
longeradv. 更久(long 的比较级)

“He won’t stay down there much longer now.”
猜一猜:更久 / 更远 / 更快?

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longer/ˈlɒŋɡə/adv./adj. 更久;更长的(long 的比较级)He can’t wait any longer.搭配:no longer 不再 · 反义:shorter 更短

拓展好词 · More Words from This Chapter

WordMeaning 释义From the text 原文
holen. 洞;洞穴“Outside the fox's hole”
gunsn. 枪(复数)“with their guns on their laps”
shoesn. 鞋(复数)“into their shoes”
rainingv. 下雨“It was beginning to rain”
satv. 坐(sit 的过去式)“They sat there by the hole”
come outv. 出来“waiting for the fox to come out”
any momentadv. 随时“He'll be making a dash for it any moment”
so far as I know据我所知“And so far as I know, they are still waiting”
09 · GRAMMAR FOCUS

语法 · 从原文句子学语法Grammar from the Story

本章的 4 个语法点都藏在课文句子里:每个点按「规则 → 原文例句 → 即时练习」三步走,最后做综合小测检验。先看 be beginning to 表「渐渐开始」,再学 must 表推测、will be + v-ing 表「随时会发生」,最后看 Keep + 宾语 + 形容词的祈使句。

be beginning to + 动词原形 · 开始渐渐……

“Beginning to” for a Slow Start

规则:be beginning to + 动词原形 表示「开始(渐渐)做某事」,强调事情刚刚开始、还在持续。It was beginning to rain(天开始下起雨来)——雨不是突然倾盆,而是一点一点下起来。was/were beginning to 是过去进行时,画面感最强。

P2It was beginning to rain. Water was trickling down the necks ...

be beginning to + 原形 = 「开始渐渐……」:天开始下雨。强调刚刚开始、还在继续。

即时练习

1It was beginning to ______ dark. (get / gets / got)
2The leaves were beginning to ______. (fall / falls / fell)
答案

1. get(天开始渐渐变暗。——beginning to + 动词原形。)
2. fall(树叶开始飘落。——beginning to + 原形 fall。)

must be + 形容词 · 肯定……(有把握的推测)

Must for a Confident Guess

规则:must + be/动词原形 表示「肯定……;一定……」,说话人对自己的推测非常有把握。“The brute must be famished,” Bunce said(那畜生肯定饿坏了)——邦斯说得斩钉截铁。必须注意的是:must 的推测再肯定,也可能是错的——这一章里,它错得正好。

P4“The brute must be famished,” Bunce said.

must + be/动词 = 「肯定……」:他肯定饿坏了。must 表有把握的推测,但也可能说错。

即时练习

1He must be ______ after the long game. (tired / tiredly / tiredness)
2They must ______ hungry. (be / is / are)
答案

1. tired(比赛那么久,他肯定累了。——must be + 形容词。)
2. be(他们肯定饿了。——must + 动词原形 be。)

will be + v-ing · 随时会发生

Will Be Doing for “Any Moment”

规则:will be + 现在分词 是将来进行时:表示「到那时正在进行」,也常用来预言「随时就会发生」。He’ll be making a dash for it any moment(他随时都会冲出来)——比 will make 更有「就要发生、一刻不停」的紧迫感。三个农夫屏住呼吸,等的就是这一下。

P5“He’ll be making a dash for it any moment.”

will be + v-ing = 将来进行时:表示「随时会发生/那时正在进行」。will be making a dash = 马上就要冲出来。

即时练习

1She’ll be ______ home this time tomorrow. (flying / fly / flew)
2We’ll be ______ dinner at eight. (having / have / had)
答案

1. flying(明天这个时候她正在飞机上。——will be + v-ing。)
2. having(八点我们正在吃晚饭。——will be having dinner。)

Keep + 宾语 + 形容词 · 让……保持……

Keep + Object + Adjective

规则:Keep + 名词 + 形容词 表示「让某物保持在某种状态」,是祈使句里最实用的一招:Keep your guns handy(把枪放在手边)、Keep the door closed(把门关好)。动词用原形开头,命令干脆,形容词补在后面说明「保持成什么样」。

P6Keep your guns handy.

Keep + 宾语 + 形容词 = 「让……保持……」:把枪放在手边。动词原形开头,命令干脆利落。

即时练习

1Keep the door ______. (closed / close / closing)
2Keep your phone ______. (handy / hand / handled)
答案

1. closed(把门关好。——keep + 宾语 + 过去分词/形容词。)
2. handy(把手机放在手边。——keep + 宾语 + 形容词 handy。)

语法小贴士:四个点合起来看:was beginning to 管「怎么把过程写慢」,must be 管「怎么把推测说满」,will be + v-ing 管「怎么让未来压到眼前」,Keep ... handy 管「怎么下最短的命令」。读这一章时留意:It was beginning to rain 是渐渐开始,must be famished 是笃定推测,will be making a dash 是随时会发生,Keep your guns handy 是一声命令——语法点全都活在等待里。

10 · QUICK QUIZ

小测验Check What You’ve Got

5 道选择题 + 1 个配对游戏。先做选择题,再做配对,看看你能得几分!

1Where did the three farmers sit?

2What did the rain do to the three men?

3What did Bunce call Mr Fox?

4What did Bean tell the men to keep handy?

5What is the last sentence of the book?

0 / 5
选择题得分
做完 5 道选择题,看看你的成绩!

配对游戏 · Match the Speaker to His Words

先点左边的角色,再点右边他说的话。

SPEAKER 说话人
WORDS 台词

还有 3 对要配对。

11 · STUDY GUIDE

学习指南Study Guide & Answer Key

这一页是你的自学地图:学习目标、学习步骤和全部答案都在这里,跟着走就能通关第十八章。

学习目标 Learning Objectives
  • 阅读策略:用上下文猜生词(laps / famished / brute / handy 等);体会「首尾呼应的开放式结尾」:等待 → 对话 → 定格,一幅画面合拢全书。
  • 语言知识:掌握 12 个核心词汇;学习 be beginning to 表「渐渐开始」、must 表有把握的推测、will be + v-ing 表「随时会发生」、Keep + 宾语 + 形容词的祈使句。
  • 写作技巧:学习首尾呼应、开放式结尾、以景衬情、语言描写、以静写动、反讽、对比、卒章显志八种手法,并完成仿写。
  • 思维表达:借助思维导图完整复述第十八章;能区分“细节—推断—评价”三类问题。
学习步骤 Suggested Steps
  • 第 1 步 · 热身(课前 10 分钟):读前热身 → 回顾第十七章「地下盛宴」 → 预测“狐狸爸爸会出来吗”;用朗读功能听读第一段(洞外守候)。
  • 第 2 步 · 精读(课中 25 分钟):用朗读功能精读原文(重点朗读第三段「博吉斯断言」、第五段「比恩预言」)→ 看人物档案 → 用思维导图梳理等待之路 → 看写作亮点讲解。
  • 第 3 步 · 巩固(课后 15 分钟):复述支架练习 → 思考题分层挑战 → 小测验 → 完成仿写。
  • 小提示:如果觉得难,先完成 L1 细节题和配对游戏;想挑战自己,试试 L3 评价题和“「还在等待」为什么是好结尾”的讨论。
参考答案 Answer Key
  • 预测题:B — 狐狸爸爸再也没出来,动物们建起地下村庄,幸福地生活。
  • 复述支架:① laps ② shoes ③ Boggis ④ Bunce ⑤ Bean ⑥ handy ⑦ out ⑧ waiting。
  • 思考题:见各题“答案”按钮;L3 开放题言之有理即可。
  • 选择题:1-A 2-A 3-A 4-A 5-A。
  • 配对:Boggis→“He won’t stay down there much longer now.”;Bunce→“The brute must be famished.”;Bean→“Keep your guns handy.”。
更多精读玩法 More Ideas
  • 声音剧场:演一演这场等待——博吉斯扬起下巴说“He won’t stay down there much longer now”,邦斯皱紧眉头嘟囔“The brute must be famished”,比恩压低声音下命令“Keep your guns handy”——体会自信、愠怒、冷静三种声音。
  • 雨的配乐:闭上眼睛听雨声——雨落在帐篷上、顺着脖子流、流进鞋里。学着达尔写一句「雨在说什么」:The rain kept saying: nothing is coming out today.(雨不停地说:今天什么都不会出来。)
  • 复述接龙:和家人或同学一起,一个说一句,下一位接下一句,用 First / Then / Next / Finally 串完第十八章。
  • 读书日志 Reading Log:每章记录 3 个新词、1 句金句、1 个问题。
  • 聊聊「等待」:三个农夫在雨里等一只不会出来的狐狸——你等过最久的东西是什么?等的时候是什么感觉?
  • 全书回顾:想一想——从第一章洞口的三声枪响,到第十八章的雨中等待,狐狸爸爸用智慧和勇气赢回了地下家园;而三个农夫,从开篇等到合上书,还在等待。这本书的书名 Fantastic Mr Fox,最后一章用一句“still waiting”点得最响。